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  2nd Echelon Assignments October 22, 2006 4:28:15 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
This board is for the Academy superiors to post their instructions and assignments for their 2nd Echelon trainees.
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 16, 2007 11:37:49 AM    View the profile of Avlen Graves 

General Character Details:
Name: Avlen Graves
In Game relations: List any known relatives here, and if your
character will interact with them.
Age: 20
Race/Racial characteristics: Human

Appearance:
Height: 6.0
Weight: 175 pounds
Hair Color: Silver or blonde (Depending on light)
Eye Color: Grey
Build: Muscular and lean
Other: Vertical scar that goes down across his face

Other Character Details:
Personality: He is serious and determined when he has something that has
to be done. When it comes to turning in a report or firing his weapon, he is
always determined to do it to the best of his ability. He constantly wishes to
push for the best in himself, which oddly he also knows will never be possible.
His personal saying is, "To be at your best means reaching perfection, and that
is not a feat obtainable to anyone. " Therefore, his best is always increasing,
and he is always striving to do better to reach the place he nor anyone else
ever will.

At the same time however, he knows how to relax and stay calm. He doesn't
overreact to things, and cares deeply for those he works with. He enjoys a glass
of juma as much as the next guy. However he doesn't believe in drinking
excessively or getting drunk, the reason being that one should never have to
indulge himself so much that he can't control his own actions-it is weakness.

Raised by Mandalorians, he has a great love for battle and the honor that comes
with it. He holds strict to the rules of honor and defeat.

On the other hand, he has never been great around members of the opposite sex,
and has a tendency to be forgetful at times. Around women, he becomes very
nervous and stutters, and his forgetfulness always seems to strike at the most
annoying of times, but is overcome while his mind is in "mission mode".

He has a firm believe in working out no less then every other day, and
keeping his mind sharp. It is because of his ability to stay calm and
collected and sure of himself no matter the circumstances that lead people to
call him a "natural born leader. " He does not has as much faith in
himself as they do, but tries anyways.

Belongings:
Vibroknuckler
E-11 Blaster Rifle
GLEEN! Armor Polish
PT-212 Vibroblade
Ration Pack
Stormtrooper Armor
*More to be added as bought*

History:
Born on the city planet of Denon, Avlen was raised knowing he would one day be a
soldier. The reason for this was one that was simple to understand. At the age
of 7, Avlen was abducted by a group of Mandalorians-he later found out that many
children were abducted around this time to be used in an Operation known as
"Reborn" which a small inordinate sect of washed up Mandalorians had come up
with to renew their army and reach for the honor they once had in the galaxy.

Needless to say the plan failed, but only after Avlen had reached the age of 17,
and endured 10 years of Mandalorian training and lessons on life and honor. In
this time, his ideals of reaching for best and his ability to concentrate on
tasks began to form. It was also in this time that his love for battle and rank
and structure took hold in him, forever binding him to a life of a military man.

While under their training, he learned many lessons on war and battle, but also
received many scars and broken bones from training. He was taught in unorthodox
ways and berated for even the most simplest of mistakes with words that many
would think unspeakable. To his gain however, he learned much in self control
and fear control. He also learned much in hand to hand fighting, and blade to
blade, and gun to gun. Ten years of his life were devoted to nothing but
physical and mental training for battle.

At the age of 17, when the Mandalorian group finally disbanded at the
sudden natural death of their Mandalore, Avlen finally was able to escape and
find his way back to Denon. However, he never again found his family. So
instead, he decided to put the skills he had been taught through pain to use and
join the Vast Empire in the Stormtrooper Corps.

 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 18, 2007 2:45:07 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Johndon a human was born on Cepany in a thriving city. He was 1 in a 5 member family. His father was in the imperial army and his mother took care of his 2 brothers Aaron and Jacob also his sister Sarah. When Johndon was a boy he was very adventurous and curious. He explored forests all the time and was barely at home except when he got a chance to fill his stomach. When Johndon was a teen his house was raided by criminals. His mother and sister coward in the corner while Johndon and his brothers fight back but were overwhelmed. In the process Johndon was shot in the shoulder and presumed dead
    In the last moments of consciousness he could see his mother and sister being taken and his two brothers shot in the head execution style. When Johndon woke up he was in deep pain from the burns from blaster fire in his shoulder. His neighbor Corosan heard his screams of pain and investigated to see the house in shambles and Johnson on the floor. He took Johndon in and provided medical care to him. Johndon always replayed the death of his brothers and the kidnapping of his mom and sisters. Johnson was the first of his friends to sign up for the army to carry on his fathers name after he had died in battle. Johndon entered and was given training and past but had difficultly doing it. Johndon is now in the army and is serving the empire.


