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Trykon
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  VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 1, 2012 4:06:59 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
This thread is reserved for discussion of the upcoming all-Navy story, Out of the Invisible.
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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 1, 2012 4:11:01 PM    View the profile of DeepSix 
/me decides to help Trykon kick, punch, slap and scratch the story into gear

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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 1, 2012 4:14:35 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
/me is very excited.

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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 1, 2012 4:33:18 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
Okay, folks: we're off.  Drac regrets not being able to start this one himself, but RL comes first, even for members of the NHC.

Go ahead and read the first post of the story, and you'll notice that there isn't much in the way of action just yet.  That's intentional: this mission is still very much under the CNW's command.  Drac'll be back shortly, with more details about what we're facing, and what we have in store for them (from what I know, the word "epic" springs to mind).

I can announce some things here, though, that should get y'all even more excited...

This story will be the first Navy-wide Competition that we've run in a long time.

In addition to the regular shinies and promotions rewarding activity, at the conclusion of this tale several Awards will be given out to honor those whose contributions are particularly special:

Statistic-based awards:
Highest total word count
Highest number of posts
Highest average word count (must have contributed more than 5 posts)

Quality-based awards, to be determined by the NHC (recommendations from other members will be sought, but final decision will rest with the NHC):
MVP, command officers - honoring outstanding performance overall by the command-level officer deemed "most valuable player" over the course of the story
MVP, enlisted personnel & noncommissioned officers - honoring outstanding performance overall by the non-command-level VEN member deemed "most valuable player" over the course of the story
Best Rookie - honoring the most promising new member to join the VEN during the story's run
Best Post, dramatic - honoring outstanding performance in character development
Best Post, comedic - honoring outstanding comedic writing
Best Post, action - honoring outstanding combat writing
Best Post from an NPC perspective - honoring outstanding performance in developing a non-player character
Most Improved - honoring outstanding progress as a writer over the course of the story

Practice your acceptance speeches now, if you want, but post early and often and well if you want to be able to thank the little people who made your win possible.

The competition will be especially fierce for you TIE pilots: with the recent shake-up of the Starfighter Corps, you've all been consolidated into one squadron - Tuk'ata - and leadership positions are up for grabs.  For the duration of the story, you're going to be flying under an NPC SCO, but the top two pilots during the story (both in terms of IC posting and OOC attitude and coordination with others) will be offered the chance to lead.  If membership increases, the possibility of reopening Nightshrike exists, and that brings with it two more leadership positions.

For now, establish your relationships with a little Character Development, and feel free to speculate about the recent movements of VEN assets around Vectra.  The battle for Abrae itself will begin soon, and then nothing will be the same.
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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 1, 2012 5:20:02 PM    View the profile of DeepSix 
Because I was asked earlier - everyone can start posting anytime. If there are no current orders then just take the opportunity to introduce your character, his past and present exploits, his plans for the future, his relationship with other NPCs or even other PCs, his personality traits based on various occasions and so on and so forth. The possibilities truly are nigh endless at this point. Just one thing to keep in mind - this being a blown surprise attack the squadrons will be kept handy. Not necessarily fully informed - in case there are moles monitoring such things - but handy nonetheless. Thus a couple of restrictions: don't post just arriving on Abrae from wherever you may have been and don't post being in some remote location doing whatever else.

For simplicity and realism's sakes all SFC members will be stationed aboard their respective ships. As the only PC squadron at the moment is Tuk'ata that means the big badass "Atrus" for them. I will try to introduce the NPC SCO tomorrow when I make my first post, but I think you should know that he/she would not keep you all together and on standby. That's so as not to cramp your individual styles. Thus if you want to start the story alone you're free to do so. If you coordinate OOC and want to start it as a group, by all means do that too. If you want to start it in your own bunks go for it, if you want to start it in the mess hall that's an option as well, the simulators are another, training halls yet one more, rest room also a valid one...

It's a big ship so there are a whole bunch of places you can begin. One note though - try not to use an infirmary or a brig or some other location that you wouldn't realistically have an easy time getting out of, even in a crisis situation. This is the military after all...

Hmm, what else? Oh right, the Tuk'ata current story shall remain active for a bit longer as well so feel free to continue posting there as well. Note however that the fleet story should be given priority. Tryk already mentioned the leadership positions being up for grabs - personally I will nominate members based on 4 criteria: IC activity (as in not just lurking around the IRC for instance), IC quality (because posting a lot doesn't necessarily mean anything), OOC attitude (basically whether or not the member would be liked, respected or dreaded by his/hers colleagues) and OOC innovation (this one's a tad vague, but I mostly refer to ideas, plans and coordination efforts).

All that being said and done, go out there and make this story as epic as it was thought out. Good luck!

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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 2, 2012 2:30:33 AM    View the profile of Hades 
I will be posting in a few hours. Right back from leave an onto more work /me grumbles

Just kidding, I am extremely excited to get a post up on the story. Watch this.. rather, that space.

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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 2, 2012 5:54:40 AM    View the profile of Ryuno 
Also what are the chances I could have an NPC to kill when the proverbial excrement makes contact with the oscillating air circulation device?
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March 2, 2012 7:19:42 AM    View the profile of DeepSix 
Friendly NPC? Hostile NPC? RP his death from his POV? Shoot him down in the upcoming battle? Kill him off up close and personal? Something more exotic?

It's likely doable so long as it's realistic and you're not pushing the realm of realism and fairness...

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March 2, 2012 7:56:54 AM    View the profile of Ryuno 
/me shrugs.

