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  Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
September 16, 2011 7:03:13 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
OOC:
Anyone read Darths & Droids?  A couple of weeks ago they set a roleplay question: Can you name your character’s mother?  So here is my answer, a Clone Wars tale starring my character’s family (though the starring role is the father rather than the mother).  Please note that while this is part of my character’s background I am not counting this as part of his career posts.


22 BBY, Start of the Clone Wars
The Dreadnaught Class Cruiser Indigo Blade’s cannons erupted into a spray of red laser fire, filling the space before it.  The shots were as accurate as they were deadly, many of them finding their mark on the dilapidated pirate vessel that had dared to challenge it.

The pirate ship knew it was outclassed, and was throwing all its power to shields and engines as it made its bid to escape.  In a vain effort to distract the mighty Dreadnaught, a handful of Ugly starfighters had launched.  Sacrificing themselves for the good of their fellows was courageous, especially for pirates, and the half dozen modified fighters swept upon the Indigo Blade.

At his gunnery station, Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail did not even twitch.  The young petty officer’s hands gently guided his massive cannon into position, locking his systems on an incoming fighter.  Zail narrowed the cool blue eyes which had earned him his callsign at the Raithal Academy, and drifted the targeting reticule casually over his prey.  The trick was never to force it, and Zail was a natural.

The crosshairs found the enemy and glowed green, and Coldeye squeezed the trigger.

Bolts of energy lanced out and ripped into the hostile, blasting it apart with perfect precision.  The fireball expanded quickly, engulfing the pilot as he struggled to eject, killing the pirate instantly.  Zail sighed at the loss of life, but quickly cast it aside.  He had joined the naval forces of the Republic Judicial Department to stop those who preyed on the innocent, and he would not lose sleep over the death of such a being.

Quickly the battle came to a close, the remaining pirates either being killed or surrendering to the Indigo Blade.  As the warship stood down from full alert, Zail left his station and noticed a fellow gunner fall into step with him.

“And another kill by the kid,” Said the man, a furry-faced Bothan.  “You are really racking them up!”

“I’ve been here over a year now, Uwarsk,” Said Zail to his friend as they headed off to debriefing.  “Can’t you stop treating me like the new guy?”

The Bothan shook his head.  “Sorry, Ardus, but no.  Till we get a newer gunner, you’re the baby of the group.”

Zail sighed.  “Yeah, well, you can find someone else to tease for a couple of weeks.  With those pirates finally brought down, my leave begins the moment we next put in to port.”

“Oh right,” Said Uwarsk, “Off to see that beautiful wife of yours.”  He frowned.  “She is beautiful by human standards, right?”

“Yes,” Said Ardus, irked by the question, “Very much so.  And why she married a navy man like me is anyone’s guess.  Being away from her for months at a time is painful.”

“Well, enjoy yourself my friend,” Said Uwarsk, “And say hi to your parents for me.”

“My parents,” Said Zail with a grimace.  “Right...”

-----

Sillana Otsuka-Zail felt a thrill rush through her as she guided her thranta into a dive.  The graceful creature, sleek and flat and more resembling a beast of the sea than of the sky, responded to its rider, arcing gracefully towards the ground.  At the last second Sillana pulled up, and the verdant green landscape of Alderaan passed swiftly underneath her.

Her keen eyes picked out a figure on a nearby hill, and as she swooped lower for a better look, her delicate face broke into a big smile.  Sillana brought her thranta around and in for a landing, practically leaping from the beast the moment it touched down.  Breaking into a run, she jumped into the waiting arms of the man close by.

“I missed you,” Said Ardus Zail, kissing his wife deeply.  Her long auburn hair, bright and lush in stark contrast to his own jet-black, fell around him as he hugged her.  Just the scent of it made him happy beyond measure.

“Not as much as I missed you,” Said Sillana with a smile, returning the kiss.

Finally they broke off and Ardus gestured to the thranta.  “You handle her well,” He said.  “You mentioned in your last communiqué that you had been taking lessons.  I see they are paying off.”

Sillana nodded.  “Yeah.  I did some work for a breeder who needed a vet, and as a bonus to my pay he taught me to ride.”

Ardus was glad she was happy and had something to do during his long trips away from home.  Sillana had an affinity for animals and was well versed in their care even as a teenager when they had met at high school.  Now as a professional veterinarian she was putting her talent to good use.

“So...” Said Ardus nervously, “My parents invited us over to dinner tomorrow night...”

His wife arched an eyebrow.  “Your parents?”

“It’s just a few hours,” He promised her.  “And luckily it won’t just be them.  My aunt will be there too, and obviously my brother and sister.”

Sillana glared at him, obviously worried, but then shrugged.  “You’re lucky I love you so much,” She said simply.

“I know,” He replied, and he meant it.

-----

The mood around the dinner table was tense as ever.  The seven humans sat in clusters, different groups with different levels of friendship and hostility to each other.  Not so much an evening meal, this was more like a conference of competing nations.

Seated next to each other, Ardus and Sillana were a solid group, and firmly allied with the figure to Ardus’s left.  His aunt, Commander Elise ‘Darter’ Zail, was a proud woman with a tough voice and a tougher demeanour.  Formerly a fighter pilot and now a capital ship bridge officer, the veteran spacer was something of an idol to her nephew, and Ardus longed to have a naval career as illustrious as hers.

Across from those three were three others, two of whom formed another united block.  At twenty and seventeen years old, Ardus’s sister and brother were carefully neutral when it came to him.  They respected him as the eldest, but at this stage of their lives still depended heavily on their parents and so were careful not to pick sides.

Beside them sat one of those parents, their mother, Delilah Zail.  An elegant woman who was always finely dressed but disdained jewellery, she sat at the left hand of the head of the table.  This man was also the head of the family, and Ardus Zail’s most hated relative.  His father, Kenth Zail.

“So,” Said Sillana, trying to fill the silence during the interim between the starter and the main course, “How is everyone?”  Turning to her sister-in-law, she asked, “Adria, how is university?”

The twenty year old shrugged.  “Can’t complain,” She answered simply.

“What have you been studying lately?” Asked Ardus, taking his wife’s lead and trying to start a conversation.

Adria’s eyes flashed.  “Politics,” She said, knowing that just mentioning it would likely start an argument.  “Specifically, the growing Separatist movement in the Outer Rim.”

At this her brother, the youngest of those at the table, piped up.  “We’ve been studying that at school too,” He said, an eagerness in his voice.  “We’ve been looking at some of the politics of Count Dooku.  He’s a great orator, and his arguments about the corruption in the Republic Senate are very compelling.”

“You shouldn’t listen to that Separatist waffle, Etran,” Snapped his mother.  Delilah was staunch in her support of the Republic, and was genuinely horrified to hear her own flesh and blood espouse something close to admiration for the renegade Jedi Master.  “This family has served the Republic for generations, and we are not about to start questioning it now.”

“I agree with your mother,” Said Elise to her youngest nephew.  “Dooku’s people are little more than trouble makers, regardless of how smooth their tongues are.”

“And how would you deal with their concerns?” Asked Adria, a challenge in her tone.  “The Republic Senate is greedy and self-serving, and something needs to be done about it.  Loyalty to the Republic is laudable, but being blind to its flaws is not.”

“Politics is for politicians,” Said Ardus firmly.  “We need only have faith in our leaders.  However they decide to deal with those worlds seeking independence matters not to us.  Your aunt and I will do our duty to the Republic regardless.”

“And what will you do if the Senate resorts to violence to bring the renegade systems in line?” Asked Adria, in her element.

Elise shook her head.  “We are part of the Judicial Department, Adria,” Said the Commander.  “We chase pirates and smugglers.  What you are talking about is warfare, and that is beyond us.”

“Ah,” Chimed in young Etran, “We covered this in school too.  There is a movement in the Senate that has been gathering power for decades, dubbed the ‘Militarists’ by the media.  They want to unify the regional judicial forces into a fully-functioning galactic navy once again.  Do you agree with that, Aunt Elise?”

It was Ardus who answered.  “If it leads to greater cooperation between the various branches and makes space safer, then I’d be all for it,” He said, and his aunt nodded in agreement.

“No,” Came a firm voice from the head of the table.  Kenth Zail, patriarch of the family, had decided to weigh in on the argument.

“Here we go again,” Mumbled Ardus under his breath.

“War is a terrible thing,” Said Kenth, his keen blue-grey eyes peering out from his strong face and sweeping around the room.  “A Republic military would only provoke others and lead to confrontation.  This should be obvious to any child of Alderaan.”

“Except you aren’t, are you father?” Asked Ardus.  “Grandfather came from Anaxes.  The Zails were a proud military family, but you abandoned his legacy.”

“He wanted me to live a peaceful life!” Snarled Kenth.  “He was proud that I grew up to be a respected trader and businessman.  He only wished his other child had the same sense...”

Elise narrowed her eyes.  “We’ve been over this before, many times, at this very table,” She snarled at her older brother.  “Father was happy when I went to Raithal Academy, and had he lived he would have been proud to see young Ardus do the same!  He believed in peace, true, but like any Anaxi be believed in fighting for it!  He respected the decisions of both his children!”

“Enough!” Roared Delilah from her husband’s side.  “Enough talk about politics and the rights and wrongs of war and military service,” Said the matriarch of the clan.  “We’ve heard it all before.  Now, the servant droids will bring the main course soon enough.  Until then let’s talk of something else.”

“Fine,” Said Elise, and Ardus was halted from saying anything further by Sillana, who laid a restraining hand on his arm.  Instead he glared at his father, but the eldest Zail did not respond.

The rest of the evening passed slowly and painfully, though without further outburst.  Ardus vowed to apologise to his wife for this fiasco and regretted ever accepting the invite to dinner.

-----

Later that night, Ardus and Sillana lay side by side in bed, both exhausted.  He had worked hard to ‘apologise’ to her and she had drifted off to sleep quite content.  Slowly he rose and slipped from their room, making his way to their small apartment’s living area.

Ardus vowed that one day he would get promoted, maybe even become a high-ranking officer like his Aunt Elise, and then he could afford a home as large and as grand as his father’s.  His wife deserved that much.

Taking a seat in the living area, he looked up at the medal mounted on a plaque on the wall.  It was not his, but instead had Commodore Jadion ‘Sunset’ Zail written upon it.  It was a memento of his grandfather and Ardus would often stare at it and remember the old man, as he did now.

“Can’t sleep?” Asked a soft voice from the doorway, and Ardus turned to see Sillana standing there.

He nodded.  “Just lost in thought,” He said, eyes shifting back to the medal.

“I still remember the funeral,” Said his wife, following the line of sight and recalling her husband’s grandfather.  “I’d never seen so many people... until our wedding, that is.”  Sillana moved to his side and sat down beside him on the arm of the chair.  “Your aunt is right, Jadion would have been proud to see you graduate from Raithal.”

“If only my father could understand that,” Sighed Ardus.  Much as he hated to admit it, he desperately wanted the approval of his parents.  “He’s a bit too much of a pacifist, like my grandmother.”

“She was Alderaanian, wasn’t she?” Said Sillana.  “I never met her.”

Ardus shook his head.  “Nor did I.  Grandmother Lyness died when I was just a baby, a good fifteen years before him.  Yes, she was from Alderaan.  Grandfather told me he met her when she was working as a doctor on Anaxes.  He was a patient of hers.”

“Jadion once told me I reminded him of Lyness,” Said his wife with a smile.  “He said ‘she too loved to take care of big dumb animals’.  I would love to have met her.”

“As would I,” Said Ardus.  “So much family history, so much of it lost.  Would that humans were longer lived.”

Sillana smiled at her husband.  “Then don’t make the same mistake.  Let’s you and I build a new family, and write about it and celebrate it, and leave a wealth of rich history for our descendants.”

Ardus smiled.  “Making a family?” He said, eyeing her.  “Now that’s a plan I can get behind...”

-----

The next week passed quickly, and Ardus enjoyed his time with his wife.  They travelled across their homeworld, shopping in the scintillating cities of Alderaan and enjoying picnics in the verdant valleys and forests.  It was a time of simple pleasures, though Ardus knew it would end all too quickly.

That ending was to come even sooner than expected.  Still with three days of leave left, he and Sillana woke up one morning to a hearty breakfast.  Turning on the holonews, they watched the reports from Coruscant and were stunned at what had happened over the course of the previous night.

“Our top story today,” Said the immaculately dressed Duros reporter.  “The Republic Senate has released details of a battle on the planet Geonosis.  Jedi Knights, acting in concert with a new Republic strike force, fought a droid army loyal to Separatist leader Count Dooku.  The battle was a response to Separatist plans to execute Naboo Senator Padme Amidala.  As a result of the encounter, thousands of worlds have formally withdrawn from the Republic and declared a Confederacy of Independent Systems, headed by Count Dooku and other important beings with Separatist beliefs.”

The camera zoomed in on the face of the Duros, who spoke the next few words with greater gravity.  “The Republic Senate is currently in session, with a formal declaration of war the most likely outcome.”

Husband and wife stared at each other.  “Impossible,” Said Sillana, but Ardus could find no words for his thoughts.

Suddenly the apartment’s door chime went off, and Ardus rose to answer it.  Opening the front door, he saw his Aunt Elise standing there in her bridge officer’s uniform.

“Greetings, Petty Officer Zail,” She said in the crisp voice of command.

Reacting instantly to her military tone, he snapped a salute at the superior officer.  “Commander Zail!  How can I be of service, ma’am?”

Elise sighed.  “The Militarist faction has won,” She said simply.  “Any hour now the Senate will approve the creation of a unified Navy to fight to the Separatists.  Your leave is cancelled, Mr Zail.  We are going to war!”


OOC:
2639 words.  This first post is just the set up, the real war story is to follow.
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
September 23, 2011 7:15:06 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
21 BBY, One year into the Clone Wars
Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail sat at his gunnery station, watching as the visual display of hyperspace flew past.  Any second now his ship, the dreadnaught Indigo Blade, would revert to realspace.  If fleet intelligence had done their job right, the cruiser and several other capital ships of the year-old unified Republic Navy would be right on top of a Separatist taskforce.

With a lurch the Indigo Blade came to a stop, and as the starlines shrunk back to pinpoints of light, Zail’s sharp blue eyes quickly picked up the shapes of enemy vessels.

The fleet of the Confederacy of Independent Systems was a motley collection of frigates and cruisers, sporting a variety of logos including the Trade Federation and Intergalactic Banking Clan.  It never ceased to amaze Zail that the CIS, with all its claims of wanting freedom and liberty, so willingly collaborated with the same greedy corporations whose bribes and shady dealings sought to undermine democracy.  Not that he cared.  Those same companies had been eating away at the Republic Senate for years.  Now that they had found a new regime to screw over, maybe they would leave the hardworking people on his side of the galactic boarder alone.

Through his headset, orders tumbled down from up the command chain, from the Captain to the Gunnery Chief to the turbolaser operators.  Zail caught sight of the enemy and, given which of them was closest, could have guessed their target even without word from the bridge.  Vulture droids, and plenty of them!

