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Luke Damos
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  Reporting For Duty August 25, 2007 5:16:46 PM    View the profile of Luke Damos 
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  RE: Reporting For Duty August 25, 2007 5:40:53 PM    View the profile of Luke Damos 
Physical Appearance
Luke is very rugged, brown hair, slim wiry build. Brown eyes, sallow skin.

Early Years

Born in Mos Eisley, Tantooine, Luke Damos had a troubled past. Frequent run ins with the law were the main component of his life. Often drunk, he could turn violent at the slightest infringement on his personal space or thoughts. After many minor offences,Luke was arrested on the charge of robbery of the Graal Doshin' s cantina. Lucky to escape death, Luke was given a three year sentence but was released a year early after the fall of the Empire meant the prison along with the rest of the planet switched hands to the New Republic.

After the fall of the Empire, Luke decided that although he was unable to find a real job, you cannot beat the law. So he decided to join the New Republic army.However,due to his "shady"past,he was turned down. Roaming the streets of Mos Eisley he came across a man recruiting for the New Army of the Empire, also known as The Vast Empire. Knowing this was his last shot, Luke took the opportunity and signed up.

Immediately enjoying the chance to work on his social skills and acceptance of orders, Luke fitted in perfectly. And now, in training, he is looking forward to joining his squad with glee.

Emotianal Disposition

A tough,arrogant and cocky, Luke laughs in the face of death and is as rough and ready as you can get.
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  RE: Reporting For Duty August 25, 2007 6:26:27 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
It's a good start at a biogrpahy, but I'll have you look at this one for format preference: http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/5654/

Also, be sure to proofread. It looks like you have a draft here, and I want the final version. Please note grammar and punctuation. Be sure everything is correct before submitting it.

Give it another go, and I'll let you know what I think once you repost.
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  RE: Reporting For Duty August 30, 2007 3:26:49 PM    View the profile of Rike Malen 
Rike Malen reporting for duty
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  RE: Reporting For Duty August 30, 2007 7:36:10 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Howdy Rike. Check your email for your character biography details.
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