Was planning on vaporizing a friendly NPC for the "Holy crap" factor it would give my character. You know, putting into perspective just how quickly people die, for motivation and whatnot. And I probably would RP the death from said NPC's point of view, yes. Always more fun that way.
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March 2, 2012 9:14:18 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
I have posted!  Just a quiet intro, where my character continues to worry being an XO of the Halycon Warrior.  Yes, I've done that before, but I've decided that this is the battle where Zail finally gets some fraking self-confidence and ceases to doubt so much!

So, basically, I'm aiming for character development in this story!

Also, I only noticed after I'd posted, but I made the assumption that the meeting with Drac, Trick, Stormz and Denethor took place on the Atrus.  Is that right, or are they meeting down on Abrae?
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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 2, 2012 9:36:01 AM    View the profile of Ryuno 
I assumed they were on the Atrus, too.
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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 2, 2012 1:58:43 PM    View the profile of Trykon 
You caught me!  I left it vague purposefully, because I wasn't sure myself.  Since the consensus is Atrus, then on the Atrus it is!    Keep up the posting, guys! 
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March 2, 2012 11:49:54 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
I've got my third post of the day already to go, but I can't post it because of the double posting rule.

So one of you guys can post, so I can post this.

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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 3, 2012 12:20:47 AM    View the profile of Ryuno 
I plan on following Scral in posting, as he, currently, is the most relevant to what my character is doing <_<
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March 3, 2012 12:04:22 AM    View the profile of Drac 
Looking good so far, guys!

I'll be posting later on this evening with any luck, and it'll contain a lot more info and maybe even get the action going.

One teaser I'll give you...Belgaroth was one of the biggest battles we've ever had with 4 ImpStar Deuces and other capital ships involved. This one will be at least three times but up to an order of magnitude bigger. Enjoy!

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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 3, 2012 12:21:15 AM    View the profile of Ryuno 
I just remembered ...

I think I have somewhere I have to be.

/me scurries into the shadows to avoid the coming carnage.
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March 3, 2012 12:38:08 AM    View the profile of Echelon 
Drac wrote:This one will be at least three times but up to an order of magnitude [u]bigger[/u].

Drac...I love you...

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March 3, 2012 1:18:46 PM    View the profile of Drac 
lol. The biggest difference between RL and the VE: Commanders get thanked for multiplying the number of enemies their soldiers face. I kinda like it.

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March 3, 2012 2:51:30 PM    View the profile of DeepSix 
More enemies means more kills. That's nice

Then again more enemies also means more casualties. (/me glances at Echelon) That's nicer

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March 5, 2012 1:24:33 AM    View the profile of Hades 
Post is up.. not too good on my part. The scenario is modeled on a scene from FMJ

Morale of the story is that your Zygerrian SC is not going to be liked, Deep, and Hades will be making her life harder in subtle ways.. like.. emptying her toothpaste down the drain and then putting it back, or putting soap on her toothbrush.

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March 5, 2012 1:47:10 AM    View the profile of Maroy 
I should have a post up by tomorrow night. Maroy's not going to like the new SC much, but she probably won't directly retaliate. Feel free to convince her otherwise, though
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March 5, 2012 2:20:09 AM    View the profile of Ryuno 
I can certainly have fun with this, Hades, thank you. Look out for a post from me, soon.
I'm told that my mind is a restless nomad with goldfish characteristics.

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March 5, 2012 3:49:36 AM    View the profile of Hades 
Drac's post is up.. and damn, Drac you've just earned several awesome points in my book

To the people of Tuk'ata: I recommend finishing up your encounter in the barracks (in the beginning of your post) before skipping several hours ahead - probably around 18 - and try to post something about the enemy forces in-system.. of course, you're welcome to discount the barracks encounter entirely and skip to the action... but it would take a toll on your word-count. Or you could ignore me completely, since I can't really order anyone around.

Now let's get out there and kill something!

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March 5, 2012 1:19:29 PM    View the profile of DeepSix 
Hades, what did i teach you about shoving your head in a rancor's mouth? You're supposed to have someone else do it - just in case the rancor forgets its training or gets tired and/or hungry. Same principle applies with the SC.
Quote:Now let's get out there and kill something!
But it's dark and scary out there... What if some enemy fighter ruins my awesome paint job? Who'll pay for it then huh? I mean other than Echelon that is. As a damage control person he needs to pay for everything that gets damaged - out of his own pocket

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March 5, 2012 1:34:26 PM    View the profile of Echelon 
Pocket? What pocket?

Oh that's right. I had to sell it to pay for the Fearless.

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March 5, 2012 8:42:10 PM    View the profile of Hades 
My post is up

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March 5, 2012 8:56:40 PM    View the profile of Maroy 
Hate to contradict you, Hades, but I established that argument as happening directly before heading to the hangar (cutting down on the repercussions, and streamlining the in-story timeline a bit). Other than that, the post looks good. I don't think removing the 18 hours line should make too much of a difference.
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March 5, 2012 9:01:34 PM    View the profile of Hades 
Yeah, just noticed that myself. Changed it from 18 hours to 10 minutes :P

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March 5, 2012 10:42:00 PM    View the profile of Drac 
@Hades: I wanted to note that the Warrior and her fleet aren't in the system yet. We'll be arriving shortly, but for now your character is more likely to be wondering where the hell the CNW's ship is. Otherwise, excellent work.

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  RE: VEN: Out of the Invisible Discussion
March 5, 2012 10:53:36 PM    View the profile of Hades 
Alright, fixed it.
Quote:...Hades could see the Atrus, but wondered where the Halcyon Warrior was, as other prominent capital ships...

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