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OOC: My bad. I sent you to the wrong board, johndon.
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 18, 2007 3:36:32 PM    View the profile of johndon 
no problem
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 19, 2007 4:53:34 PM    View the profile of johndon 
where do i post it then?
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 19, 2007 6:07:10 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Your Mentor will go over your bio and inform you of the errors. You do not post another one right away - that comes a little later.
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 20, 2007 5:31:57 PM    View the profile of Leon 
Sergeant Leon

Below you will find my Biography:



Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: N/A
Eye Color: Stone Grey
Skin Color: Greenish Grey
Height: 4'5
Weight: 120 lbs
Age: 23
Full Name: Rikardi Nomrik Hataan
Physical Build: Slim / Slightly Built
Homeworld: Rodia


*Talents/Skills*

1) Due to the nature of the world he lived on Rikardi is trained in the art
of hand-to-hand combat and is trained in using basic weapons such as Blaster
Pistols and Blaster Rifles. This came through the nature of the work he
performed before being recruited by the Stormtrooper Corps.



2) Is fluent in Galactic Basic and Rodese.


*Background History*

"Where's our money?"





Those were the words that echoed throughout my childhood. Every week it was
the same; they would come in, take the money and leave, the exact system
they used every time they did this and the system they would always use in
the future. Their timing was perfect, their intimidation flawless, and the
time it took them to get the money and leave was perfect. In my eyes they
were untouchable. So why did they have to do it to us?



All my childhood my parents tried to provide for me and my brother, doing
their best to scrap together what they could to make sure we got by every
time, not caring about their own health and what they are going to eat. In
their eyes we were their world and they were ours. We struggled but as a
family we pulled through tough times, we managed to look in the face of
adversity and spit at it. We were going to pull through this and then we
would be settled for life.



My parents owned a small bakery in the town we lived in, nothing fancy but
something you could buy food from. As we lived in a tough place this was a
dream for most people as otherwise they would be fighting over scraps of
food from the gutter and killing each other for a small bit of meat. Our
business was good but this of course attracted the local crime boss, Domark
Ul-Nojig. This was where my story started to take a dark twist. I remember
for the first few weeks they would come round and ask about their special
form of protection. They would say in the future we would need it as the
gang wars were getting out of hand. The problem was they had run all the
gangs out of our town, there was no war, just mindless killing of innocent
blood.



Pretty soon there were 'mysterious' smashed windows and threats made to the
shop. They were starting to put pressure on us and then finally they came to
our shop and said that we were now under their protection and we had to pay
them 60% of all the profit we made. My father tried to say that we would
then be left with nothing but they just beat him for disobeying them. We
were now Ul-Nojig property to do what he liked with us and if we did not pay
then we would get another beating and another and another until we got the
message.



We did not question them again but just paid up all the money we had and
lived off scraps we could buy with what was left over. Every week I would
hear "Where's the money?" from them and there was not a damn thing me or my
brother could do about it. We just had to sit back and watch as this slug
bleed our family dry and watched us suffer like rats in a fire. These people
were sick and would not stop for anything, not an inch of compassion in
them. I realized that I had to do something for my parents to be able to
survive.



Me and my brother came up with a plan that would allow us to enter Domark's
'Hideout' undetected and then we could finally face the man that was causing
all the pan and suffering to not only us but to everyone in our village who
lived in fear of being beaten or killed by this man. We had laid out all the
fine details such as the amount of time we needed, what positions we had to
be in and more importantly how we were going to finally come face to face
with the man himself.



After several sleepless nights we had finally finished our plan and were
ready to execute it the following day protection day. At approximately 10am
the next morning some hired goons came round to collect the protection money
from my father who had now grown used to the exchange and had the cash ready
for them in an envelope. When the time came they flounced through the door
like they owned the shop and took a chunk of meat from the display and
started eating it. This was pure arrogance that came with knowing they could
do whatever the hell they liked. This day though they would be in for a
surprise.



While the deal went down me and my brother managed to sneak into the back of
their land cruise ship. Tucking ourselves under a scrap sheet we managed to
hide ourselves from view. They quickly came back out to their ship and took
of with both of ourselves concealed in the back. So far so good for our
plan. The next bit of our plan was to get back out of the ship without
anyone realizing. This would prove harder than we thought as the security
around the compound was tight and inside was tighter. Looking through the
creek we had made in the back we managed to see and opening and did not wait
around to shoot into the halls of the building.