The fighters, thinking machines with no separate pilot, swooped down upon the Dreadnaught, opening fire.  In the distance their carrier, a Lucrehulk Class Droid Control Ship, hung back, letting its fighters do the work.  The second the Vultures were in range Zail and his fellow gunners opened fire, spewing bright green death into space.

Having earned the callsign of ‘Coldeye’ at the Raithal Academy, Zail was gifted with natural aim and reflexes, and over the past year he had improved greatly.  The Clone Wars had given him more combat experience than some naval men of previous generations had accrued in their entire peace-time careers.  Like a good officer, he had learned from every engagement and now had one of the top shot-to-hit ratios on the Indigo Blade.

“Got one!” He heard from an enthusiastic voice on his headset comlink.  Zail recognised it instantly as the voice of Uwarsk the Bothan, his best friend.

“Nice shooting,” Said Coldeye, “But I’ve already downed two!” He taunted.

This brought a round of challenges and cries of one-upmanship from the other gunners.  They all tended to stay in contact like this during battle, something that the Gunnery Chief not only permitted but encouraged.  Teamwork and healthy competition in it were considered beneficial in the navy.

The ship rocked under the attacks of the Vultures as scores of them shot past the Indigo Blade, firing at the thick hull as they went.  Meanwhile still more of the irksome droids continued to spill from the  Control Ship, providing the turbolaser crews with a target rich environment.

Zail squeezed the trigger again and again, almost unable to miss, and wondered just what his shot-to-hit ratio would look like at the end of the day.  For a while the young man from Alderaan, still only in his mid-twenties, forgot about the gravity of the battle and just enjoyed himself.  Racking up kills became such an easy thing when the fighters he and his friends shot down did not contain living beings.

Coldeye and his fellows got a sudden and jarring reality check soon enough.  Nearby, one of the Republic corvettes in their attack fleet was taking a pounding from two CIS frigates.  Out of the corner of his eye, Zail saw the ship experience shield collapse, and then exploded spectacularly with the intensity of an exploding star.

All who saw it instantly knew that this was no game.  People were dying, and Zail and his friends re-dedicated themselves to their firing with renewed determination.

The battle rolled on, with both the Republic and the CIS taking heavy casualties in both capital ships and fighters.  Coldeye was not a bridge officer, he did not have access to charts and sensors, and so he had no real clue as to who was winning.  In truth, he did not need to.  He did his duty, and would just keep firing until someone said ‘stop’, or the Indigo Blade was destroyed.

Suddenly, Zail’s keen eyes caught something unusual heading his way.  “Coldeye, here!” He said, opening fire on the latest wave of fighters.  “I can make out a different set of ships behind the Vultures!  Can someone check that out?”

Word came back swiftly from the sensor officer on the bridge.  “Assault craft!” Relayed the Gunnery Chief, “Coming right for us and using the Vulture Droids as cover!  Shift priorities and hit those boarding ships!”

Zail and his fellows needed no further encouragement.  They had all heard the horror stories of Republic ships stormed by teams of droids and their crews slaughtered deck by deck.  It would not happen to the Indigo Blade!

Again and again they opened fire, the gunners trying to slip their shots through the screen of fighters.  Zail was the most proficient of his fellows, but even he struggled.  The Vultures, unthinking automatons directed by the will of the Control Ship, threw themselves in the path of most accurate shots, sacrificing themselves to shield the assault craft.

Coldeye did not need scanners to suspect that their foes were getting through, and when the first thud of an impact rang through the hull, he knew what had happened.  The droids were boarding the Indigo Blade!

-----

In short order, close to a dozen assault craft slipped past the Dreadnaught’s guns and burrowing into the hull like ticks on an animal’s hide.  Penetrating the thick armour, the craft disgorged their battle droids into the corridors beyond.

There was little initial resistance, as none of the crew was waiting in ambush for the droids.  They were too smart for that.  The assault craft tended to rip open the hull without finesse, exposing the section they entered to the void.  The lack of atmosphere did not bother the droids, who marched forwards to press deeper into the ship.

As they advanced, emergency bulkheads closed behind them, protecting the air in the sections beyond.  No longer hampered by the lack of air, the crew spilled from doorways and adjoining corridors, and the fight to repel the invaders was underway.

-----

The sounds of the fighting spilled through the nearby walls, into the large hallway that ran for several dozen meters along the side of the ship and housed the starboard side guns.  At their stations, Zail and his fellow gunners knew that they were high on the droids list of priorities, and the mechanical murderers would come through soon.

“Okay!” Called the Chief to his men, “We have to defend our posts!  Lock down your turrets, grab your sidearms, and let’s fight back!”

Coldeye hopped down from his seat, a blaster pistol in his hand, and came to the side of Uwarsk.

The Bothan’s fur was rippling as a sign of his nervousness, but Uwarsk was still able to glance at his friend and smile.  “You know how to use that thing, Ardus?”

“I can fire anything,” Zail assured him, and then looked towards the doors at the end of the hall.  They were glowing red, as if something on the other side was trying to burn its way through.  “Here they come!” He called, and the assembled gunners braced themselves.

The doors toppled inwards, revealing a trio of battle droids with a large fusion cutter held between them.  They were the instantly shot apart by a barrage of shots from Zail and the other gunners, but this merely stirred the legions behind them into battle.  Led by a spearhead of Super Battle Droids, the mechanical foes spilled into the turret hall, filling the air with the scent of burning ozone.

The crewmen of the Indigo Blade took cover behind their turret stations and fired back, and at first their superior marksmanship skills gave them the upper hand.  In an even numbers battle Coldeye and his fellows would have been victorious, but the enemy seemed all but limitless.  More and more droids rushed without fear or hesitation into the room, surrounding and pinning down the crewmen a few at a time.

“This is not going well!” Said Uwarsk at Zail’s side, taking aim and downing another of the droids.  As he spoke, the Bothan’s voice held a tension that his friend had never heard before.

“Just keep firing!” Retorted Zail, shooting again and again.  “Gunners never give up their stations!”

Close by, the Gunnery Chief shook his head sadly as he saw another of his crew take a lethal shot to the head.  “Sorry, Coldeye, but we are losing too many people!  Its time to fall back!”

Zail cursed under his breath, and for the first time took his eyes off his foes to survey the damage that had been done.  A lot of his friends, almost half of the gunnery team, lay dead upon the deck.  Droids had no sense of mercy, and in the Clone Wars there was rarely a case of Republic soldiers being wounded but not finished off.  “Understood, sir,” He snarled, and he and Uwarsk began to fall back with the Chief and a handful of others.

Zail took one last look at the turret hall, where he had served for two long years, and then surrendered it to the droids of the CIS.

-----

Coldeye and his fellows rendezvoused with the ship’s contingent of Clone Troopers, and together they fought back.  Deck by deck the machines came on, fighting with a tirelessness that only droids could manage and that living beings could not hope to match.

Time and again Zail saw the Clones fight with bravery and skill, and he could not help but admire them.  Truly, whoever they had been cloned from was one hell of a fighter!

Still, as various key areas of the ship fell into enemy hands through sheer weight of numbers, it became obvious to the remaining crew that the Indigo Blade was lost.  Finally, only the top deck (containing the bridge) remained in friendly hands, though the last few beleaguered defenders knew it would not be so for much longer.

“How can there be so many?” Grumbled Uwarsk, crouched in a doorway in a strategic central corridor.

Close by, Zail had been pondering the same problem.  “A lot more assault craft have landed since those initial few,” Said Coldeye, placing a fresh power pack in his pistol in preparation for the droids’ next inevitable assault.

“How do you know?” Asked the Bothan.

“It’s why they came for us,” Ardus told his friend.  “By driving us from our turrets, they made sure no one would fire at any further landing craft.  My guess is that they have been bringing in more droids since we lost control of the turbolasers.”

“Kriffing great,” Said Uwarsk, suddenly feeling the same pang of guilt that had been haunting Zail.  Had they not failed to defend their posts then it is possible the Dreadnaught would not now be over-run.  Still, no sooner had they thought that then they drove it from their minds.  They did their best, like true warriors of the Republic.  If the ship was lost, it was the CIS who were to blame.

Nearby, a Clone Trooper sergeant shushed them.  “Less chatter.  The clankers are coming!  I can hear them!”

Neither Zail nor Uwarsk questioned the soldier, and sure enough a few moments later the blast door at the end of the corridor exploded under a seismic charge.  Dozens of all-too-familiar metal forms poured out through the gap, opening fire.

“Hold your ground men!” Called the Gunnery Chief, who had taken command of the corridor’s twenty or so defenders, a mix of crewmen and Clones.  “We need not hold them long!” He bellowed, referring to the plan they had all been briefed on.

The CIS had seized the engine room of the Indigo Blade and blocked the bridge’s attempts to set the ship’s self-destruct.  Clearly they wanted the warship for themselves, but the Captain had refused to let his ship fall into enemy hands.  Right now he and the bridge officers were working on a work-around to blow the ship, but it would take time.  The remaining crew were charged with buying that time.

Coldeye fired again and again, and though constant fighting had fatigued him and sapped his strength, his aim was still sure enough to down droids after droid with single well-placed hits.

Suddenly there was a scream at his side, and he turned to see Uwarsk fall, a smoking blaster wound in his chest.  Zail’s eyes widened in horror, and he rushed to his friend’s side.  He knew little about Bothan physiology, but he knew a fatal wound when he saw one.

“No...” He said, looking down at his fallen comrade, who clung to life for just a few seconds longer.

“I would have liked...” Said Uwarsk with a pained smile, “To meet... your supposedly attractive wife...” And then he was gone.

For a few long and empty moments, Ardus just stared blankly, numb.  And then Coldeye’s sparkling blue eyes went through a sudden and dramatic change.  One moment they were filled with sadness, and the next they filled with rage.  Locking sight on the oncoming droids, Zail let loose a primal roar of anger and opened fire again and again.

His shots were wild and unfocused, but the young Petty Officer was seeing red and maddened to a level he never thought possible.  Another droid toppled, and another, but given Zail’s wild behaviour, this was more from luck than anything.  He barely noticed it when the Chief laid a restraining hand on his shoulder, and it was not until his superior pulled Zail around to face him that he finally stopped shooting.

“Mr Zail!” Bellowed the Chief.  “Cease fire immediately!”

“But... Uwarsk...” Said Coldeye, his voice suddenly weak.

“The bridge is finished!  The ship is about to blow, and we need to head to the escape pods!” Said the other man firmly.  Zail understood, and forced himself to get a grip.  Laying down a suppressing fire, they began to withdraw.

Zail was still an emotional wreck, and later he could barely recall the retreat to the pods.  Before he knew it, he was sat in the cramped lifeboat, looking back at the regal Dreadnaught as it blew.  It was the first, and at that point only vessel he had ever served on.

Ardus felt tears in his eyes, and judged the light show of the exploding warship a fitting tribute for his lost friend.


OOC:
2483 words.  This story is set a year after the last one, as I have skipped ahead into the heart of the Clone Wars.  The next post will be set a week later, as Ardus Zail returns to battle in a new ship.

After Action Report:  Ardus Zail has seen constant fighting since the Clone Wars began a year ago and is now an accomplished gunner.  However, during a battle, droids boarded his Dreadnaught, the Indigo Blade, killing his best friend, the Bothan Uwarsk.  To prevent it being used by the CIS, the Republic blew the ship as Zail and the few survivors fled.
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
September 30, 2011 8:51:27 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
21 BBY, One year into the Clone Wars
The passenger shuttle emerged from hyperspace and made a minor course correction to angle itself towards the nearby planet.  The blue and white world of Eriadu was the shuttle’s destination, a powerhouse of manufacturing and a place of great strategic importance in the Outer Rim.  Immense shipyards hung around the prestigious planet, within which were berthed countless Republic warships undergoing repair or resupply.

The shuttle landed upon one of the many orbital platforms, and its passengers emerged quickly into the bustling docking area.  People and droids of all types hurried to and fro, many of them military but not all.  The business of war had given plenty of people on Eriadu work, and many of those exiting the shuttle had come for just that reason.

One, however, was here for something totally different.

Sillana Otsuka-Zail pushed her way through the crowd, hurrying through Customs and to the platform’s main arrival and departure lounge.  Many people were there waiting, and quickly she began looking about for her husband.

Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail was there, his own blue eyes darting back and forth across the new arrivals, seeking his love.  The moment they caught sight of each other they ran into each other’s arms, an overly dramatic reunion that had become something of a habit of theirs.

“Oh I’m so glad you’re here!” He said, hugging her close, and though he was overjoyed to see her, Sillana could clearly hear the pain in his voice.

“Your Aunt told me about the Indigo Blade,” She said, referring to Zail’s former warship, now lost in battle.  Sillana had nearly fainted when she heard that her husband’s vessel had been destroyed, and thanked the gods, the Force, and whatever else was listening when she learned that Ardus had survived.  “I came as fast as I could,” She said, somehow knowing that he would need her.

“Thank you,” He said, as they broke their hug and turned to walk away from the docking area arm in arm.

“Did you...” Began Sillana carefully, “Did you lose any friends?” She asked.

“Yes,” Replied Ardus.  “Too many, including Uwarsk,” He said, and she gasped at the news.  Though Sillana had never met the Bothan, her husband had spoken often of his comrade and room-mate, and knew why Ardus was taking this whole thing so hard.

“I’m so sorry,” Said Sillana, and he knew that she meant it.  There was a long silence between them for a while, and finally she decided to fill it.  “Come on,” She said to Ardus, changing the subject, “It’s been a long trip, and I’m hungry.  Are there any good places to eat around here?”

-----

They sat in a dingy but oddly quaint cafe looking out over a long, multi-floor promenade that ran through the centre of the orbital platform.  The place was lined with shops and bars, and throngs of people filled the place.  Strange smells and sounds accosted Sillana’s ears, and she realised with some shock just how long it had been since she had last left the peace and calm (and cleanliness) of Alderaan.

Ardus spoke about the loss of his ship, about the rescue of his escape pod afterwards, and the falling back of the remnants of his fleet here to Eriadu a week ago.  He had been on ‘stand-by leave’ since then, allowed some free time to get his head straight but told to stay on Eriadu pending quick reassignment.

Finally he stopped, as if realising he had been talking for so long, and turned to his wife.  “I’m sorry,” Said Ardus.  “Let’s talk about something other than war and fighting.  How have you been?” He asked, realising that it had been six months since he had last got back home to see her.

“Work is good,” She said simply.  “Keeps me busy.  I’ve been keeping up with your brother and sister.  Both Etran and Adria send their best.”

“Good to know,” Said Ardus with a smile.  “Both doing well I take it?”

“Very well,” She replied.  “Etran will be finished with school soon, as you know, and by his grades, looks like he’ll be heading to a fine college.  As for Adria, I see a lot less of her.  University life gets so busy, as you no-doubt recall, and your mother and I are starting to suspect that there is a man in her life.”

“Really?” Said Coldeye, arching an eyebrow.  “I’m sure mother is ‘perfectly aghast at the notion’!” He said, mocking Delilah Zail’s prim and proper demeanour, and they both laughed.  Finally, he asked without humour.  “And father?”

