Greetings Crewman torad, welcome to the Vast Empire.

My name is Ibram Tyrol, and I will be your operator whilst you train here at the Academy. If you have any questions at all, simply go to the message centre and type in my full name into the recipient's box, along with your queries.

To get you started, I'm now going to direct you to our wiki page, where most of the training materials are kept.

This can be found here.

To begin your training, you must first create your character. Having clicked on the link above, you can navigate to the page by clicking on Basic Training, Flight School, and then Chapter 1
(quick link:here)

Before going to Flight School, you may want to give Imperial Initiation (II) a quick read - it gives a brief introduction to life as a pilot in the star wars universe.

Once you have followed the instructions set out in Chapter 1, please post it here for marking, and we can advance you along to the next stage.

Whilst you train, I also recommend you get onto IRC (Or Instant Rely Communication). Most, if not all of the Vast Empire's active members frequent the IRC channels, so you will be able to find many a friend and mentor in this place. To get onto IRC, either follow the "JavaChat" link from the main page (It's in the left hand column) or download an IRC client (e.g. mIRC) and follow the instructions in the MainComnet forum.

Once again, on behalf of the VENA, welcome the Navy, we hope you enjoy your stay.

Operator Tyrol

You haven't even started.

Let me ask you a question, and I don't mean to sound rude.

Why are you here?

There are three chapters to Flight School, and three assignments that must be successfully completed before you take the Aviator's Exam.

why am i here?

a.freind reccomended it.
b.i love star wars!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
c.i love rpgs.
d.i havent tried forum rpgs.
and
e.all of the above.


my answer:e


is`nt tyrol the spost to be lecturing me?. jegora.

chapter one:

bio


Physical Description:
Name: Serin Torad Xale
Callsign: Torad
Race:mon Calamari
Hieght: 5`5"
Weight: 185 lbs
Eye Color: big yellow eyes
Skin Tone: Brown
Age: 38
Skills: animals, swimming, and last but most, langueges.
pet(s): a pet Reek named Glek, who lives at his familys nearby to cville.
Habbits: Water
Languages: Basic(da), Mon Calamarian(also da), Quarren, Ryl(twei`leki), Huttese, Rodese, Nautolan(my fav), Shryii'wook, High Galactic(if i can figure out what it is), Muun(not complete)

Mental Description: serin is come and shy, hates slavery, and has an affinity for Wookiees. Serin daydreams alot. He tends to want to go to mon calamari, and gets really tense when hes on
very warm planets, such as Tatooine or Mustifar, he doesn't realy like Quarrens, or Hutts and is afraid of imperial officers. Serin loves swimming. He likes comedy, and he never, ever, ever uses bad languege, but hasbeen known to say darn.

History: Serin was born and raised on Mon Calamari. from a family of four, him, his older sister, and his parents, in a town known as cville. A quarren mineing village was near buy and frequently raided cville. At age 23 he left for Coruscant where he got a job as a senate gaurd. 12 years later his beloved republic fell and the empire arised.
several years later the empire forced him to join their naval academy.


thanks to:
stormz    thanks stormz!

sorry torad, i've been busy.

You've got the basics down, but you need to expand on you're physical description, your personality, and you're history.

You also need to learn grammar, spelling, syntax, and just about everything else that makes the English language what it is.

The stuff at the end isn't really needed.

ibram?

Ibram has been very busy, Torad. I'm Sic, the Executive Officer of the Navy's Viper squadron. I suggest you rewrite your bio, using proper spelling, grammer, and etcetera. If you have spellcheck, or preferably Word, then use that please.

Let's get that done and we can move on from there. If you need anything, ask.

i`m terrible at ve....

Here Torad, check my Bio out. Take what i have done and mold it to your character. I find it easier if I have an example or two so don't be afraid to go look at other member's biographies. We don't want you to copy another's but using it as reference is perfectly acceptable.

Hehe just trying to prove my worth as the new Operator of the VENA-Staff

There are still a lot of spelling and grammatical errors. What program did you use when you wrote it?

*Edit: that looks much better Torad. The only thing I see that can be fixed is that you dont need this:

the below stats are for better understanding of serin:
streanth 10
constitutein 11
dexterity 9(10 in water)
wisdom 15
intelaganse 14
charisma 12, 14 if your a wookie or calamari, 20 if your water,
30 if your an animal, 32 if your the kind of animal hagrad likes.
well?

With that done, you can move on to Chapter 2

Torad, you put Calamari as your species, its should be Mon Calamari. Might be worth it to do research on the species.

I am sorry if I am butting in, but your bio looks much better.