>From here we slowly moved around the building, looking for any sign as to
the whereabouts of Domark. This took time and patience as everyone was tight
lipped about where he was and what exactly he was doing. The search came to
an end when a huge door was thrown open and an official looking Rodian
stepped out of a small conference type room. This must have been it we
thought. Slowly edging down the hall we were standing in we waited for
everyone to leave before we were to make our big entrance and face the man
we had been seeking for all these years. My brother went first and slowly
moved into the room but as I was about to move as well my entire body froze.
I wanted to go into that room but my body was telling me I was not going
anywhere. The more I tried to move the more worn out I got and the less I
managed to move.



Realizing I was not behind him my brother quickly spun back round to see
where I was, only to be met with a steel pipe to the back of his head. This
got my body moving, but not by me moving it, I was being carried into the
room by a guard.



We were both thrown down before the boss himself, Domark. I was finally face
to face with the man I had detested for years but not under the
circumstances I had wanted them to be under. I stared into his eyes but all
I got back was the ice coldness of his stare. I tried to keep looking but
his eyes were wearing me down, like they were trying to destroy every bit of
me. I had to look away, and my brother coming around gave the perfect
opportunity to do so. I started to walk over to my brother to see if he was
alright but before I could reach him felt the cold metal of a vibroblade
covering my throat. As the blade dug in deeper I edged back towards the spot
I was first in.



"I must applaud you for being able to sneak past my security" Domark
bellowed in a spittish way.



"Nobody has done that before and after today will ever do it again so you
hold a title that no one will ever take from you."



"SHUT UP!"



I don't know what I was doing but before I could stop myself I was screaming
out everything I had wanted to say to this man for years. For all the times
he had pushed my parents and other people around and for all the times he
had killed innocent people.



"Just shut up! I have seen you kill, hurt, destroy, bully and dictate people
for years.  Have seen families destroyed by your greed and your sick mind.
You have taken from people who have had nothing to begin with and then
laughed as they try to survive while you live in your huge mansion and eat
your grand feats. I have seen you kill innocent people because they would
not pay your 'protection' or they dared to speak out against you. I have
seen you make peoples lives a living hell for years because you can and it
is the only way you can get your kicks, from watching other people suffer.
It ends now. By these words I am speaking I will not rest until you are
burning in hell for what you have done."



Before I could end I was hit by a flood of tears and could not speak the
rest of what I wanted to say. Wiping the tears from my eyes I tried to go on
but could not stop crying. I wanted to say more, much more but it was too
much for me to handle. I looked over at my brother who did not know what to
make of it all, he was just stood there, frozen with fear.



"That was a nice little speech you made there. But I did not quite catch the
end of it, something about you wanting me to burn in hell."



Before I could say something he ushered over one of his guards who gave me a
vibrosword. I could not grip it though due to being in hysterics through
crying so I dropped it to the floor.



"Pick it up!"



The tone of his voice changed from being sarcastic to being deadly serious.
I could see the expression on his face change from a smile to a deadly
piercing stare.



"I said PICK IT UP!"



I did not need asking again so with all the strength I had I picked up the
sword and started back at him, waiting for his instructions like I was not
working for him.



"Strike me down!"

This was some sort of sick game he was playing with me, toying with me to
strike him down. I knew I would never get another chance like this again so
I aimed the sword at where I thought his heart would be and started running,
picking up all the pace I could I ran straight at him thinking I was either
going to hit him or run straight past him. I gained nearer and nearer until
I was about to reach him when he grabbed me and forced me to change
direction and it was too late to do anything about it. I had so much pace I
just carried on and ran straight into my brother who let out a small grunt
as I impaled him with the sword.



Shaking I quickly let go of the sword and stared at his panic ridden eyes,
as a small tear rolled down his check from his eye socket. This was his last
moments of living and we both knew that but were both stricken by what had
just happened. My body froze again as I saw him plunge to the floor in a
heap, the remains of my brother lying there in a pool of his own blood. This
was too much for me to handle and I started lashing out with fits of tears
and rage at anything I could find before passing out through exhausting
myself through what I had just been through.



I woke up in a cell type room with bars across a single window and just a
bed for company and a bucket for other uses. I woke up in a cold sweat,
thinking that this entire thing was a dream but before I could snap out of
it a guard came round to my cell to check on me.