“Kenth hopes every day that you will be safe,” Said Sillana tactfully.  “As he wishes too for the safety of your Aunt,” She added, referred to Ardus’s favourite relative, Commander Elise ‘Darter’ Zail, also fighting for the Republic.

“Uh-huh,” Said Ardus, doubting his old man’s sincerity.  Looking down at his food, he lifted some meat into his mouth with his hands and devoured it with relish.  Turning back to his wife, he spoke seriously.  “You changed the subject, you know,” He said.

She stared at him, but said nothing.

“I asked about you,” He went on, “And you turned it into an update on my family.  How are you, Sillana, really?  My being away from home all the time was hard enough on you during peace time, but during wartime... I can’t imagine.”

“I’m fine,” She assured him.  “Honestly.  Look, I don’t like being one of those stay-at-home-and-worry wives, but I know you.  I know how much honour and duty mean to you, and I fear that if I were to beg you to come home, to give up the Navy, that you would do just that, and part of you would hate me for it.”

In spite of her words, Ardus found himself smiling.  “No part of me could ever hate you,” He said, staring into her eyes so she could see his sinceriry, “But the rest of what you say is true.  Come on,” He said, rising from the table, “Let’s for a walk.  This place has a nice arboretum, and while it’s not the parks of Alderaan, it will do.”

“I’d be delighted,” She replied, taking his hand and walking with him.

Not for the first time, Ardus Zail wondered just how he had ended up with a wife as wonderful as this one.

-----

As ever their time together was all too brief, and after just a couple of days Zail was officially reactivated to duty by the Republic Navy.  He and Sillana said their tearful goodbyes at the docking bay, and as she boarded a shuttle back to Alderaan, Ardus boarded a military transport headed for one of the larger docks of the Eriadu shipyards.

He sat with a few dozen others, also transferring to what was to be his new ship.  Zail saw a mix of Clone Troopers, Naval crewmen and pilots, mostly headed to their first ever combat assignment, but a handful of veterans among them.  He wondered which ones would be his friends and which would not, and lamented having to spend another two years growing accustomed to a new vessel and new crew.

Glancing again the datapad of transfer orders he carried with him, he glanced once more at the name of his new ship.  It was called the Blazing Crown, and he had been told simply to report to it, with no mention of its ship type or role.  Zail glanced out of the window and watched as the shipyards flew past, and eventually he noticed the transport homing in on one docked warship in particular, and as it drew closer, Ardus stared in disbelief.  That could not be his ship, could it?

Looming large before the stunned Petty Officer was a vessel eleven hundred meters length, roughly triangular with twin bridge towers atop it, painted in white and red.  Down the centre ran a long docking bay, which opened to allow the transport to land.  Zail had seen the Venator Class Star Destroyers before, but never this close, and he would now be serving on one!

Passing through shimmering blue atmospheric shielding, the transport came to a stop and the passengers stepped out.  Instantly the smell of polish and engine grease assaulted Zail’s nose, but he relished being back on a ship and enjoyed the scent.  Looking around, he saw all sorts of fighters arrayed on the decks, and large crates of supplies emblazoned with a red and yellow ring symbol.  It was the mark of the Broken Circle Armada!

Zail knew the reputation of the BCA, sometimes also erroneously called the Broken Circle Fleet, but such was misleading.  The Armada actually consisted of several fleets, able to engage the enemy on multiple fronts throughout the galaxy.  Coldeye knew his reputation as a gunner was good, but to serve in the BCA meant that he was even better than he thought, and that the higher ups had noticed!

The new arrivals formed up in three lines at the command of a lieutenant who greeted them, and then all present saluted as two men entered the landing bay.  One was a Kel Dor with a shining steel breath mask and the rank insignia of a Captain.  At his side was a human Lieutenant Commander with dark hair and a rakish goatee beard.

“I am Captain Var Jraan,” Said the Kel Dor, his voice deep, and he managed to be clear and authoritative despite the muffling effect of the mask his people we forced to wear in oxygen-rich environments.  “Let me welcome all of you to the Blazing Crown, one of the finest ships in the Open Circle Armada!  This vessel, like all bearing the mark of the OCA, is an exemplar of duty, loyalty, courage, and dedication.  I expect nothing less than perfection from each and every one of you!  If you fail this ship, you fail the Republic!  You will not find me forgiving of failure...” Said the alien darkly.

The human beside him then stepped forward.  “This is Lieutenant Commander Alek de Maquel,” Said the Captain.  “His is my first officer, my right hand, and if you fail, it will be he who presses the ‘open’ button on the airlock we stuff you in!  I leave you now in his capable hands!”  And so saying Jraan walked off.

De Maquel then stepped forward, suppressing a smile at his CO’s words.  It was the same intimidating spiel every time from the kind-hearted old Kel Dor, and already the Commander could see the nervousness on the faces of the new arrivals.  Soon enough they would find out that their Captain was never so severe with his punishments, though his words about high standards were bang on.  “Okay!” Began the human officer, his Brentaal accent strong and clear.  “Let’s get you people to your bunks!  I want you to dump your bags and report to your stations to meet your department leaders within the hour!  Come forward and receive your orders as I call your names...”

Ardus Zail listened, awed and scared by the new ship he was to serve on.  However, deep down he was excited!  This ship would see heavy fighting, and had just the firepower to really hurt their enemies.

The Confederacy of Independent Systems would pay for killing so many of his friends, he vowed it!


OOC:
1899 words.  This post is just solidifying the plot points of the first two posts, namely Zail’s relationship with his wife and family, and the recent loss of his ship and friends.  Basically I want to show that two things drive Ardus, his family and the navy, and this will have major ramifications for him much later when Alderaan is destroyed (I trust that anyone reading this does not consider that a spoiler...).

After Action Report:  Ardus Zail, having lost his ship during a Separatist attack, has been recuperating on the planet Eriadu.  He is visited by his wife, Sillana, and starts to feel better.  After she returns to Alderaan, Zail is re-assigned to one of the new Venator Class Star Destroyers.  It is named the Blazing Crown, and is commanded by a Kel Dor named Captain Var Jraan, and his first officer, the human Lieutenant Commander Alek de Maquel.  To Zail’s shock and delight, this ship is part of the famed Open Circle Armada, pride of the Republic.
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
October 8, 2011 1:25:17 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
20 BBY, Two years into the Clone Wars
The office of Captain Var Jraan was a sparsely decorated affair.  A few medals and mementoes of the Kel Dor officer’s career adorned the walls, but generally he did not go in for the more decorative touches that some commanding officers added to their place of work.

Across the gleaming black table from the alien, his first officer, Lieutenant Commander Alek de Maquel studied the datapad that his superior had just handed him.  “So we are close, then?” He said, putting down the report from Republic Intelligence.

“Yes,” Said the Captain of the Venator Class Star Destroyer Blazing Crown.  “Firone and his fleet have established a base on a planetoid on the edge of the Rainbow Bridge Nebula.  We have orders to unite with another taskforce and proceed there to crush him once and for all.”

The ‘Firone’ he referred to was Commodore Legan Firone, a Neimodian fleet commander of some repute.  Unlike most of his race, Firone was not a member of the Trade Federation, but was in fact a former mercenary.  He had spent years serving the Hutts as a skilled frigate captain, gaining valuable combat experience.  When the Confederacy of Independent Systems was formed and began to seek out commanders for its fleets, Firone had taken his fellow Neimodians up on their offer of membership.  Being granted leadership of a large taskforce, Firone had proven himself a menace throughout the Outer Rim.

And now, the Open Circle Armada, the elite fleets of the Republic, were hunting him down.  The Blazing Crown was assigned a leading role in that effort.

“When do we go in?” Asked Lieutenant Commander de Maquel, ready for combat at all times.

“Reinforcements are due here later,” Said the Captain, trying to curb his XO’s enthusiasm.  “We launch tomorrow.”

-----

As the day went on, other ships arrived to rendezvous with the Blazing Crown.  Soon a large fleet of ships, each emblazoned with the logo of the famed Open Circle Armada, had coalesced.  At the core of the strike force was half a dozen Star Destroyers, escorted by various frigates and cruisers.  From his quarters on the Blazing Crown, Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail, Petty Officer and gunner, looked out and knew that the fight ahead was going to be the largest he had ever participated in.

He was stirred from his musings by the sound of a door chime.  Turning to face it, he straightened his uniform and said, “Enter!”

The door opened and the young man from Alderaan broke into a big smile.  The woman who stood there, tall and regal with the rank insignia of a Commander upon her breast, was his most beloved relative.

“Aunt Elise!” He said, and then suddenly remembered himself.  Saluting smartly, he said, “I mean, Commander Zail!  To what do I owe this visit, ma’am?”

Her harsh face, the one she wore for her duties as an officer, began to relax.  “At ease!” She said, her commander’s mask dropping away.  Spreading her arms wide in welcome, Elise stepped into the room to hug him.  “Ardus, so good to see you!”

He returned the hug and then gestured for her to take a seat.  Dropping down onto the edge of his bed (his cramped quarters had only one chair), Ardus said, “Good to see you too, auntie.  I thought I heard that the Nightsong would be joining us for this one.”

Elise gestured out the window to one of the other Star Destroyers.  “Yeah, that’s her out there.  A fine ship, just like all these Venators, but I don’t need to tell you that,” She said, indicating around her.  “Can’t tell you how proud I was to hear that you had qualified for service in the Open Circle.  Your grandfather would be proud.”

The man she spoke of, Adion ‘Sunset’ Zail, was also an officer, and Ardus revered the man’s legacy even more than he revered his aunt.  He smiled and said, “Thank you.” At her kind words, his eyes flicked to the old officer’s medal he had framed upon the wall.

Elise frowned when she saw it.  “I thought that old keepsake was in your home on Alderaan?” She said, seeing Adion’s medal.

Ardus shrugged.  “I figured I needed it closer,” He said, gazing at it fondly.

His aunt accepted this, and then said, “How long has it been since you’ve been home?” She asked carefully.

A sorrow filled her nephew’s eyes.  “Too long,” He admitted.

“How far along is Sillana?” Asked Elise, referring to Ardus’s wife.

“Any day now,” Said the young man.  “My first child, and I will miss the birth.”

“I could try and pull some strings with Captain Jraan...” Began Elise, but Ardus shook his head.

“Thanks for the offer, but I don’t want any special treatment,” He said.  “Besides, it’s too late now anyway.  I’ll make it up to Sillana somehow, trust me.”

“Very well,” Said Elise, and they turned to other, happier matters.  They had a lot to catch up on, and as they relaxed with talk of family both tried to forget the impending battle of the morrow.

-----

The flotilla of Republic ships formed up at the edge of an uninhabited system.  With no admiralty present, command of the vessels fell to Captain Jraan of the Blazing Crown.

“Jraan to all ships!” Said the Kel Dor from the bridge.  “All hands prepare for battle!  Micro-jump on my mark!  Three... two... one... jump!”

And on command, twenty five warships accelerated to beyond the speed of light in the blink of an eye.

And then, just as quickly, they reverted back to realspace.  In front of the ships spread the majesty of the Rainbow Bridge Nebula, an anomaly of staggering beauty renowned throughout the sector.  In peacetime the space station on the edge of the nebula would have been a centre of tourism, but now it had been commandeered by the Confederacy of Independent Systems.  Already the station was launching droid fighters, who joined the already numerous ships surrounding the base.

The CIS fleet, numbering almost twenty capital ships, was quick to respond, and rushed to meet the Republic forces.  In moments the first shots were being fired.

The Battle of the Rainbow Bridge Nebula had begun.

-----

Zail swivelled in his turret, spraying fire across the bow of an incoming vulture fighter.  The first few shots missed, but Coldeye adjusted ever so slightly, and the next blast caught the enemy full on and blew it to pieces.

Without pausing to exalt in his victory, Zail turned to the next foe, and then the next.  On and on the droids kept coming, as in so many previous battles, and once again the Petty Officer wondered at the seemingly limitless ranks of the enemy.

Slowly he became aware that the Blazing Crown was drawing closer to one of the enemy cruisers, and orders came down to shift targets.  Like a good gunner, Zail of course complied, but he took no joy in it.  Firing at large capital ships offered no challenge to gunners, for the enemy could not dodge and so there was no skill involved.  As Zail’s Star Destroyer closed in, he lamented that even a basic automated firing computer could hit their target.

The enemy returned fire, even as their shields began to buckle and fail.  Coldeye’s gaze swept across the readouts of his turbolaser, and not for the first time he marvelled at the power output.  The weapons of these Venators was well beyond that of his old dreadnaught, and while he missed the old heavy cruiser, he loved his new ship.

Loved, he thought?  No, not really.  His only true love was back on Alderaan, and she was currently pregnant with his first born son...

Zail shook the distracting thoughts as best he could, and continued firing.

-----

Starfighters shot back forth across space, spewing fire at each other.  Intertwined with this chaos, capitals ships managed their own slow-speed imitation of the dance of death.  Vessels large and small lit the sky with their deaths, and already at this stage of the battle both fleets had taken around ten percent casualties.

However, since the Republic had began with a larger force, that gave them the advantage, but it was still early days.

“Encountering heavy fire from the station, Captain!” Reported Lieutenant Commander de Maquel.  “The Pride of Amakeel and the Faithful Star have taken heavy damage!”

“Pull them back!” Snapped Captain Vraan, his gaze sweeping across the battle in the bridge viewport.  “Bring up the Nightsong to fill their place.”

“Sir,” Queried de Maquel as he came to his CO’s side, “Can’t we just pull the fleet back out of range of the station?”

The Kel Dor shook his head.  “If we pull back that far, we give the CIS fleet a chance to escape.  I won’t allow Commodore Firone to pull another of his miraculous escapes.”  The Captain frowned and then turned to the Sensor Chief.  “Have we found his flagship yet?”

One of the junior officers in the crew pit checked his systems and responded, “Yes, sir!  The Providence-class destroyer Forgotten Son has been confirmed as present!  It is currently moving to engage the Nightsong.”

Lieutenant Commander de Maquel turned to his Captain upon hearing the news.  “We take out Firone and the CIS fleet will fall apart.  We can end this now, sir.”

“Agreed,” Said Vraan.  “Helm!  Bring us around to engage the Forgotten Son!  All weapons stations stand by!”

-----

The cruiser that Zail had been pummelling began to come apart.  It did not die a spectacular death, and merely shut down and began to drift.  As a handful of escape pods fled the dying ship (CIS ships only had a few living crewman), the Blazing Crown began to ignore it and came about to a different foe.

Zail checked his orders and the reply was that they were about to head for the flagship of the Confederate fleet, which was currently engaging the Star Destroyer Nightsong.

Of course he recognised the name instantly.

“Hold on, Aunt Elise,” Said Coldeye out loud, “We are coming to help you.”

OOC:
Word Count 1691.  This is the second of three battles I want to do during the Clone Wars part of Coldeye’s life.  The next post will deal with the conclusion of the battle and its aftermath, including the birth of Ardus’s son (my actual character).

