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Denethor
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  Kaph Story Notes
May 24, 2005 9:24:10 AM    View the profile of Denethor 
This is the thread to discuss the story with the other members of Kaph. You may coordinate posts in here, ask people about their posts and clarify the purpose of your own posts.


One note: I want a minimum of 150 words in each post.

Another note: Earth, there are 12 fighters in 1 squadron, and I stated in the first post that there were 2 squadrons, so that would be a maximum of 24 fighters, make it around 20 fighters in your post please.
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[This message has been edited by Denethor (edited May 24, 2005 8:15:09 PM)]
Willtconq
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 24, 2005 11:17:01 PM    View the profile of Willtconq 
and you guys, the stories that you post are supposed to be about yourselves. You may occationally include someone else, or unless youre doing something together with someone else, or you're writing about an NPC, but other than those times, it's supposed to be about yourselves only. posts like Earthjedi's sounded as if I was writing them, and he was copy and then posting them. so please take these into consideration when you're writing.

also please do not double post, if you want to write some more, but no one has posted yet since your last post, please just edit the previouse post and add to it.

Earth, i dont mean to get on your case, but you're spelling my name wrong, it's Willtconq, not Wiltconq, you left out a "l".

Den what kind of Ties are we in? regular ones, or interceptors?

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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 24, 2005 11:46:24 PM    View the profile of Denethor 
They don't have to be just about yourselves, you can include parts of the story from other people's point of view, but you need to include your own point of view in the majority of it.

And Will, for the purpse of this story, with us having to take out the two squadrons, we'll be in Interceptors, or if your character owns a TIE of better ability, use that, I'll personally be using my Phantom.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 24, 2005 11:52:55 PM    View the profile of Willtconq 
awsome! i'll use my avenger, then switch over to my Infinitive Hawkbat , i'll find a reason to get back on the Punisher to change crafts.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 24, 2005 11:59:07 PM    View the profile of Denethor 
Sounds good. Just uh, don't destroy the Avenger...
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 25, 2005 12:09:03 AM    View the profile of Willtconq 
i wont, it's still my fighter after all, i would be out of my minds to destroy it in order to get my hands on another.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 25, 2005 6:13:56 AM    View the profile of Earthjedi01 
ok and Willtcong sorry about spelling your name wrong and ill edit it to fix your name
(this was my first story net)
ill keep in mind what you said.
i did'nt know that i was supost to write mostly my self.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 25, 2005 8:45:19 AM    View the profile of Willtconq 
We both, as in Den and I, understand that it's your and almost everyone else in Kaph's first story, so we'll let it pass as long as you fix the things that we ask you to.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 25, 2005 8:56:37 AM    View the profile of Denethor 
We're just giving polite suggestions
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 25, 2005 3:27:47 PM    View the profile of Earthjedi01 
ill fix it, i want to try to get the flight leader job. (plus, i'm not very god at writeing about myself).
For our craft do we need to own it in the imperial market?
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 25, 2005 11:07:27 PM    View the profile of Denethor 
You need it to be in the possession of your VE character, and it needs to be a TIE.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 25, 2005 11:17:08 PM    View the profile of Japheth 
I'll note that everyone is issued a ship as a member of a squadron, you may chose to fly something else that you personally own in most situations.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 25, 2005 11:54:26 PM    View the profile of Denethor 
And I'm just asking that they be TIEs, just so we can keep some semblance of unity as a squadron, at least in this mission.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 26, 2005 1:07:08 AM    View the profile of Willtconq 
Earth, if you're having problems writing about what you're supposed to be writing about, read some of other people's stories, for example, the Nazgul stories, Chapter8 Naval sections, our Wing story. spend some time and read through them.

When i joined, i spent more than a month reading previous story posts just to get the idea on how i'm supposed to write mine. others even asked me to participate in chp8, but i stayed out of it until i was sure i knew what i was supposed to do/write.
 
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May 26, 2005 7:05:37 PM    View the profile of Shazam 
Thats extremely good advice Will.  Try not to get all your dramatics in one post, btw, Earth.  Spread your thoughts out and allow them to seem seperate, and if you can, imagine in your head what your writing, it'll help you write more fluently and with more detail. 
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 26, 2005 10:44:03 PM    View the profile of Willtconq 
Thnx, Sir.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 27, 2005 10:35:02 AM    View the profile of Earthjedi01 
how long will we continue to have the compitition for Flight 3's Leader?
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 27, 2005 10:52:15 AM    View the profile of Denethor 
It's for the duration of the story, I want to see who is the most active, who is the most compitent, and who shows leadership skills.
Right now I haven't seen it to say who's got the better chance.