"Awake now are we. You will be glad to here that after having long, hard
talks with your parents we all think it would be for the best if you worked
for us now. From now on you will have no contact with ay of your family on
the punishment of death. You are now the property of Dolmark Ul-Nojig who
has the right to do with you whatever he may wish. What you have around your
neck is an obedience collar, if you try and do anything that Dolmark does
not see you should be doing you will receive a pure shot of electricity that
will incapacitate you. Welcome to the rest of your life."



I started to shake with anger but before I could do anything I felt a sudden
surge of electricity in my body and I was all of a sudden on the floor. This
would not be the last time I would end up on the floor due to the obedience
collar I was forced to wear.



Over the next few months I was trained in the ways of working for Domark and
whenever I did something wrong I would wind up on the floor courtesy of
10,000 jolts of electricity. This was a painful period of my life as  lived
everyday in regret of what I had done and what I had left behind in my past
life. This was also painful in other ways as I would take daily beating
because I dared to enter the compound of the great Domark and I dared to say
I wanted to see him burn in hell.



This lasted until I was 23 and was able to start working proper for Domark.
I wanted to resist but I realized this would be futile as the collar would
just put me on the floor in agony.



My first job for Domark would also turn out to be my last job for Domark. I
was asked along with another person to take a small package across the
system to a location I was not to know then collect the money for it and
come back. It sounded simple enough and I prepped myself for it by going
over all the equipment I had to take which was just a pair of vibroknuckles.
After I had packed everything we loaded up the ship and headed ot into the
vast reaches of space, following our route closely so as not to be seen by
the Imperial's and be arrested.



About half-way through our journey the navi-computer of our small vessel
breaks down so we have to continue on without really knowing where we are
going but just following the course we think is the right route to take.
This was fine until we head right into an Imperial Garrison who are stopping
and checking every vehicle passing through this part of space. Apparently
there had been high activity of smugglers through there so a thorough car
search would be needed. We joined the queue of cars being searched and
quickly thought about what we were going to do. At the time there seemed
like no othe choice but to run for it and hope to get a big enough head
start that we could lose them in another planets orbit.



Just as we were about to pull up for our ship to be searched we hit the
boost button and darted off to the right where the least number of Imperial
troops were waiting. This seemed to work well as we managed to gain a
sizable advantage on them and as we looked back they were just specs in our
mirrors. We thought we had out run them when all of a sudden in front of us
a large group of Stromtroopers were waiting with their rifles aimed directly
at our ship. Having no other choice we disengaged our engines and proceeded
to climb out of our ship and onto theirs. Trying to work a cover story about
having a previos record and not wanting to be caught a second time they were
not falling for it and then it happened. They found the package.



It was at this point that they arrested us on the spot and placed us in
custody. Somehow they managed to find out that we were working for Domark so
they proceeded to drive us back to his compound and talk with him about what
has happened. Looking worried Domark realized that he could get multiple
life sentences for this so bairgained with commanding officer that if they
let him go then the Stormtrooper Corps would have two new recruits.



So here I am under new owners and I still have a promise to keep to myself
and my brother, to kill Domark Ul-Nojig.





Thanks



Private Rikardi Hataan

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I had to post it for him due to some errors that occured on his computer.



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And so we go.
I am the one...The one who made the 100,000 post.
Football is the best sport ever, and no one can change the way I feel about it.
[This message has been edited by Leon (edited March 20, 2007 5:32:35 PM)]
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 22, 2007 5:14:27 AM    View the profile of KW 
Nice bio.
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 23, 2007 12:00:27 AM    View the profile of KW 
[This message has been edited by KW (edited March 23, 2007 6:05:11 AM)]
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 23, 2007 6:29:42 AM    View the profile of KW 
Sorry about the double post but what I had posted for my bio I took off because I stayed up all night and made some changes. Its still a work in progress but let me know what you think and feel free to give sudjestions.


KW awoke to the bright lights that burned into his skin from above. He closed his eyes and tried to block out the light as best he could. His head was still pounding as he blindly reached infront of him to the tabel and grabbed a ciggarette off it with his thumb and index fingers. He leaned back and lit his ciggarette.

His head started to feel a little lighter now. It seemed like it was the only thing to look forward to anymore, since he'd been committed anyway. He tried once more to open his eyes. The bright white walls didn't help much. KW looked around the empty room, all except for the pealing white paint and wobbly tabel. To his front was a twelve foot wide seven foot tall mirror. KW knew that it wasn't just for him to look at himself. He streached his right leg across the floor and leaned against his left knee which he had brought up to his chest. He took another drag of his ciggarette and let out a breath of smoke along with a depressed sigh.