After Action Report:  Part of the Open Circle Armada, led by Zail’s ship the Blazing Crown, has been hunting a CIS fleet led by Commodore Legan Firone.  They have tracked his force to a base at the edge of the Rainbow Bridge Nebula.  With the help of extra ships, including the vessel of Zail’s Aunt Elise, the Star Destroyer Nightsong, they have begun the attack.  However, Coldeye is distracted by the knowledge that, back on Alderaan, his wife Sillana is due to give birth any day now.
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
October 15, 2011 12:28:10 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
20 BBY, Two years into the Clone Wars
A Banking Clan Frigate was lit up by a series of explosions along its length, causing the warship to roll on its side and drift off like a gutted fish.  Republic bombers shot past the corpse, their damage done, and rushed off in search of more victims.  The Battle of the Rainbow Bridge Nebula had already seen the demise of many capital ships, both Republic and Confederate, and had boiled down to a gruesome and costly war of attrition.  In such a conflict there would be no clear victors.

From his gunnery station, Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail fired again and again at the Providence-class Destroyer Forgotten Son.  The CIS flagship had armament comparable to their own, and it was firing back at his twin attackers.  Both Zail’s ship the Blazing Crown, and its fellow Venator Star Destroyer, the Nightsong, were pummelling the lead vessel of the enemy fleet.

More importantly, Ardus knew that the First Officer of the Nightsong was his own dear Aunt Elise, so there was a personal element.  Locking on to key areas of the Forgotten Son, Zail made sure that every shot counted.

-----

“Their shields are failing!” Reported the Blazing Crown’s XO, the human Lieutenant Commander Alek de Maquel.  “Even the Forgotten Son cannot take on two Star Destroyers at once.”

“Excellent,” Said the Kel Dor Captain Var Jraan, watching the demise of their opposite number.  He knew that on board that ship was the feared Neimodian Commodore Legan Firone, a notorious CIS leader who had been a menace to the Open Circle Armada forces of the Outer Rim.  Killing the merciless mercenary would make this a great day for the Republic.

-----

On the bridge of the Forgotten Son, Commodore Firone watched the barrage of shots raining upon his ship, and scowled.  How the Republic found him, he did not know, but he could guess.  Someone in the CIS had screwed up and leaked word of his latest base to Republic Intelligence.  These sorts of things happened, he accepted that, but it seemed to happen a lot in the Confederacy.  He would have to schedule some executions later to ensure the fault did not lie with one of his own captains.

Of course, for there to be a later, the wily Neimodian would have to escape this.  The Open Circle Armada had him outgunned and they had the initiative.  This day was theirs.

“Contact the L’Kajas,” Said Firone to one of his living crewmen.  They were an assortment of mercenaries of various races, who had all served with him during his days working for the Hutts.  Firone detested the droid crews so common in the CIS, though at times their unwavering loyalty had their uses.  Such as now.  “Send the ‘Kill Code’,” He ordered.

-----

On the nearby cruiser L’Kajas, its Neimodian captain watched the battle unfold.  He was holding his own, his Munificent-class star frigate locked in battle with a Republic Dreadnaught, and his 200 crewmen performing admirably.

There may just be a promotion in this for me, he mused.

Suddenly, the doors to the bridge opened.  The captain frowned as a trio of super battle droids entered.  “Yes?” He asked.

The droids opened fire, spraying lasers across the bridge and ruthlessly slaughtering every living being in sight.

-----

“Commodore Firone,” Said a Zabrak officer on the bridge of the Forgotten Son, “Reports from the L’Kajas.  The Kill Code has been executed, the living crewmen of the frigate are dead.  Orders sir?”

“Tell the droids to assume control and steer the ship our way,” Said Firone calmly.  Glancing at the two Star Destroyers hammering his flagship, he gestured to the Nightsong.  “Tell them to ram that one,” He ordered.

-----

On the bridge of the Nightsong, Commander Elise ‘Darter’ Zail heard the cry of warning from the Star Destroyer’s Sensor Chief.  Relaying it, she called to her Captain, “Sir!  Incoming frigate!  Collision course!”

“Emergency manoeuvres!” Replied the CO, “Hard to port!”

Helm responded quickly, but not quickly enough.  Elise saw the L’Kajas hurtling in towards them, growing ever larger in their bridge viewports.  The gunners of the Nightsong focused their fire on the warship in a vain effort to slow it down, but it did no good.

Elise watched in horror as doom came to her and her crew.  “Goodbye, Ardus,” She said, and then there was nothing but explosive madness, and then death.

-----

Commodore Firone watched as one of the two hostile Star Destroyers exploded spectacularly, its crew having been given no chance to escape or survive.  As the mighty vessel died, the second ship veered off to escape its fellow's death throes.

The Neimodian smiled.  Perfection.

“Sir!  We are clear to escape to hyperspace!” Reported the helmsman.

“Take us out of here,” Said Firone, and moments later the Forgotten Son made the jump to freedom.

-----

Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail watched the demise of the Nightsong, the explosion burning his eyes, though that had nothing to do with the tears that now welled from them.  Even as his mouth contorted in a soundless “No!” his rational mind knew that no one could have survived.

His Aunt, an inspiration to him for years and the relative he connected with more than any other, was dead.

-----

Two weeks later, and after the Open Circle Armada had officially lost the trail of Commodore Firone, its officers were granted a break from the war.  Finally with some shore leave, Ardus Zail headed home to Alderaan, though just the thought of the planet gave him such mixed emotions that the young Petty Officer almost threw up as he saw it in the shuttle’s window.

Eventually his ship came in for a landing, and he stepped out onto the surface of his home world.  Ardus saw the sunset on the horizon, the weird light that was neither night nor day, and thought it a fine match for his confused mood.  Joining the crowd of military personnel departing the shuttle, he made his way across the landing pad and into capital city of Aldera.

Close by, waiting for him, were two people.  One was a beautiful woman with auburn hair, and clutched in her arms was a small baby.  Ardus approached slowly, and she smiled encouragingly, as if telling from his demeanour that he was not alright.

And then he looked down, and Ardus saw the face of his week-old son.  The infant looked up at his father, eyes sparkling with the same brilliant blue as his sire’s.

“Pherik,” Said Sillana Otsuka-Zail, “Just as we discussed.”

“Pherik,” Said Ardus, finally tearing his gaze from the child to his wife.  “He’s... beautiful,” He said, lips wobbling with a restrained sob.  “Aunt Elise would have loved him,” He managed, and then broke down in tears.

-----

The bright sunny afternoon seemed somewhat at odds with the mood of the occasion.  Ardus had always imagined that funerals were meant to be rainy affairs, and something about a brilliant Alderaan summer’s day seemed disrespectful.

With no body, the service consisted of the dedication of a large marble memorial, adorned with an engraved plate.  Several people close to Elise Zail read poems or passages.  Among them was Ardus, who read a poem by one of his aunt’s favourite Coruscanti authors.

Finally the funeral came to a close, and the crowd began to dissipate.  Sillana and Ardus walked away side by side, little Pherik in a hovering baby chair between them.  The infant had been quite quiet during the service, as if somehow sensing the need to respect the memory of his great-aunt.

As they walked off, Ardus saw a couple of people approach.  He sighed upon laying eyes on them.  Breaking off from his family, he moved to intercept the duo.  “Mother, father,” He said by way of simple greeting.

Kenth Zail and his wife Delilah regarded their son coolly.  Delilah, a highly prim and proper Alderaanian lady, spoke first.  “Ardus, so glad you could make it.  Such a shame it took such a sad event to pull you home, when even the birth of my grandson could not.”

“It’s not like I had a choice, mother,” Said Coldeye sharply.  “The Republic calls me to serve, so I do.”

“Bah,” Spat Kenth Zail.  “Do not try to sound noble, son.  There is no honour in serving the Republic in that,” He scolded, gesturing to the dress uniform that Ardus had worn to the funeral.

“And how would you see me serve, father?” Asked Coldeye, angry that his father would use this occasion as an excuse for politics.  “By talking with the CIS?  See, an army of bleeding heart politicians already tried that and failed.  Now, it will take leaders with guts, like the Chancellor, to defend the Republic!”

“At the expense of people’s lives?” Demanded Kenth.  “How many more relatives must I lose to this war?”

“Only mine, father,” Spat Zail in reply.  “After all, I’m the only one of our family left with guts to put on a uniform and actually do anything!”

“You think I want to see you die, Ardus?” Asked Kenth, incredulous.

“I don’t know what you want,” Replied Coldeye, his voice suddenly calm.  “You have disapproved of my choices in life for years, just as you disapproved of Aunt Elise’s choices.  You couldn’t control your sister, and you sure can’t control me, so I have no idea as to why you bother trying.  So let me be blunt about this.  The Confederacy has killed someone I consider dear to me, someone I love and respect more than I ever loved or respected you.  This uniform,” Said Ardus, gesturing to his rank insignia, “Gives me a shot at revenge.  And I for one am going to take it!”

And with that, he turned and stormed back to his wife and son.

Only now did little Pherik start to cry, as if sensing his father’s anger.  Luckily, Ardus had a whole week to make it up to the child.

And in that week, he never once visited or spoke to his parents.

OOC:
Word Count 1680.  The debut of my character, albeit as a burbling infant.  Pherik will make more minor appearances in this story, but it will continue to focus on Ardus Zail.

After Action Report: The Battle of the Rainbow Bridge Nebula is over, and despite the Republic victory, the Confederate Commodore Firone has escaped.  Worse, Ardus Zail’s Aunt Elise has died in the battle.  Zail returns to Alderaan for the funeral, and there reunites with his wife Sillana and meets his infant son, Pherik.  He also has a major falling out with his father, the pacifistic Kenth Zail. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
October 21, 2011 6:06:46 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
19 BBY, End of the Clone Wars
Warships roared silently out of hyperspace by the thousands, constituting the Fifth Fleet of the Open Circle Armada.  The immense force had raced back to Coruscant from the Outer Rim sieges upon hearing of the attack on the capital.  And as they emerged from lightspeed and beheld the Confederate fleet in orbit, the warriors of the Open Circle realised the scope of the task before them.

Under the command of General Grievous, the CIS fleet also numbered in the thousands, and were currently engaged against the overwhelmed and surprised forces of the Republic defensive fleet.  The mighty city planet of Coruscant had not known such chaos in centuries, and when the two awesome forces collided, the skies were alive with lasers and explosions that the planet’s billions of citizens never dreamed of seeing.

Among the countless forces of the Republic, the Venator Star Destroyer Blazing Crown rushed to engage the enemy.  On the bridge, the Kel Dor Captain Var Jraan barked orders.

“Raise shields!  Activate all weapon batteries!  Launch all fighters!  All hands to battle stations!”

“You heard the Captain,” Said his faithful right hand, Lieutenant Commander Alek de Maquel, rushing around the bridge to oversee the various departments.  “Gunnery Chief, this is the bridge!  Target the nearest enemy vessel and order your men to fire at will!”

-----

At his turbolaser station, Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail heard the Chief’s orders and had no problem complying.  Three years of fighting in the Clone Wars had turned Zail into a sharp-eyed gunner, the finest on the Blazing Crown.  Part of this was his natural hand-eye coordination, but he also had an extra edge in battle.  Hatred.  Since the Clone Wars began, he had lost his first ship, the Indigo Blade, and with it his best friend Uwarsk the Bothan.  And then, making it even worse, he had lost his Aunt Elise in battle a year later.  His favourite relative, the one person he respected more than any other, and the CIS had taken her life.

Now, Ardus Zail went into every battle with a major chip on his shoulder, and that rage had made him a new breed of deadly.

He squeezed the trigger, and focused on the deaths of his enemies.

-----

Lines of warships flew past each other, firing off broadsides capable of reducing entire worlds to life ash.  Captains and Admirals on both sides tried to co-ordinate the opening stages of the battle, but as starfighter squadrons broke and attacked, and the first few warships blew, chaos began to assert itself.

The red and white vessels of the Open Circle Armada clashed with cruisers and frigates of the Banking Clan and Trade Federation.  As a corvette came into range, the Blazing Crown focused its fire, pummelling the smaller craft relentlessly.  Zail himself got in several key hits, targeting vital areas with precision.

Soon enough the corvette blew, and the Star Destroyer flew onwards towards it next victory.

“Incoming fighters,” Came a voice over Zail’s headset.  “Target at will!”

Ardus needed no further encouragement, opening fire as the tiny craft shot past.  Fast and manoeuvrable, just landing a hit on one with their cumbersome turbolasers was tough, and yet Zail was able to down two.

“They just keep coming!” Came a voice on his headset.  It was one of the newer gunners, a fresh-from-the-academy newbie who had been on board just a month.

“Then just keep killing them!” Snarled Zail.  “These little ships are just target practice anyway.  We are just killing time until we get into position to fire on a real enemy, like...”

And suddenly, Coldeye’s voice caught in his throat.  He looked and saw what ship they were approaching, and he knew it at once.  It was the Forgotten Son, the warship that was flagship to the CIS’s famed Commodore Firone.

The Neimodian who had obliterated the Star Destroyer Nightsong and murdered its entire crew, including Ardus’s Aunt Elise.

-----

“Sir, we are taking heavy fire from a nearby frigate!” Reported Lieutenant Commander de Maquel.  “It’s trying to stop us from reaching the Forgotten Son.”

“Order another capital ship to intercept,” Said Captain Jraan.  “Press on and open fire on the Forgotten Son the moment we are in range!  I want Firone dead!”

He had chased the feared Commodore across the Outer Rim for over a year.  If he could take out Firone here, then whatever portion of the CIS forces that the Neimodian commanded would be in disarray.  Jraan could complete his mission and greatly aid the course of the battle in a single move.

-----

As soon as they were within range, Zail was the first to open fire on the Forgotten Son.  His green shots lanced out, and splashed against the heavy shielding of the Providence-class Destroyer.  He leaned into his firing controls, gritting his teeth, as if by sheer will he could force his shots through and kill the monsters who had murdered his aunt.

-----

Firone watched the assault, thinking back to the last time he had fought the Blazing Crown, back during the Battle of the Rainbow Bridge Nebula.  There he had sacrificed an allied frigate to escape, and had had to lie about it afterwards to Confederate command.

Now, serving directly under General Grievous, such expensive ways to save himself would be difficult.  Firone would have to be more creative to get out of this.

“Sir!  Message from the General!” Called one of his living bridge crew.  “He has captured the Supreme Chancellor from the surface of Coruscant and has returned safely to the Invisible Hand.”

The Commodore whistled in appreciation.  He had privately doubted that this several-thousand vessel kidnap plot would actually work, but apparently the cyborg had pulled it off.  “There’s goes my promotion,” He mused.  “Tell the General that my force is holding, but that the Republic reinforcements are putting us under pressure.  Anytime he wants to fall back with our prize hostage is fine by me.”

Suddenly a heavy impact rocked the Forgotten Son.  Firone was experienced enough to differentiate between an energy hit and a physical impact, and knew this to be the latter.

“Bombers?” He queried.

His XO nodded.  “Just arrived with the Blazing Crown.  Their Captain seems to really want us, sir.”

“Very well,” Said the Commodore.  “Begin to fall back, bring up two more cruisers to cover us.  I dare say the General will be ordering us to go any minute now, and I want to be ready for it.”