Oh and I'm going to change the minimum amount of words per post to 250, they are way too short.
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 27, 2005 5:31:15 PM    View the profile of Edor Taan 
How have my posts been so far?  Like EJ, I'm trying to take control of Three Flight.  I hope that I am doing well.
 
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Pretty. What do we blow up first?
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 27, 2005 7:56:42 PM    View the profile of Earthjedi01 
I put a picture on it (the pic really looks like this fight)
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 27, 2005 10:55:54 PM    View the profile of Denethor 
Ok, the story is getting ridiculously out of hand. It was never my intention for the group that was masquerading as our forces to be associated with the Republic, and there is no way in any universe that our squadron of 11 fighter, mostly green I might add, would be able to go up against 24 X-Wing, 24 A-Wings, 9 Y-Wings, 12 B-Wings, & 9 E-Wings! That's 78 fighters!! AND capitol ships! Are you insane?! You have to keep stories realistic. We're supposed to at least be able to win the battles we're put in. Also, Earth, you got us into the fighting WAY too quickly. In your third post you already had the Corellian corvette being attacked and captured. I'm sorry, but a.) that was done way too easily, and b.) it was way too quick. Give the people that are in the enemy TIEs a little more of a chance, they are, or at least are supposed to be, also Imperial trained pilots, it's not going to be as easy as swatting a fly.

So.... what I am going to do is request that the posts be deleted, and I will post a follow up post to my original and we will work from there. And we will also use this thread to coordinate our posts, and ALSO we will use IRC as a place to coordinate. mIRC is free, and it will continue working after the 30 day trial period is over, so go to www.mirc.com and download it. I want you all to be on there.

I'm going to be completely honest with both Earthjedi and Edor Taan: the ridiculousness of the story right now is not encouraging me to choose either of you for the FL position, and unless you can prove yourself once we start over, I'll just have to either give it to someone else, or leave the position open until someone does prove themself.

Oh and another thing, please use spell check. Write your post in Word and use spell check, then copy and paste it onto the ComNet, there will be some editing that you have to do once it's posted because the information doesn't transfer correctly, but it's worth it for everyone else to both know that you're actually writing, and not have them be annoyed by extremely bad spelling. Plus, it makes you look like a better writer if you're actually spelling everything correctly.
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 1:56:20 PM    View the profile of Edor Taan 
Sorry, sir. I was just trying to make a bad plot and storyline better and not completely changing it. EJ01 was the one who caused it to go out of conyrol, and I will admit, mabye I didn't try to fix it hard enough.  I just hope you will give me another shot.  I am not the one who screwed it up, though. 
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 1:57:32 PM    View the profile of Denethor 
So you're saying that my plot and storyline are bad?

This isn't helping you in my decision for a FL...
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 2:08:53 PM    View the profile of Willtconq 
no, Den i'm not sure that's what he meant...

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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 2:30:13 PM    View the profile of Earthjedi01 
i admit i did screw it up.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 4:14:59 PM    View the profile of Willtconq 
then let's hope that you wont do it again.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 4:56:24 PM    View the profile of Edor Taan 
I am not talking about you, Denethor. I am speaking to somebody.  You know who you are, and I will again say I am sorry for not making a better story.  Mabye you could give us an outline of what you had in mind, and let Kaph squadron and its pilots jazz it up and make a story out of it, Denethor.
No disrespect to anyone, though.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 5:24:52 PM    View the profile of Earthjedi01 
he was talking to me when he said Bad Story and Plot,
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 8:00:20 PM    View the profile of Edor Taan 
EJ01,
I am sorry I said that. I hope it didn't hurt you any. You have plenty of knowledge about the Star Wars Universe, and would be a fine FL in Kaph, and have the necessary enthusiasm, but just try to be more realistic.  I mean, where would an MC-80 Cruiser come from just like that?  Just know what you are talking about and make sure you clear things up with Lt. Denethor.
 
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  RE: Kaph Story Notes
May 28, 2005 10:14:18 PM    View the profile of Willtconq 
that's only part of the problem, He needs to be a lot more descriptive about his posts. for example, the post where the first MC-80 caught fire should be way longer than the length it is. and we're talking about at least 1-2 normal pages of story before it gets destroyed, not just 10-20 lines. Also, Earth, battles between fighters need to be wrriten out, that's where all the actions are, not just something like this: (after 15 min. of battle between the 2 sides). I asked you guys to go and read some posts done by people before, but it seems to me that obviously Earth didn't bother to do so. Edor's posts however are coming out with more detail. So, earth, please go and read some. Dont make me order you to, You should all see that me and Den are trying you make you guys better writers.
 
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