"Couldn't even give me the good ones.", he sighed.

The silence once more engulfed the room as KW gave a blank stare to himself in the mirror. He tried to remember what had happened yesterday, or any day for that matter. He wasn't sure how long he had been there, or where exactly there was.

By now, KW had stopped smoking the bland ciggarette and instead began rolling it back and forth methodically between his index and middle fingers as the smoke drifted into the air. KW stopped abrutly as the sound of footsteps echoed in his ears. He shook his head lightly and tried to get it out of his head. A few seconds later the footsteps had stopped but now he begun to hear the loud rusted sound of gears moving from their place. KW watched from across the room as the wall started to open and take the shape of a door.

I don't remember a door there.. KW thought to himself.

The rusted creaks and cracking sounds had finally come to an end. Shortly after a man walked inside the room. His long white lab coat covered almost everything on him but his black shoes and it made KW feel a little uneasy. A clipboard cupped in his left arm and a pen held in his right he slowly approached KW.

"So who are you?", KW inquired.

The man almost fell backwards when KW broke the silence of the room with his words. KW didn't understand why the guy was so afraid of him.

"Ugh MR. K..", the man began, but KW was too busy getting himself up off the floor to listen.

A disgruntled moan came from KW's throat as he streached and seemingly cracked his bones back into their respective places. He placed the ciggarette back into his mouth and started to smoke it again. It had been a few moments before KW realized that the man was still standing there.

"Now what was it you want?", KW asked.

"Ugh, your.. your free to leave." and almost as quickly as he said those words he had left the room.

KW didn't fully understand what the man said. He didn't even fully understand where he was.

"Free to leave?", KW said in bewilderment.


 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 23, 2007 1:23:17 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Good. You can keep updating your bio if you want, but keep it someplace in like MS Word or any other text editor that you have. All troopers will be required to remake a final draft of their biography in 4th Echelon and use that to compare the work that they did in 2nd Echelon.
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 24, 2007 4:03:03 AM    View the profile of KW 
wait so does that mean that I completed the second Echelon? I thought I had to make the full Bio?

Its suposed to be much longer than that!
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 24, 2007 11:41:04 AM    View the profile of Cosmic 
If 2nd Echelon, you make your initial bio to get a taste of how we write. In 4th Echelon, you revise your original bio and create a better, longer one.
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 24, 2007 12:55:44 AM    View the profile of KW 
So should I check in at the third Echelon?
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 24, 2007 3:20:11 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Check your email.
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 28, 2007 4:32:18 PM    View the profile of Lain 
Hair colour: Red
Eye colour: Blue
Height: 5'8
Weight: 65kg
Age: 18
Full Name: Lain Yak'ura
Homeworld: Ciutric

History:

Lain grew up in a wealthy household. She'd always been told her parents were merchants, but from an early age she had suspected there was something more sinister to their wealth. Around the age of twelve, she had begun to shun the trappings of a well off family, favouring plain clothes and only owning the bare minimum for survival. She treated the servants like real people, and they had always respected her for that. They often took time out of their busy day to spend time with her.

Excelling at all of her school endeavours, and being from a wealthy family, had made Lain a target for less apt and less fortunate students. She quickly learned to defend herself, getting into many physical fights. It enraged her that she was never the one punished, probably because of her family's status. By her sixteenth birthday she couldn't wait to get out of the family home and make her own way in the world, but her father would not lose his only daughter. He pressured her to take over the family business. Finally she found out the truth behind her father's success.

Lain had no intention of becoming a criminal like her parents. She used every excuse she could think of to prolong her freedom from being tutored in the tricks of their trade. When it became too difficult to keep her parents off her back, she searched for a way off her home planet, believing it to be the only way to escape them. She stumbled across a mobile Imperial recruiting station and without a second thought signed up for the army. She convinced herself that there she could make a difference, and rid the galaxy of scum like the family she no longer wanted to be a part of.

 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 28, 2007 8:20:42 PM    View the profile of Cosmic 
Pretty.
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 29, 2007 6:23:24 AM    View the profile of Luckystar 
agreed
 
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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments March 30, 2007 7:00:06 PM    View the profile of Ceridiwen 
Physical Appearance

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Red
Eye Color: Brown
Skin Color: White
Height: 5-8
Weight: 143 pounds
Age: 20
Full Name: Justin "Ceridiwen" Price
Physical Build: Very well built, but a little short
Home world: Palanhi


Talents/Skills

1) Very fast
    1A) Ran from tusken raiders (while they were riding banthas) for fun as a kid
2) Very good with a rifle with a scope.