-----

“They are starting to retreat, sir!” Said Commander de Maquel.

“Stay with them!” Ordered Captain Jraan.  “Call in another two fighter squadrons if you have to, but bring Firone down!”

-----

Another series of punishing hits rocked the Forgotten Son, but even as other ships came up to support him, the Commodore knew it was over.  The attack of the Blazing Crown was just too single minded, too brutal.

Firone could not help but respect it.

Still, the reality was that his ship was about to fall, and him with it.  However, the Commodore looked out at the space around them, and the legions of CIS warships out there.  If he and his crew were to simply take to escape pods, the odds were good that a friendly vessel would collect them.

And if not, he could just bribe his way to freedom.  Firone knew that several other ranking CIS prisoners had done that.  The Republic was so deliciously corrupt after all.

“Okay, everybody out!” He called.  “Order the droid crews to man the guns and keep firing to provide cover.  Bridge crew, you’re with me!” Called Firone, wanting to keep his team together.  Like him, they had all served as mercs on the Outer Rim, and he had more loyalty to them than he did the CIS.

-----

There was sudden cheering in Zail’s headset as his fellow gunners saw the escape pods jettison from the Forgotten Son.  However, he did not join in their exultation as the enemy vessel died.

Instead, he eyed the pods, and wondered which one contained the murderous Commodore Firone.

“I’m going to finish this,” Ardus said, his cool blue eyes focusing on the command pod that emerged from the bridge.  That had to contain the object of his vengeance.

He locked on his turbolaser, and traced the pod.  It was in weapon’s range, he need only to squeeze the trigger.

However, he hesitated.  The image of his Aunt Elise flashed through his mind.  He was about to do this for her and yet... he could not.  Ardus knew that if he were to fire, his actions would be automatically recorded by his firing computer.  He would murder the beings in that pod, and it would be the end of his military career.

No!  His career did not matter!  This was for his aunt, for the woman who had encouraged him, supported him, in a way that even his parents never had!

And yet Zail knew, deep down, that Aunt Elise would not condone him throwing his life away.  Not even for her.

Slowly, reluctantly, he eased off the trigger, and let out a long breath he did not know that he was holding.

It was over.

-----

It was over, it was all over.  The Battle of Coruscant saw the death of Count Dooku, the leader of the Separatists, and not too long after, General Grievous also fell.  The Clone Wars were over.

From one of the common rooms on board the Blazing Crown, Zail and a handful of other off-duty personnel watched a live transmission that was going out across the HoloNet.

Ardus watched live as Chancellor Palpatine announced the end of the Confederacy of Independent Systems, and also the creation of the Galactic Empire, with himself as Emperor.  He concluded the speech with orders to hunt and destroy the Jedi, and also the promise of war crimes trials for all captured CIS leaders.

Firone was on that list, and Zail was delighted to hear that the Commodore would be executed when found guilty.  He knew now that killing the Neimodian himself would have been the wrong thing, and that Aunt Elise would now finally get justice.

When the transmission ended, Ardus looked around at the other Republic (or was it Imperial?) crewmen present.

The first one to speak was a native of Chandrila.  “He is now dictator for life?” Roared the man.  “And the Jedi are branded traitors?  Does anyone believe this?”

There were a few murmurs of agreement, but Zail silenced then with a sharp outburst.  “Hey!  This is Palpatine we are talking about here!  He is strong, and he is determined!  I for one trust him!”

The Chandrilan non-com stared at the gunner in disbelief.  “Coldeye, you can’t be serious!  This Empire is the death of the democracy we just spent three years fighting to protect!  And where I come from, democracy is valued,” And at this declaration there were more sounds of agreements from others.

“I’m from a world that values political education too,” Snarled Zail.  And as he spoke, he thought back to his father, Kenth, and all the time he had spent arguing with him.  “You know one of the first things I learned in high school?  ‘You can fight a war for democracy, but you can’t fight a war democratically’.  That’s why we voted Palpatine so much power to take charge and lead us through the war.”

“The war is over, Zail,” Said the other.

“No its not!” Snapped Ardus.  “The Clone Wars are over, yes, but the real war goes on!  I’m talking about the war against uncaring bureaucracy, greedy self-serving public servants, manipulative mega-corporations, and the thousand other things that brought the Republic down!  What, you think that the Clone Wars was some random blip that sprung up over night?  The creaking democracy you so value was building up to this fiasco for centuries!”

Zail looked around before continuing, ensuring that he had the attention of all present.  His words continued to pour from him, giving vent to his anger.  This man from Chandrila sounded too much like Ardus’s father.  The type of person who believed that the Republic was some magical and perfect force for good in the galaxy, when it most blatantly was not.

“The Clone Wars have left the galaxy in a complete mess,” Said Zail.  “And let me tell you what will happen if we bring back the Republic.  Several powerful companies will bribe the Senate into handing them control of the reconstruction.  They will bleed public taxes dry through their costly efforts, hoarding profits while doing sub-standard work.  They will use cheap droids for this, ensuring zero growth in employment, all the while paralysing the government with pointless legislation designed to shield them at best, or aid their exploitation at worse.  And through it all, regular folks like us will be unable to do a kriffing thing about it!”

Now people were nodding at Zail’s words.  This was just the sort of nonsense they could remember from years back, before Palpatine was elected to the role of Supreme Chancellor.

“So I for one am going to support this Empire,” Finished Ardus.  “Partly because I trust Palpatine, and partly because I know it can’t be worse than the Republic.  And when my children grow up and ask me what the galaxy was like before the Clone Wars, I’m going to answer them truthfully.  Not with tales of a great democracy for all, but of a corrupt regime that undid itself, and deserved to die.”

And with that, he rose and stormed off, and was surprised to note a great many people applauding his words as he went.

A few weeks later, he returned home to Alderaan for some much needed shore leave.  When he saw his wife Sillana, and his son Pherik, it was as a gunner in the new Imperial Navy.

OOC:
Word Count 2319.  The Clone Wars are over and Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail is now to enjoy peacetime as an officer in the Galactic Empire.  The story is not over there, though...

After Action Report: Ardus is present at the Battle of Coruscant.  There he finally gets a chance to shoot down the Neimodian war criminal Commodore Firone, who he blames for the death of his Aunt Elise.  He resists the urge to commit murder, and is rewarded by seeing Chancellor Palpatine’s harsh justice execute the war criminal.  In the following weeks he becomes part of the Imperial Navy. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
October 28, 2011 8:32:11 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
15 BBY, Four years into the reign of Emperor Palpatine
Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail marched along the gunnery corridor of the Blazing Crown, barking orders at the turbolaser crews.  After years of serving in the new Imperial Navy, Ardus was now a Warrant Officer and Gunnery Chief of the Star Destroyer.  These were his people, and he expected nothing but the best from them.

“Anders, tighten up, you are wasting too many shots!” He shouted, walking past as his gunners continued their target practice drills.  “Lissara, too tight, you are firing like a droid!  And Drobi, take your eyes off the readouts for once and stay focused on your target!”

He watched them all struggling to comply, no-one taking offense at his comments.  The Empire trained its people well, and he took pride in how dedicated they all were.  Suppressing a smile, Ardus continued the drill.

-----

After his shift, Ardus walked through the Star Destroyer on his way to the mess hall.  He paused by a window to look out over the massive warship, admiring the sleek pure-white paint job.  After all these years, he had still not gotten used to it, and sometimes missed the logo of the old Open Circle Armada that used to be emblazoned on his ship.  However, there was something refreshing about the new design, a renewal that matched the renewal of the galaxy itself.  After the chaos and corruption of the Republic, Ardus had found the peace and order of the Empire to be most welcome.

Entering the mess hall, he grabbed a tray of food and sat down at a small table.  Navy food was not as good as his wife’s cooking, but Ardus did not find it as objectionable as some crewmen did.

As he ate, he pulled out a datapad and flicked through the latest images sent to him from home.  Sillana had made it a habit to keep Ardus updated on how his sons were doing, and sent him messages and pics frequently.

“Your family, Chief?” Asked a voice over his shoulder.

“Yes, Drobi, it is,” He replied.  “Please, join me,” He added, gesturing to the empty seat opposite him.  Once the younger man was seated, Zail showed him the datapad.  “My wife, Sillana, and my sons, Pherik, six, and Geaden, three.  You have a family, Drobi?”

The younger Imperial shook his head.  “Me?  No, no time for it,” Said Drobi cheerfully.  He spoke with a Coruscanti accent, though he often spoke of other worlds, and Ardus figured that the gunner had an upbringing that involved a lot of moving around.

Suddenly, something over Zail’s shoulder caught Drobi’s eyes, and he smiled.  “Hey Chief, look over there.  Newbies!”

Ardus turned and saw a gaggle of very intimidated young men enter the chaotic mess hall.  Each of the half-dozen humans looked wild eyed and confused, and Ardus could not suppress a laugh.  “Can’t believe I was ever that green.”

“Me neither,” Agreed Drobi.  “Still, don’t you think it’s a bit strange?  All human, all male.  Just like the last batch, and the batch before that.”

Zail frowned, having not really noticed before.  He shrugged it off, “Coincidence.”

Drobi arched an eyebrow.  “Coincidence?  Chief, look around you.  This ship is turning into a real sausage fest, a human sausage fest.”

Ardus thought about it for a moment.  “Well, even in the days of the Republic Judiciary forces the men always outnumbered the women.  As for the lack of aliens, well that’s just politics.  The Clone Wars were primarily led by aliens, like the Neimodians and the Muun and whatever.  Their worlds are now part of the Empire, but you can understand why they aren’t exactly eager to sign up to serve.”

“And what about all the races that served the Republic?  Why are there no Mon Cals or Wookiees running about the ship?”

“Those worlds suffered in the war,” Retorted Zail, tiring of the conversation.  “Their people are too busy rebuilding their homes to join the Imperial Navy.  Besides, we do have aliens on board.  Or have you not seen Captain Jraan?” He asked rhetorically, referring to the Kel Dor who ran the ship.

Drobi let it go at that, and they moved on to talking about other things.  Still, despite Zail’s nonchalance, he actually found himself wondering if the young gunner was not on to something.

-----

On the bridge of the Blazing Crown, Commander Alek de Maquel surveyed the crew pits.  The command deck was quiet, everyone going about their business with calm efficiency.  The Commander recalled the chaos that was routine back when the ship was fighting in the Clone Wars.  Some officers he knew missed the action and excitement of those days, but de Maquel did not.

Suddenly his comlink chimed, and he knew that could only mean one thing.  Summoning a Lieutenant and handing him the bridge, the Commander turned and marched towards the back of the command deck and the captain’s office located there.

De Maquel entered and saluted the Kel Dor sitting at the desk.

“Sit, Commander,” Said Captain Var Jraan.  His tone was thoughtful, and he paused before continuing.  For a few moments, only the sound of the alien’s breath mask came from him, and then at last he spoke.  “I’ve been offered another promotion.”

De Maquel smiled.  “Congratulations, sir.  May I ask if you intend to take it this time?”

The Captain scowled.  “They want to make me a Commodore, but it would involve command of some backwater refuelling depot in the Outer Rim.”

“Well, it’s a step in the right direction...” Began the Commander.

“Oh don’t be absurd!” Snapped Jraan to his XO.  “It’s a dead-end assignment and we both know it.  Just like the previous offer, and the one before that.  They are trying to get rid of me, Commander.”

“I can’t imagine why, sir,” Said de Maquel.  “You performed excellently in the Clone Wars.  You should be serving as an Admiral in Sector Zero.”

The Captain waved away the praise.  “Honest, as ever, Commander, that’s why I like you,” Joked Jraan.  “No, this is not about my talent, it’s about my species.”

“I don’t follow, sir.”

“No you don’t, do you?” Said the Captain.  “Which is why I trust you.  Whatever is happening to the Navy, Commander, you seem immune to it.  Mark my words though, Alek, change is coming, and I am seen as an obstacle to that change.”

“If I may, sir,” Offered de Maquel.  “If you do not like where the Navy is headed, perhaps this is your chance to walk away.  You have the respect of the entire crew of this ship, and you have served the galaxy well in a destructive conflict.  If you were to retire, we would give you a send-off to remember, and you could return home to Dorin with your head held high.”

Jraan listened carefully to the words.  He had pondered retirement from the end of the Clone Wars, but always felt he had more to offer the Navy.  However, if the Navy did not want him...

“I will think on this, Commander.  Thank you,” Said the Captain, and dismissed his XO.

-----

At the end of his shift, Commander de Maquel returned to his spacious quarters, poured himself a drink, and sat down at a data terminal.  He quickly began typing a short message to Naval High Command, using a special encryption to bypass the regular messages that had to be approved for sending by the Captain.

To: Admiral Gruun Al-Dat
From: Commander Alek de Maquel
Message: The Captain refuses to accept the offer of promotion.  However, he continues to trust me, so I have suggested an honourable retirement.  He is now considering the idea.  I will continue to push him in that direction.


De Maquel hit ‘send’ and then slumped down in his chair.  He could not help but feel a pang of guilt over his actions, but they were necessary.  The Commander genuinely did like Captain Jraan, and had served him loyally since the Blazing Crown was commissioned.  The two worked well together.

However, Jraan was an alien.  It was not his fault, but it was a problem.  The horrors of the Clone Wars were caused by aliens, and de Maquel understood that, in order for those horrors never to be repeated, the galaxy had to be remade as the Emperor commanded it.  Part of that was a reshaping of the Navy.

The fact that this reshaping would hand de Maquel command of a Star Destroyer was just a... bonus.

-----

A few days later and the Blazing Crown dropped from hyperspace in orbit of the planet Ladrooine.  The backwater world, on the edge of the Outer Rim, was of little strategic importance and low in technology, even lacking orbiting facilities.  Ardus winced at the thought that any crew seeking shore leave would have to be shuttled down a few hundred at a time.  He could envision the competition to get on an early ship out.

Ardus was soon delighted to discover that his position of Gunnery Chief got him on the first transport!  Happy that rank really did have its privilege, he arrived on the hangar deck and joined the crewmen lined up to board the Theta-Class Shuttle.

Once inside and seated, he found himself next to Commander de Maquel.

“Oh, sir!  I didn’t see you there!” He said, suddenly feeling nervous in the XO’s presence.

The officer from Brentaal laughed.  “Relax, Mr Zail,” He said.  “We are headed out on shore leave after all.  So tell me, you ever been to Ladrooine?”

Ardus shook his head.  “No, should I have?”

“No,” Said de Maquel bluntly.  “It’s a nothing world, the worst one on our new patrol route.  Still, it’s good that we come to wave the Empire’s flag.  It keeps the locals in line.”

Zail frowned.  “It’s a troublesome planet then, sir?”

“It’s always been trouble,” Said the Commander with a sigh.  “It’s an old colony world of the Republic, settled centuries ago.  There is an indigenous alien population who frequently clash with the predominantly human settlers.  Alas, the aliens pledged to support the CIS in return for weapons in their conflict with the Republic colonists.  Of course the Confederacy is gone, but the weapons they sold the natives are still here.”

Ardus listened intently and scowled.  “Kriffing Seps.  Four years on and their legacy still plagues us.”

