Yes! I have posted at least. Also its a bit....Well for lack of a better word. Lackluster.

Also Delete this one, Same reason as the one below it


Sorry bright,

-Can someone delete this, i was talking shit...-

Happy Birthday Garet !!!!

Sorry for Busting in guys

/me throws cake on table and runs

Welcome back Dec

Oki, s'cuse for not being around for the last few days, weekends are always hectic for me.

I only received three reports, those of you who didn't report know who you are. For some of you, it's a second strike. One more and you risk demotion. Oh, and Dec, I love you reporting but could you please use the PM system?

In more important news, y'all have a new ASL. Everyone give a big congrats to Brightstar, who has agreed to step up and take on the role. As such, when you report weekly you'll need to send a copy to her as well.  Any problems when I'm not around, she's the one to see.

Otherwise, great work on the story so far, let's keep it rolling.

I too shall post tomorrow. I'll be home until Tuesday for the most part. Least I can do is leave you guys a present before I open mine.

Congrats Bright. Pressure's on.

Bam.

Hey Jori.
Your post is great and I appreciate the assist. The problem comes when you bring out the two things that will allow the Main enemy camp to know that we are coming. Perhaps you should try a bit harder to get V or Kami. But change your attack plan a bit.

Jori, Bright has a point. I know this story and our characters are make believe, but you need to make them act in a realistic manner. Jori as a character shouldn't openly question Kami's decisions, she's his SL and it's not his place. Nor should he wander off and directly disobey orders because he's 'bored.' Also, whilst grenades are fun, Jori using them in the story means he's creating a lot of noise and subsequently bringing a force four times larger than the VE's down on him and his squad and potentially causing the mission to fail. You see what I mean?

I know Ae has a Platoon story in the works that should be up within a week or so. This is our chance to show everyone how much Jester has grown, as well as an opportunity to work closely with the others squads in Storm.

Oh, and Bach, you have 48 hours to post on this topic or you will be permanently removed from the squad.

And last, but not least, Happy Birthday Dec *snuggles*

Sorry, why don't I just delete everything and just put "Please ignore this post.".

No Jori, Thats not what we were saying at all. Just change the tactic of your approach is all. I wasn't trying to make you feel bad or anything it was just a bit of constructive critisism.

You are welcome Dec have a good one.

Gone 'til Sunday/Monday.

Don't miss me too much.

You don't have to edit your post Jori, and you don't have to apologize. I was just pointing a few things out to you, don't take it as unnecessary criticism. All this just comes with practice.

Bach has been removed from Jester, feel free to kill him in the thread.

Reports again people, our record is up there with the best at the moment.

Jager wrote:I say we elect Maze as the new dec... and me as the new Maze, and Hunter as the new me, and Jori as the new Hunter.


All those in favor, say I

I don't get it Jager. I'm Hunter and Jori. Unless you mean another Hunter...