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Garryll Gates
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  New Recruit September 20, 2007 7:26:32 PM    View the profile of Garryll Gates 
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Garryll Gates
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  RE: New Recruit September 20, 2007 7:35:51 PM    View the profile of Garryll Gates 
My bio:

Personality: A stoic soldier with a knack for marksmanship. Gets along well with others in the corps, but poorly with Navy or civilian personnel. Is incredibly loyal to all his officers and the corps as a whole. Does not feel disobedience should be ever attempted.

History: Born to a pair of Corellian parents, they were both killed in terrorist attacks when he was 15. During the attack, Garryll was impressed by the presicion with which the stormtrooper garrison responded and searched for the terrorists. After the garrison had found them and executed them, Garryll decided to join the Corps. He couldn't as he was still too young. He worked in the garrison as a clerk. While a clerk, a veteran soldier had taken him aside several times and shown him how to fire a blaster. He improved quickly and was soon a better shot than the man himself. Another year and he signed up for the corps.

Traits:
Excellent shot, sniper rifle, blaster, pistol; good at following orders; enthusiastic toward corps.
Cosmic
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  RE: New Recruit September 20, 2007 8:41:28 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Welcome to the Corps, Garryll.

I'm General Cosmic, Commander of Training for the Vast Empire Army.

Great start on your biography. I'd like you to add a few more things to it, however. Take a look at this biography example to see how to correctly format yours: http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/5654/

Also, I'd like to see more detail about your character - more personality, traits, a little more history, etc. Expand it a bit more. This is the creation and establishment of your character in the Vast Empire, so have fun with it!

I have also sent you some character biography details via email, so be sure to check there as well.

If you have any questions, feel free to email me ( Cosmic@vastempire.com ) or post here.

I look forward to reading your next version.
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth
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