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Status: Offline |  RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 19, 2005 2:26:23 PM  | |
Led Zeppelin is not a guy, it's a band.
Please try to get posting on the story guys. -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 19, 2005 6:42:34 PM | |
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 19, 2005 10:27:03 PM | |
Page three on story notes. Awesome! Also, I understand your pain Jack. Good luck with that. -----------------------
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Darius
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 19, 2005 10:34:34 PM | |
DJ, you're doing a great job, and I don't really feel that I have the authority to give you suggestions, but, try you space out your conversation into a separate paragraphs for every person. Be more specific who's talking and it'll be less confusing. Keep up the excellent work. -----------------------
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Jaden
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 20, 2005 3:07:10 PM | |
Yes, I second that one right there Pale one. DJ, you are doing very well lately with your grammar, just keep it up man. Go get some more SW books, or any books for that one, and go read them. Study the way that people right, and make sure you describe things more.
Keep the story going guys. If you have any questions, e-mail me or Shazam, because we practically thought up the storyline. Along with Jack.
As I said, keep going. Good job  -----------------------
Jaden Khaar
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 20, 2005 5:37:08 PM | |
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 22, 2005 1:32:46 PM | |
I don't like the cloaking shield idea. We are in pre-Thrawn era and it was Thrawn who incorporated it into the Star Destroyers when he the Emperor's secret cloning facility. Plus, the way they described it in the book, you can't see your enemies when activated. I read both Thrawn book series and am a little bit of an expert on them. So if we could try to scrap it, it would work better with the time era we are in, storywise. -----------------------
Feed a womp rat a food ration, he'll want an energy stim. Give him an energy stim, and he'll rip your throat out.
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 22, 2005 1:35:20 PM | |
... I like this guy. Heh. Well, we're not so much Pre-Thrawn anymore. He's risen to power right about now. You're right about being blind, though. You're basically working off of visual. Also, the technology is still mainly lost. *tries to hide the fact that the Shadow has a cloaking shield onboard*. -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 22, 2005 2:39:19 PM | |
I'm not scrapping the idea, and I don't want to mess up the story. Just keep posting and work with it. We should be done soon anyways. -----------------------
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Darius
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 23, 2005 9:51:21 PM | |
I think I can fix the little technical problem. I'll work it into the debriefing. It'll work out fine and I'll incorporate even more know I know about cloaking and camflage technology from another book I've read. So I've killed off the 4 Sticks in a post, so all we need to do and get the Vatigan and other stuff and you (Jaden) and Shazam have planned. It's going to work. -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 25, 2005 3:19:23 PM | |
Ahh, Thank ye Dar. You're the man. -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 25, 2005 5:10:52 PM | |
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 25, 2005 5:53:11 PM | |
Okay, now that I've thought about it, I actually have a problem with you guys ending the story so suddenly. We didn't do anything... We moved the story far to quickly just there and I'm going to have to say I'm not satisfied. I'll be posting something that is totally off of what you guys had, so atleast I can keep posting. Please don't do that again Jaden. And Dar, you kind of killed off a veteran squadron like it was nothing, if your going to do that, incorporate what they have and the surroundings. Did you mention shields at all or didn't they have any? I'm just saying this now guys, don't post like you have to... Post for fun and if you do that, the story will be fine. Be creative, don't rush. -----------------------
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Status: Offline |  RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 25, 2005 6:21:45 PM | |
Well guys i think its a very good idea to go kwikly, but the bombers arnt very organized. They need a base or somthing on the planet. Well its just an idea
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 25, 2005 10:53:57 PM | |
I'm disapointed with how I killed off the 4 sticks myself, it was stupid on my part. But, the one big veteran got killed and DJ and Jaden tried to fire at him with his "cloaking shield" on. Yes, I must say again, I'm disapointed with myself. That was a mediocre post that I should have re-written. Should've included your tactics in killing them and not just Art and mine.  -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 26, 2005 3:05:28 PM | |
I'll go ahead and fix my post, but it is going to be a drag. I don't really feel like us fixing everything and keeping the whole story going. It was a good mission, but we need to move on to other things. Probably go ahead and do a Kaph and Nazgul story or something. -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 26, 2005 3:08:07 PM | |
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 26, 2005 5:53:08 PM | |
We'll see what happens. -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 27, 2005 5:41:36 PM | |
Guys, don't worry about it, just get ready for a vacation story... -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 27, 2005 8:56:07 PM | |
Ok, yeah, I like the vacation story idea and I am sorry I haven't really been posting very much but I feel weird posting on stories you guys have worked hard on. Would you mind if I joined you guys on the new story? I think it sounds like it would be really fun to do. ^.^ -----------------------
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Status: Offline | | RE: Nazgul Squadron Story Notes | April 28, 2005 12:58:14 AM | |
That would be fine. Just look out for the Vacation Story thread around here on the story board. Remember, you should look around on the internet, or go watch some more starwars movies to study up on how a tie fighter actually moves and does all of it's things. And when you get the time, try and get your =A=, thats the aviators exam, done. It shouldn't be that hard, and if you have any questions, I'll be on MSN.
See you around -----------------------
Jaden Khaar
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