“Yes,” Agreed de Maquel, his voice sad.  “We fought in the Clone Wars and unified the galaxy, but sometimes I fear that the real work is now, in holding it all together.”

Zail nodded, knowing exactly what he meant.

-----

The capital ‘city’ of Ladrooine was as small and rustic as Zail expected.  Barely a hundred thousand people spread out in a poorly planned mess of a settlement, located upon a plateau amid an immense mountain range.

From the restaurant where he sat, Ardus could see several of the nearby snow-capped mountains.  He would have regarded them as beautiful, were several of them not gouged out by extensive strip mining operations.

He scowled at the food on his plate.  The meat, like the establishment itself, was of poor quality.  The building, like most that lined the street outside, was an old metallic pre-fabricated dwelling, deployed years ago during the initial colonisation and never updated or replaced.

“I’ve had a lot better,” Said de Maquel, who had offered to join Zail for dinner.  “Even the food in the officer’s mess.”

Zail smiled at that.  “I wouldn’t know that, Commander.  Non-coms like me have to dine in the regular mess hall.”

De Maquel looked at him, a serious look in his dark eyes.  “Well maybe we can fix that...” He began.

Whatever he was about to say next was lost, however, for the world was thrown into madness.  A blast erupted from the street outside, shattering the glass of the restaurant’s windows, showering the two Imperials.  The kinetic force knocked them to the ground, their ears ringing.

Zail looked at de Maquel, and both men knew what had happened.

The terrorists of Ladrooine had struck.

OOC:
Word Count 2017.  A four year jump forward, meaning Zail is now in his early thirties and the Empire is fully established.  Further posts will also jump ahead, as I carry his story ever forward through Star Wars history.  The next one, however, will be an immediate follow-up to this one.

After Action Report: Ardus Zail, now Gunnery Chief of the Blazing Crown, grows concerned by the lack of non-humans in the Imperial ranks.  Meanwhile, Commander Alek de Maquel plots to push his friend, Captain Var Jraan, into early retirement.  De Maquel has been sold on the High Command’s vision of a human dominated Navy, and works (with guilt) to this end.  The crew of the Blazing Crown are now enjoying shore leave on the planet Ladrooine.  There, Zail and Commander de Maquel witness a terrorist attack by the indigenous aliens against the human colonists. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
November 5, 2011 8:12:20 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
15 BBY, Four years into the reign of Emperor Palpatine
Ardus and Commander de Maquel jumped up, checking themselves quickly.  Only a few cuts and bruises were evident, so the two Imperials charged outside to where the blast originated.

The streets of Ladrooine were not beautiful at the best of times (especially to Ardus, a man who hailed from the paradise of Alderaan), but at the moment it had reached a new level of bad.  The terrorist blast had left a large crater in the centre of the street, obliterating the fronts of many nearby shops and businesses, and worse, leaving bodies scattered about.  Most were injured, but Zail could see at least four lying completely still with wounds that the Clone Wars veteran knew were fatal.

“Kriff it!” Spat the Commander, reaching to the comlink at his side.  “Blazing Crown we have a situation here.  Contact the planetary garrison and have them bring in their Stormtroopers ASAP.  Tell them to lock down the city while we sort this out.”

Ardus listened, knowing that his superior’s orders were not unreasonable.  Locking down a city in the Core worlds would be impossible, but Ladrooine’s capital was barely the size of a small town.  “How can I help?” Asked Zail.

De Maquel looked around, as if seeking someone to punish for this atrocity, and though his hand rested on the gun on his hip, he did not draw it.  Deciding against dispensing justice, he turned to Ardus.  “Let’s help the wounded,” He said, and together they helped people onto the ambulance speeders that were already rushing to their position.

It was the first time that Zail had seen the dead and dying since the war, and he found that he did not miss it.

-----

“What did you see?” Roared de Maquel for the fifth time.  Flanked by a squad of Stormtroopers, he and Zail were questioning the locals in the street.  One of them, an alien local, now cowered at the feet of the Imperials, being stubbornly silent in the face of the Commander’s enquiries.

Ardus regarded the kneeling non-human, his first real look at a native of Ladrooine.  They were a short and stocky race, almost as broad as tall, and their faces were scrunched and ugly with dull grey skin that matched the colouring of the nearby mountains.  The Gunnery Chief did not know what to make of them.

“Did you see anything?” Asked de Maquel again.  “Answer me!”

The alien did not so much as look up at the human.

“I think he’s scared, sir,” Ventured Ardus at his superior’s side.

“No, Mr Zail,” The Commander corrected him.  “I think he knows something about the attack.  Troopers, take him in for a more detailed interrogation!” And so saying the white-armoured soldiers of the Empire grabbed hold of the man and half-carried, half-dragged him to a waiting transport.

Having run out of witnesses, de Maquel stood and surveyed the clean-up efforts in the street, a scowl on his face.

“Considering your next move, sir?” Asked Zail.

The Commander nodded.

“May I ask...” Began Ardus, but hesitated.  He was not sure how to phrase his question in a way that did not make it inappropriate for his superior officer.

“Why am I so set on finding the terrorist responsible?” Asked de Maquel for him.

“Yes.  With all due respect, sir, this is not a job for the Imperial Navy.”

“Wrong, Mr Zail,” Said the Commander sternly.  “Routing out sedition is a task for all loyal subjects of the Emperor.  That these terrorists are aliens only confirms the need to stamp Imperial authority on them.”

The sudden passion, sudden anger in de Maquel’s voice, caught Ardus by surprise.  “Sir, what does their race have to do with it?” He asked carefully.

The Commander glanced about, checking that there was nothing else in the street that required his attention, and decided that he had time to talk to Ardus.  “Come, let us chat in private, Mr Zail.”

-----

The two men took a transport back to the local garrison base on the outskirts of the city.  The building was of the standard prefabricated eight-level design, a home for not just Stormtroopers, but also TIE fighters, walkers and speeders.  Zail knew that such a place was overkill for the tiny nearby city, and realised that this base was instead the centre of Imperial power for the entire planet.

In a small conference room, de Maquel sat down and gestured for Zail to do the same.  “There is a great change sweeping the galaxy,” Began the Commander.  “The Empire is bringing peace and order, but it is not easy.”

Ardus nodded.  “I have seen it,” He said.  “Trust me, Commander, if you are about to give me some loyalty test, do not worry.  I have compared the Empire and the Republic and I am more than happy with how things are now.”

“I know you are,” Said the XO with a smile, “And I have no reason to question your loyalty.  However, loyalty comes in various levels, and I need to ensure that yours has the right level of dedication.  Hard choices are coming, sacrifices will be necessary to further the Empire and ensure its success.”

“And aliens are not able to make these hard decisions?” Asked Zail, wondering what this had to do with his superior’s strange prejudices.

“Correct,” Said de Maquel.  “The greatest leaders of the Clone Wars, from the Emperor to Anakin Skywalker, and even Dooku, were all humans.  Our race has long been the most numerous and influential, the greatest shapers of the galaxy.  Now the Emperor has charged us alone with steering civilisation to greatness.”

Ardus could not deny a certain pride at hearing the words, and part of him liked the idea what he was born into a chosen race.  Still, he had never thought ill of other races, and felt compelled to speak up for them.  “There are other great sentients,” He said.  “Greatness can be measured many ways.  Wookiees are stronger than us, Givins better at mathematics...”

“But none have the same all-round talents that we do,” Insisted de Maquel firmly.  “We humans need to take charge of the Empire, and support the Emperor as best we can in not just remaking the Navy and the government, but the very fabric of galactic civilisation itself.”

“Quite a responsibility,” Said Zail, not knowing exactly what to make of all this.

Seeing that the Gunnery Chief was at least open to his ideas, de Maquel reached to his side and passed Ardus a datapad.  “This is a... a manifesto, by the Commission for the Preservation of the New Order.  It lays out the society that the Emperor wants to build,” Said the Commander.  “I am a member of COMPNOR, and I hope that you come to understand and accept what we are doing.”

Zail lifted the datapad and flicked through a few pages.  There was a lot of reading there, and it would take him some time.  “I shall look over this,” He promised.

“Thank you,” Said de Maquel.  “If you like the direction of the New Order, then there could be a place for you in the next crop of Blazing Crown candidates for officer training,” Added the XO.

Ardus raised an eyebrow.  It was an interesting offer, and he understood it at once.  The New Order was reshaping the Navy, and if Zail could not accept that, he would never be an officer.

Yes, he vowed, he would have to think on this most carefully.

Suddenly, the door to the conference room opened, and an officer flanked by two Stormtroopers walked in.  The man, who bore the rank of a lieutenant, saluted smartly in Commander de Maquel’s presence.

“Sir!  There is news!  We have a lead on a terrorist cell operating inside the city,” Announced the lieutenant.  “We are preparing to hit their base immediately.”

De Maquel rose quickly and gestured to Ardus to follow.  “I want to be there!  Mr Zail, come with us.”

-----

By the time they arrived on the scene, the local Stormtroopers were out in force.  The terrorist cell was holed up in some non-descript hovel of a building, which three squads of the white armoured Imperial soldiers had surrounded.  De Maquel and Zail arrived in a speeder behind the Stormtrooper lines, and disembarked with blaster pistols drawn.

The Commander walked over to the uniformed soldier in charge, a Major who, despite their different service branches, deferred to de Maquel’s rank.  “They in there?” Barked the naval officer.

The Major nodded, and handed de Maquel a portable speaker.  Raising it to his lips, the XO bellowed at the building, “This is the Empire!  We have the premises surrounded!  Surrender now and we will show mercy!  This is your only warning!”

No response.  After a few moments wait, the Commander turned to the assembled Imperials, his blaster drawn.  “Okay, let’s go!” He ordered, and charged forwards.

The soldiers fell in alongside him, closing quickly to the building and blasting their way inside with a barrage of rifle shots.  The old wooden door caved swiftly before the onslaught, and instantly shots poured out from the alien terrorists within.

A couple of troopers went down, but the rest poured through into the home.  Among them, de Maquel was side-by-side with Zail.  It had been a long time since Ardus had been in a fire fight, and he still thought that this sort of thing was not a job for naval men, but he was not about to endanger his career by holding back with a superior officer present.

Inside the dimly lit main room, grey-skinned aliens crouched behind makeshift barricades made of furniture and fired back at the Imperials.  Zail dived for cover himself, sheltering behind a chair, and fired back.  He squeezed off a trio of shots, one of them clipping a Ladrooinian in the shoulder and spinning him unconscious to the ground.

Meanwhile the Stormtroopers were making short work of every non-human in sight.  Within a single furious minute the main room was cleared, and de Maquel led the charge off through a door into other parts of the terrorist hideout.

Ardus marvelled at the man’s courage (or was it fanaticism?) and followed.

-----

The place was soon subdued, with minimal Imperial casualties.  Though armed with CIS weapons, the terrorists turned out to be even worse shots than battle droids.  Several of them were taken alive and conducted to the garrison for interrogation.  Though he was technically on shore leave, Zail opted to help out where he could in the ongoing investigation into the terrorists, something that de Maquel did not fail to notice.

Eventually they and the rest of those crewman on the surface returned to the Blazing Crown.  Zail was glad to be back on the clean ship and away from the dirtball of a planet below.  Soon the Star Destroyer had plotted its course away from Ladrooine, and with a silent rumble the warship had made the jump to hyperspace.

A few days later, Ardus was overseeing one of the gunnery crews, conducting a conversation with several subordinates.  Suddenly, there was a long whistle across the ship’s internal communications, signalling that a ship-wide announcement was about to be given.  Zail and all other crewmen ceased chatting and focused intently on what was to come.

“Attention crew of the Blazing Crown,” Came the breath-mask muffled voice of Captain Var Jraan.  “It is with heavy heart that I speak to you today.  After much soul-searching, I feel that it is time that I moved on.  Since its maiden voyage, I have captained this proud ship and its fine crew, but now I feel that it is time for me to retire.”

There were gasps all around, with some gunners like Drobi staring dumbfounded at the news.  Captain Jraan and the Blazing Crown were, to most of the crew, almost synonymous entities.  Thinking of one without the other was.... well... unthinkable!

“I have spoken to Admiral Al-Dat on the matter, and he has accepted my decision,” Continued the Captain’s voice.  “In my place, Commander de Maquel, who has been with this vessel as long as I have, shall take command.  I know that the Blazing Crown is safe in his hands.  There will be more on this in the coming days, but for now I felt it fair to let you all know what is happening.  Thank you all.”

And with that, the communication ended, and a buzz of conversation discussing it immediately erupted all over the Star Destroyer.

-----

A week later and Captain Jraan had a farewell party in the mess hall the likes of which the crew of the Blazing Crown had never seen.  Even the victory party at the end of the Clone Wars paled in comparison, and Zail noticed that the command staff turned a blind eye to a lot of rules and regs violations during the chaos that ensued.  For the first time, the crew actually saw their captain moved to tears by the kind words and gifts that they offered him, and Ardus wondered if he would ever be so celebrated an officer some day.

Of course, first Zail would have to move beyond his Warrant Officer status and actually become an officer, and on that note, a few weeks afterwards, he was summoned to the captain’s office.

Captain de Maquel had already redesigned the office to his tastes, and as Ardus entered and saluted, he saw several pieces of art from de Maquel’s home world of Brentaal hanging upon the walls.  He also noticed a banner emblazoned with the crest of the Captain’s powerful merchant family, side-by-side with a large Imperial emblem.

“You wished to see me, sir?” Asked the Gunnery Chief.

“Yes, please,” Said de Maquel as Zail joined him at the desk.  “I wanted to know if you had thought anything more about what we discussed back on Ladrooine?”

Ardus expected this, and had indeed given the matter a lot of thought.  “I have read over the COMPNOR information you gave me, sir,” He said carefully.  “It was... bold.  While I have no problem with serving aliens, sir, I do understand that the Empire needs change, change that, perhaps, only humans can bring.  The Emperor’s vision of a New Order is just what the galaxy needs, and I can honestly say that I want to be part of it.  If that dream requires an Imperial Navy guided solely by human hearts and minds, then so be it.”

De Maquel smiled.  It was clear that Ardus had some reservations about some of the more racist ideas espoused by COMPNOR, but that was okay.  The Captain knew that the Alderaanian would come around fully in time.  “Well said, Mr Zail,” He said at last.  “You are hereby recommended to Prefsbelt IV for officer training!  Congratulations,” He said, leaning over to shake Zail’s hand.

Ardus returned the gesture, feeling a thrill run through him.  Within a month, Zail was shipped off to the Empire’s elite Naval Academy.  When he returned to the Blazing Crown, it was as a full officer.

OOC:
Word Count 2525.  I had to walk a fine line with this one.  I did not want Zail to become some fanatic alien-hater, as it would not fit in with his later joining the Vast Empire.  However, I could not keep him as a believer in Republic concepts of equality, as then he would never get promoted in the Imperial Navy.  Instead I cast him as reluctantly going along with it, almost convincing himself that the human domination is okay in order to further his career.