Background History

Justin Price grew up on the planet of Palanhi right outside the city of Portantu.  His family was very poor. He lived with his father and 2 sisters.  Justin's dad was a farmer but the planet was so overrun with farmers they only made minimum money.  Everyday he used to help his dad harvest crops and when his work was done for the day he would go out and try to out run the tusken raiders while they chased him on banthas.  Justin quickly became very fast and was able to out run anything on foot.

When he started getting older and going into the city to sell things that his dad had harvested he started to meet new people.  He met another boy one day who was there to do the very same thing he was.  The boys name was Horto and they quickly became best friends.  They would race everyday to see who could get the chores done first...of course Justin won...but it was still all about fun.  Justin started entering competitions in Portantu for running and almost took every competition.  Somehow Horto came up with the nickname Ceridiwen (means fast boy in the old language of the planet before it became so civilized).

One day while Justin was out doing his runs the farm was raided by a bunch of Imperial troops.  He got back to the farm with Horto while they were still raiding.  Horto quickly ran up and tried to kill one of the troopers and he was killed on sight.  Justin tried to run away and he was captured and detained by the stormtroopers.

He spent the next 5 years of his life watching the Stormtrooper Army and everything they did.  He became fascinated and quickly forgot about the brutal death they had delivered to his family and his best and only friend.  When he was 18 and released from their custody he left as he wasn't sure yet if he wanted to be a part of the terrible force that destroyed his family.

Two years later, Justin returned and enlisted in the Stormtrooper Army under the alias of Ceridiwen.

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  RE: 2nd Echelon Assignments August 22, 2007 4:04:11 PM    View the profile of Battlesix 
Personality

He would be described as a regular average Joe. Easily tempered by stupidity and disobedience. If you are on his good side, consider yourself lucky. But if you cross him on the wrong side of the tracks, then I'd suggest not being caught near him for a while. Apologies mean a lot to him, considering that all who oppose him usually get a black eye. Entering his neck of the woods is like looking into a fortune cookie that explains every dark and bright thought you have ever had. He like his opinion to be heard, and if you tell him to shut up, you will never get him in a good mood for a long while.

History

Born on Tatooine. All his life, he lived in the attic of a cantina owned by his uncle, Murry Six. He worked by serving drinks illegally, and in return, he got free ale. His uncle dismissed the fact that he was a child alcoholic, because he needed the work. It wasn't like anybody important ever stopped by. At the age of 17, he moved out and became a duelist in the local arena. It wasn't just any duel ring, it was a fight-to-the-death type duel ring. You may speculate as to how this ever happened, but he lived in the lowest, cheapest part in the whole city. In the beginning, he won quite a few matches in the amateur rank. After a while, though, they put him against a deadly ex-mercenary. He barely made it out with his life, but he did.

The fights were at night, in the basement of a talent cantina, where they played live shows of topless girls. The men who drank there would get over-intoxicated and jumble downstairs to watch two men beat each other down with swords or guns. He had witnessed many fights as a child, bounties and drunk killings. But now, after little experience at the young age of 18, he would be facing of against a 43 year old veteran. The rules were simple; first to die loses. The mercenary used a standard type vibro blade. Battlesix was using his fists.

This enraged man ran at him slicing, but Battlesix was smarter than that. Just as the mercenary closed in, he slid sideways and kicked the hand the sword was in. But it didn't work. The man swung and caught him across the face, on the right cheek. Then a fatal blow to the gut, left Battlesix choking on blood in the centre of the arena. A savage yell came from the audience, "Finish him! Kill him! Chop his little head off!". And with that, Battle waited. At just the right moment, he rolled out of the way and kicked the veteran in the temple, and again in the teeth. After that, he just blacked out and the last thing he remembered was the violent scream coming from the man. "No! Please...", and that was it.

He woke up in the attic of his uncle's cantina for the last time. He looked in the mirror and saw the long cut running from his dimples to his ear. It looked cool. He realised that this would be the last fight before he became a man. He told his aging uncle that he was enlisting in the Vast Empire to become a Stormtrooper, and would probably be back in something like 20 years. Hopefully when he gets there, he will become a man.

Traits

Sword fighting, extra strength (more than a normal person), heavy drinker, not affected by temperature, his scary past made him not afraid of anything, well, mostly anything. Good at telling a lie.
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