After Action Report: Ardus is now realising the truth of the Empire’s human domination, but Commander de Maquel is succeeding in bringing around to the idea.  De Maquel and Zail help bring down the terrorists on Ladrooine, and then succeed in pushing (alien) Captain Var Jraan into early retirement. The Commander becomes the new CO of the Blazing Crown.  Seeking to surround himself with fellow Core World humans, he sends Ardus for officer training.  Zail will return as a bridge officer. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
November 15, 2011 11:09:26 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
12 BBY, Seven years into the reign of Emperor Palpatine
Ensign Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail sat at his bridge station, the displays of the sensor systems before him.  He was detecting a large number of warships in the area, but that was to be expected.  They had arrived at the Fondor Shipyards for a refit of the Blazing Crown, and he had to admire what he saw.  Present at the vast construction and repair facility was a pair of the new Imperial – Class Star Destroyers, and he marvelled at them from afar.

Meanwhile Captain de Maquel barked out orders to the helmsman to bring their ship in to dock.  With practiced ease, the warship cruised into position, and docking tubes extended from the station to the Blazing Crown.

“All hands, this is the Captain!” Said de Maquel from the command walkway.  “We have arrived at Fondor!  If you have been approved for shore leave, you may depart the ship as soon as your current shift is over.  Thank you.”

Zail smiled, feeling himself relax already.  Sure, being turned loose in the shipyards was not quite the same as breathing the fresh air on an actual planet, but after weeks in deep space he, and the rest of the crew, would take what they could get.

-----

Walking about the Fondor shipyards reminded Zail a lot of his visit to Eriadu so many years before.  Like the shipyards of that world, the ones here were part repair facility and part city.  As he wandered, he saw restaurants and bars, entertainment facilities and shops, and for a while Ardus was happy just touring the place, taking in the sights.

Eventually he passed a public communications booth, and it dawned on him that he had not checked his messages since arriving.  Stepping inside, he deposited a credit chip in the machine and accessed the net.  There were a few messages, including one from his wife, and several pieces of junk mail.  He read the former, ignored the latter, and was about to leave when he noticed one last entry.  Staring in surprise at the name, he opened the message and read it.

With a genuine smile he typed in a reply, and then hurried off.

-----

The following afternoon Ardus was again wandering the station, enjoying the second of his three days shore leave.  He was glad that the work on the Blazing Crown was taking so long, as it gave him time to meet the individual who had sent him the message.

Zail walked into a small cafe, and instantly caught sight of the man.  “I must admit, bro, it was a surprise to hear from you,” He said, walking over.

Etran Zail looked up and smiled at his eldest sibling, standing to embrace him in a hug.  “Hey Ardus, good to see you!” He said, giving him a pat on the back.

Once they were seated, Ardus took a long look at the brother he had not seen in a few years.  Now in his late twenties, Etran was a roguish figure of a man, with tussled hair and a light amount of stubble on his slim face.

“So I take it Sillana told you I would be here?” Coldeye asked.

“Yes,” Said Etran.  “I saw her and the kids recently.  You have some fine boys, Ardus.  Pherik and Geaden are both handsome and smart.  Guess they take after their uncle,” He quipped.

“Have you seen Adria recently?” Ardus found himself asking, curious about their sister.

“She’s well,” Replied Etran.  “She and Quentin have just moved in to a new house, and it’s a lot better for them and the kids.  You should visit the next time you are on Alderaan.”

Ardus shook his head in disbelief.  He would never adjust to the idea that his sister had two children of her own, Hedrin and Delilah.  Nor could he ever wrap his head around the fact that she had married someone called Quentin.

“Aren’t you going to ask about mother and father?” Asked Etran carefully.

“No,” Replied Ardus bluntly, and then moved the conversation on.  “So what are you doing here on Fondor?”

“Bettering myself,” Said Etran with a smile.  “As you know, I aspire to be the best mechanic on Alderaan, and to that end I have come to Fondor to study starship design and construction.  I’m going to be here for a year on a special apprenticeship scheme being run by the local shipwrights.”

“Interesting.  I’m glad you are doing well,” Said Ardus, approving of his brother’s drive towards to mastering his craft.  He had sometimes feared that the youngest of his siblings lacked direction, and was happy to see that such was not the case.  “So, are you busy today?”

“No,” Said Etran with a shrug.  “Why?”

“I’ve been cooped up on a ship too long,” Said Ardus.  “What do you do for fun around here?”

Etran smiled.  “Oh bro, now you are talking.  Follow me!”

-----

The two brothers passed through an entrance lined with flashing lights, and stepped into a large multiple-floor complex crammed with all sorts of beings.  Most were human, mainly off-duty shipyard mechanics, and all of them were in various stages of inebriation.  Music filled the party atmosphere, and most of the partying patrons were looking at vast holograms that floated overhead.

“This casino is where I spend most of my free time,” Said Etran as he and Ardus made their way to the bar.  “Let’s grab a drink and lay on some bets.”

Ardus frowned at the holograms that the people were watching and cheering.  “What are they betting on?” He asked.

“It’s a live feed from Umgul,” Explained his younger brother.  “They are betting on the blob races.  It’s really caught on here, and it’s a lot of fun.”

The Imperial officer stared at the images.  The blobs were living balls of goo, that stretched and reshaped themselves as necessary to overcome obstacles on some sort of bizarre assault course.  The strange lifeforms were quite adept at changing form to meet the challenges ahead of them, and the fact that the blobs came in a variety of colours made it easy to tell them apart.  Quite necessary for cheering on whichever blob one had bet on.

“Want to place a wager?” Asked Etran, seeing his brother’s interest.

“Yeah,” Said Ardus, enjoying the sight of the blobs negotiating a series of twisting transparent and intertwined tubes.  “When is the next race?”

-----

The two Alderaanians had picked out a small table from which to watch a nearby holo, and ordered a few drinks to share while they waited for the race to start.  In his hands, Ardus had a list of the participants and their odds.  He had no idea what made one blob superior to another, and while more educated patrons scanned breeding and dietary stats of the competitors, he simply went by the raw numbers.

“Okay, mine is the bright red one,” Announced Ardus.  “Its name is ‘Berryblob’, and he’s 10 to 7 odds.”

“A decent choice,” Said Etran, who was clearly more experienced.  “I’ve gone for ‘purply-wurply’ and he’s 20 to 6.”

“Long odds,” Said Ardus, with a raised eyebrow.

“Playing it safe is for newbies,” Retorted the other, and they settled in to watch.

Ardus had never really gambled before, but he had to admit that he found it quite exciting.  The blob race was fast, furious, and funny!  The blobs rolled and oozed, spun and whirled, and did several other things for which the Imperial lacked the verbs to describe.  Up and down across a bizarre course, and eventually they made for the finishing line.

In the final dash, both the Zails leapt to their feet and cheered for their blobs, joining the masses of others in the casino who did the same.  The sound was deafening and Ardus got swept up in the excitement.

“And the winner is...” Said an announcer droid as the blobs finished, “Green Meanie!”

Ardus and Etran stared at each other.  “What?” They exclaimed in unison, sure that one of them was going to be the winner.

They stared at their betting tickets, each one representing an investment of twenty five credits.  With a rip and a toss, the Zails cast the things aside, and sat down to resume drinking.

-----

After a while, the two had imbibed a few drinks, and had taken to reminiscing about the past.  They had just reached the topic of popular sports back home (with both Ardus and Etran lamenting the lack of talent exhibited by Alderaan’s Wedgesphere team) when there was a disturbance in the casino.

A lone figure, a small green-skinned Rodian, burst through the entrance, pursued by two Stormtroopers.  The alien dodged and slipped through the crowds with practiced ease, but the two white-armoured warriors just powered through everyone in their way.  Patrons scattered clear, crying out in protest at spilled drinks, drawing the attention of others to the furore.

The being darted towards Ardus and Etran, and the elder brother reacted instantly to his Imperial training.  He leapt up from his chair, moving quickly despite the alcohol in his system, and tackled the passing Rodian.  With a loud grunt the alien fell to the floor, Ardus atop him, as the two Stormtroopers rushed over, rifles ready.

“Freeze!” Barked one of the warriors.

Ardus, out of uniform, raised his hands and announced, “I am Ensign Ardus Zail of the Imperial Navy.”  Pulling out his ID, he handed it to one of the troopers while the other kept his weapon levelled at the frightened Rodian.  When the Stormtrooper nodded and handed the ID back, Ardus asked, “Why are you pursuing this man?”

“He is a thief, sir,” Responded the nearest warrior, deferring to Zail as an officer while he was a mere Private.  “And now resisting arrest.”

“What is to be his fate?” Asked Etran, walking to his brother’s side.

The Stormtroopers glanced at the newcomer, but Ardus nodded, encouraging them to answer.

“He will be interrogated, and then either sentenced to work for the rest of his life upon a penal colony, or executed,” Said the trooper emotionlessly.

Executed?” Echoed Etran, stunned.  “For stealing?”

“Why so harsh?” Asked Ardus, also a little surprised.

“Some of what he stole was sensitive data, sir,” Replied the trooper, either unable or unwilling to elaborate.  “He is therefore also suspected of espionage.  A grievous crime.”

Ardus understood.  “Very well,” He said, pulling the Rodian to his feet and shoving him towards the Stormtroopers.  “Take him.”

“Thank you, sir,” Said the warriors, grabbing the alien and marching him off.

No sooner were they gone than Etran turned on his brother.  “What the frak was that?”

“Security of the Empire,” Replied Ardus simply.  “Harsh penalties are necessary.”

Etran glared at his brother, disbelieving.  “I had heard the stories of how tough the Empire was becoming, but I didn’t think them true.  Nor did I imagine that my own brother was endorsing it!”

“Listen!” Snapped Ardus, fighting to keep his voice under control.  “I get where you are coming from, I do.  You are coming from Alderaan, a place of peace and quiet.  I lived there too, so I understand.  But I’ve also seen the stars, Etran, and I’ve seen war and death and I understand that the galaxy is not like our home.  Out here, tougher measures are needed to create and maintain justice and civilisation.  What the Emperor is doing is necessary.”

Etran did not answer, and just stared back at his brother as if weighing what he had said.  Finally, he gestured back to their table, and they resumed drinking.  They spoke again, joked and reminisced, carefully avoiding the subject of the Empire.  There was now something guarded in Etran’s demeanour that Ardus had not seen before.

When it came time for Ardus to return to the Blazing Crown, he and Etran said their goodbyes and parted as brothers.  Still, their relationship had changed subtly, and Ardus feared that it would never be the same again.

OOC:
Word Count 2008.  The main thrust of this post was to expand upon Zail’s family (as both his sister and brother are adults now and the former has children of her own), and to show just how accustomed to Imperial rule Ardus has become.

After Action Report: Ardus and the Blazing Crown visit the Fondor Shipyards.  Coldeye meets up with his brother Etran, and together they talk family and then hit a casino.  While there, they witness the casual brutality of the Empire at work, and to Etran’s shock Ardus is totally okay with it. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
November 23, 2011 4:17:50 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
7 BBY, Twelve years into the reign of Emperor Palpatine
Lieutenant Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail stirred into wakefulness, blinking in the light that spilled through the open windows of his bedroom.  Life in space did not afford one such spectacular dawns, and he always had trouble staying asleep in the daylight when he was back on Alderaan.

As he sat upright, the door to the room opened and his wife wandered in, already up and clad in a red silken nightgown.  Sillana smiled.  “Ah good, you’re awake.  Hurry up and get ready.  Remember, we’re taking the kids to the zoo today.”

Yawning and stretching, Zail stared at her.  “Their mother is a vet!” He declared, bewildered by the situation.  “If they want to see animals, can’t you just bring some of your work home with you?”

“I do,” Said Sillana.  “However, Pherik never had a taste for riding thrantas and Geaden also wants something more.  Now, get dressed, and do your duty and spend your last day of leave with your family.”

The Imperial officer sighed.  “You’re more demanding than Captain de Maquel, you know.”

She flashed him a brilliant smile and threw him a shirt.

-----

At the Aldera City Zoo, the four Zails walked from exhibit to exhibit.  The youngest, ten year old Geaden, ran from habitat to habitat, identifying most of the exotic creatures without the need of the hologram information points.  Ardus marvelled at both the intellect and energy of his youngest.

“He takes after you,” He said to Sillana.  “The kid will make a fine vet.”

She nodded in agreement, having been thinking along the same lines.  “And Pherik, I think, takes after you,” She said, and gestured to the thirteen year old sitting quietly nearby.

Ardus frowned.  His eldest son had been pleased to go to the zoo, and showed excitement at some of the ‘cooler’ (read: lethal) animals, but generally he seemed engrossed in a datapad he had been reading from.  Curious, the father walked over and sat next to Pherik, while Sillana answered a flurry of Geaden’s questions about moths (of all things).

“What you reading son?” Asked Ardus, looking over the boy’s shoulder.

“It’s the official biography of Admiral Osvald Teshik,” Said Pherik.  “He’s had an amazing career, dad.  Hey, have you ever met him?”  Asked the teen, and there was no mistaking the excitement in his voice.

“No, son, I don’t get to rub shoulders with Admirals,” Said Ardus, taken aback both by the question and by the subject matter.  “Why have you got that, anyway?”

“School project,” Said Pherik.  “We have to write about our personal heroes.  Everyone else is writing about Senator Organa, but he’s boring.  I wanted to write about a hero of the Clone Wars, like you, dad.”

“I... I’m no hero, son,” Said Ardus, and though the mention of the War brought back painful memories, he hid them well.  “I just fought and did my duty.”

“I know, dad,” Said Pherik.  “That’s why I offered to write about you.  However, my teacher said no.  She wants us to write about someone from the history books.”

The father looked at his son, opened his mouth to speak, but then closed it.  His son wanted to write about him?  Ardus was too proud, and too flattered, for words.  Instead they just looked at each other, blue eyes to blue eyes, enjoying a strange father-son moment that neither could really understand.

They enjoyed the rest of the day at the zoo, but oddly, in the years to come, the thing that Ardus would remember most about that day was helping Pherik with his homework that evening.

-----

The shuttle touched down in the hangar of the Blazing Crown, disgorging a dozen crewmen who had been away on shore leave.  Highest ranked among them, Ardus stepped out first, and found a young Petty Officer standing waiting for him.

“Lieutenant Zail, sir!” Said the non-com with a sharp salute.  “The Captain and the other senior staff are about to begin a meeting.  They asked me to bring you to the command deck conference lounge the moment you arrived.”

“Understood,” Said Coldeye.  “Thank you,” And then he hurried off.

He proceeded directly to the bridge, and entered the meeting room.  Captain de Maquel was already seating at the head of the long polished table, with four other officers in attendance.  One was a 2nd Lieutenant and two others ensigns, so inferior in rank to Zail.  The last person present was the only man on the Star Destroyer (other than the Captain) who was Zail’s superior.  He was Lieutenant Commander Egrasl, the ship’s XO, an arrogant man who hailed from the Inner Rim.

“Ah, Lieutenant Zail, glad you could make it,” Said de Maquel warmly as Coldeye got seated.  “We can begin.”

The Captain gestured and the holo-emitter in the centre of the table came on.  It showed an asteroid field, with the majority of rocks rendered in green.  At the centre of the mass, a large asteroid was highlighted in red, and the image zoomed in on it. “Imperial Intelligence has been tracking a large smuggling operation, operating in the Jaso Sector.  The criminal filth is using this old asteroid outpost as their base of operations.  We are to lead a small squadron of capital ships to destroy it.”

Zail studied the image intently.  Penetrating asteroid fields was dangerous, especially for larger and less manoeuvrable capital ships.  Ardus understood at once why the Blazing Crown was going in.  Though their Star Destroyer was getting old, it was far smaller than the newer Imperial – Class, and so had more chance of reaching the target base without being smashed.

“Questions, comments?” Asked de Maquel, always very open with his senior staff.

“I would like to know more about this base of theirs,” Said Zail.  “Did the smugglers build it, or co-opt it from others?”

“It’s an antique,” Said Commander Egrasl dismissively, pointedly ignoring the question.  “Imperial Intelligence has assured us that it dates from the Draggulch Period, and shall be no threat.”

His tone indicated the contempt that Egrasl held for Zail’s contribution to the meeting.  The XO never liked Coldeye, and Ardus supposed at the First Officer viewed him as some sort of threat.  It was no secret that Captain de Maquel liked Zail, and had taken him under his wing.  Moreover, the Captain took High Command’s view that Core Worlders made the best officers, and Egrasl, hailing from the Inner Rim, would never be part of that elite.  Many of the crew felt that the XO pushed so hard because he felt he had something to prove.

Zail, however, knew how to push back.  “So this base is a thousand years old?  I think we have to assume that the place has been upgraded with modern weaponry.  Smugglers are scum, but they are not stupid.  This base represents an investment, and they have probably protected it with all sorts of illegal weapons.  Captain, I suggest caution in our approach.”

Egrasl stared at Ardus’s bold words, but de Maquel merely smiled.  “The Lieutenant is right, of course.  Regardless of the Intelligence reports, common sense must prevail.  We shall approach slowly but steadily, feeling out the enemy with fighters and picket ships first.”

“Yes, sir,” Said the XO, eyes locked firmly on Zail and full of anger.

Zail ignored the man, but wondered just how such a confrontational oaf had ever gotten so far in the Imperial Navy.

The meeting went on, and they finalised tactics for the attack.  The Blazing Crown rendezvoused with the rest of the capital ship squadron later that day, and then launched to hyperspace, heading for their target.

-----

The Blazing Crown slipped expertly through the asteroid fields, escorted by a Nebulon-B Frigate and a trio of Corvettes.  Zail had been assigned to the Navigation post, carefully tracking the flotilla’s approach to the target area.  Ardus watched the hologram before him, and felt a thrill at the idea of the upcoming battle.  A bunch of smugglers would be no match for five ships of the Imperial Navy.

At the front of the bridge, Captain de Maquel watched the large chunks of rocks fly past the viewport.  “Helm, distance to target?”

“Five kilometres, sir!” Came the prompt reply.

The Captain turned to the XO beside him.  “Proceed,” He said simply.

Lieutenant Commander Egrasl leapt into action immediately, turning on his heel and marching swiftly along the command walkway, barking orders.  “All fighters begin launching!  Gunnery crews power up and stand ready!  Communications, contact the other ships and order them to fan out and approach in the attack pattern we planned.”

Using Zail’s navigational data, the flotilla had closed on the smuggler base by hopping from the shadow of one large asteroid to another.  Now the Imperial ships emerged from cover and charged at the smuggler base.

The battle was on.

-----

The sneak attack had worked well, and the smugglers seemed to have been caught unawares.  The asteroid base, a large red-brown rock with small buildings and launch bays sprouting from its rocky surface at random angles, hurriedly disgorged a large number of ships.  Mostly cobbled-together Ugly starfighters, but also modified transports crammed with weapons, rushed to meet the attacking Imperials.

TIEs and smuggler fighters clashed in high-speed chaos, their normally dangerous engagement made more-so by the unpredictable presence of fast-moving small asteroids.  For a few minutes the smugglers seemed to be holding their own, with casualties on both sides being roughly level.  Then the Imperial capital ships arrived.

As soon as they were within firing range, they opened fire, but so did the station.  As Ardus has predicted, the smugglers had indeed armed their base with modern weapons, and dozens of shots erupted from a score of hidden turrets and emplacements, raining fire upon the oncoming forces.  The Blazing Crown rocked under a volley of impacts, and instantly the bridge was ringing with damage reports and shield strength updates.

“Return fire!” Ordered de Maquel, and Egrasl hurried to relay the command.  Quickly the Star Destroyer rained lasers on the asteroid base, but a combination of heavy shielding and tough metal deposits in the rock kept damage to a minimum.

Again the Blazing Crown shuddered under the fire from the base, and de Maquel scowled.  “What’s the status of the target?” He snapped at a sensor operator.

“Ninety eight percent shield strength, sir,” Came the reply.  “We are barely damaging it.”

The Captain cursed and looked to his XO, but Egrasl had no ideas.  Both they and the enemy were hitting each other as hard as they could, but it seemed that the shields of the Imperial vessel would fail before their foe’s did.

Ardus knew what was happening and resolved to do something about it.  Summoning a junior bridge officer to take his station, the former Gunnery Chief made his way across the bridge to the man who now served in his old post.

“Drobi,” He said quickly, “How much power are you ordering the crews to divert to the weapons?”

“We are currently at one hundred and two percent of recommended safety,” Replied the younger man.  “I don’t know how long we can keep going at that rate without frying the systems.”

Ardus nodded and turned and hurried across the command walkway.  Striding up to the Captain and the Lieutenant Commander, he said, “Captain, I believe we can boost weapons power!”

Egrasl glared at Zail, angered instantly by the fact that the lower ranked officer had bypassed him and gone straight to the Captain.  “Lieutenant!  There is a chain of command on this ship and you should follow it!” He snapped.

Captain de Maquel ignored the impropriety, however, and urged Ardus to continue.  “Let’s hear it, Zail,” he said.

“We can boost power to the weapons systems by another ten percent, maybe a bit more,” Said Zail quickly.  “That should help us punch through those shields all the faster.”

“You are no longer Gunnery Chief,” Snarled the XO.  “If you had bothered to check with your successor, you would know that we are already above the safety limit for those guns!”

“And the limit is wrong,” Said Ardus firmly, glaring down Egrasl and then turning his gaze on the Captain.  “Sir, I have operated those guns since the day that they and this ship first went into battle.  I know they can handle it, but only for ten minutes or so.”

Egrasl snorted.  “After which we can’t fire at all!”

“The rate we are taking damage,” Said de Maquel, “We will be crippled well within ten minutes anyway.”

Zail nodded.  “Indeed, sir.”

“Do it!” Ordered the Captain firmly, and then pre-empted his XO's protest with a silencing glance.

Ardus spun on the spot and promptly returned to the Gunnery Chief.  Drobi, his former subordinate, was eager to listen to Zail, and responded quickly to his orders.  A few moments of redirecting power and over-riding safeties, and the Blazing Crown’s weapons roared with new life and vigour.

Zail preyed that it would enough.

-----

As the Star Destroyer’s shields teetered on the brink of collapse, the asteroid base’s shields began to weaken enough for random shots to get through.  Unlike the random fire of the smugglers, however, the Imperial gunners of the Blazing Crown were cunning and precise with their shots.  Here and there blasts landed on the enemy turrets, devastating them with pinpoint accuracy and reducing the fire that their foes could bring to bear.

The tipping point of the battle came and went, and it tipped in favour of the Empire.

The Blazing Crown’s shields began to stabilise even as their foe weakened, and though their weapons began to fail a mere minute later, the damage was done.  The rest of the flotilla seized the initiative and finished the work that they had started.

As the asteroid’s shields fell and its guns went silent, shuttles full of Stormtroopers launched from the Imperial capital ships.  The base fell within half an hour.

-----

In the aftermath of the battle, Ardus found himself summoned to the Captain’s office.  As per usual he stepped inside and waited for de Maquel to gesture to the guest chair before being seated.

“Excellent work back there, Lieutenant,” Said the Captain.

“Thank you, sir,” Replied Ardus.

De Maquel smiled.  “Egrasl was pretty angry at you, but I think he was just annoyed that he did not think of it himself.  He’s too much of a stickler for protocol and regs to push the ship that far beyond the safety limits.  Still, it’s going to take days to repair some of the damaged power conduits.”

“I stand by my decision, sir,” Said Zail confidently.

“You do, don’t you?” Mused the Captain.  “The sign of a fine officer, one of many signs in fact.  Which makes my next decision all the easier.  Lieutenant Zail, I am promoting you to Lieutenant Commander, effective immediately.  Congratulations!”

Ardus’s eyes went wide.  “I... thank you, sir!” He said, stumbling a little for words in the shock.

“Your first task shall be to draw up the crew roster for next month’s shifts,” Continued de Maquel.

“Sir?” Asked Ardus, confused.  “Isn’t that the XO’s job?”

“So it is,” Confirmed the Captain, “Which is why you are getting that post too!  Commander Egrasl is being re-assigned, and I need someone I can trust to fill his shoes.  Unless you don’t feel you can handle it...?”

“I shall do my best, sir!” Said Zail quickly.

“Excellent, Commander,” Said de Maquel, rising and shaking Ardus’s hand.

The Alderaanian soon left the office, feeling one very happy man.  This would be his best letter home to Sillana and the kids in a long time.

OOC:
Word Count 2618.  Ardus is now thirty-eight, and I have only just made him a Lieutenant Commander.  This slow advancement is a deliberate effort to keep with the established canon of the Imperial Navy, where the likes of Gilad Pelleaon attained the rank and station of Captain at the age of 55.  As for the reference to Admiral Osvald Teshik, this was intended to be Grand Admiral Teshik, but this part of the story is set five years before the creation of the rank of Grand Admiral.

After Action Report: Ardus enjoys some shore leave with his family, discovering that his son Pherik has become interested in Imperial Naval history, and his youngest son Geaden is showing all the signs of becoming a vet like his mother.  Later, Ardus ascends to the rank of Lieutenant Commander and XO of the Blazing Crown after their ship defeats a smuggling operation. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
December 3, 2011 8:52:35 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
1 BBY, Eighteen years into the reign of Emperor Palpatine
“...and so I think Lashran is wasted where he is and needs a transfer to the hangar bay,” Said Ardus Zail, wrapping up his crew evaluations.  “I think we need a tech of his skill maintaining the TIEs.”

“Agreed Commander,” Said Captain de Maquel, accepting the datapad of reports that his XO handed him across the office desk.  “As ever, very thorough and very complete.”

“Thank you, sir,” Said Zail.  He had only recently been promoted to full Commander, and his superior had only grown more demanding.  To the delight of both men, however, Ardus had proven up to the task.  Still, he was exhausted from the extra work, and suddenly felt his fatigue catching up with him.  He stifled a yawn, but the Captain did not miss the twitch of the mouth.

“Tired?” Asked de Maquel.  “You better get some sleep.  You have a long trip ahead of you.”

“I’ll sleep on the shuttle,” Said Ardus.  “I hate long trips, and there is precious little else to do before I reach Anaxes.”

“Understood,” Said the Captain.  “Well, we are done here.  You are dismissed, Commander.  Depart when you are able.  Have fun at the conference, and give my regards to the family when you reach Alderaan.”

“Thank you, sir,” Said Zail, and departed the office.

-----

The shuttle took a day to travel from the Blazing Crown, and Zail was plenty rested as they dropped from hyperspace in the Anaxes system.  The Commander was sat up front with the pilot, staring out of the cockpit window, and beheld the spinning mauve and azure planet before him.

“Anaxes,” Said Ardus, feeling awe just from the sound of the name.  For centuries the centre of naval might for the Republic, now the base of the Imperial Centre Oversector, with a duty to defend the Core (including the capital of Coruscant).  Several warships floated in orbit of the prestigious fortress world, and Zail stared at them in wonder.

And for him, the grandson of a native of that planet, Ardus felt an even stronger connection than merely that of a naval officer seeing the centre of his service.  Anaxes was the original home of the Zail family, and there were, no doubt, many of his kin still on that world.  He wondered idly if there were any monuments to his grandfather Jadion that he should visit.

The shuttle swept down through the clouds and homed in on the famous Anaxes Citadel.  Still a look of awe remained glued to Zail’s face, for the gleaming complex was almost legendary throughout of the galaxy.  On the polished parade grounds, the highest honours of the Navy were bestowed on the very best of the Empire.  In the Citadel were offices, meeting halls, training centres, research labs, and more.  In many ways it was Anaxes, not Coruscant, that was the heart of the fleet.

The shuttle landed and Ardus disembarked, standing on the landing pad in the shadow of the Citadel.  As he crossed to meet the figure waiting for him, the shuttle lifted off to head back to the Blazing Crown.

“Commander Zail!” Said the man, “Welcome to Anaxes.  I am Lieutenant Mycal.  May I take your bag?”

“Yes, thank you Lieutenant,” Said Ardus, handing him his duffel.  “I trust I am in time for the conference?”

“Indeed you are, sir,” Replied Mycal.  “It won’t be starting for another few hours.  I believe you are heading to Alderaan when it concludes in two days?”

“Indeed,” Said Zail.  “Got some leave due.  I trust transport has been arranged as I requested?”

“Yes, sir,” Said the other.  “It’s all been arranged.”

“Excellent.  Now, lead on to my quarters.”

-----

Grand Admiral Osvald Teshik was a huge figure of a man, with a neatly trimmed goatee and stern eyes.  He bore the white uniform of the newly formed rank to which he and only eleven others had been raised, a symbol of the authority and trust placed in him by the Emperor himself.  Teshik spoke with gravitas and insight, and Zail had no problem with paying attention to him as his lecture went on.

At the front of the hall full of hundreds of officers from around the fleet, the Grand Admiral spoke at length about the growing rebel threat.  So far it was all merely pirate raids and uprisings here and there, but there was a growing sense of pattern and direction behind the acts.  Zail had no doubt that these insurrectionists would soon be brought to heel, but the discussions of tactics and Imperial strategies were fascinating.

Finally the day’s meetings ended, and the Grand Admiral cracked a joke about getting back to his desk work.  That brought a smile to the lips of the assembled Imperials, for they all knew Teshik’s reputation as a warrior.  And while being commander of all naval forces in the Core was a great honour, no-one present envied the amount of paperwork and reports the job must entail.  Having the legendary officer as a guest speaker, even for an hour, was an honour.

Outside, dusk was appearing on the horizon of Anaxes, and Ardus decided to take a walk around the Citadel before calling it a night.  He walked the halls and plazas, so full of history and tradition, and stopped to admire the statues to heroes and the monuments to the fallen.  He paused for a while before a memorial to those who served and died in the Clone Wars, and thought of his long-dead Aunt Elise.

His wanderings took him beyond the main complex, and into the larger city, the world’s capital, Pols Anaxes.  Old-fashioned carriages meandered through the streets, more advanced vehicles being forbidden aboveground (though more advanced transportation systems ran under the city).  Even at this late hour, the city was busy, with many of the locals (mostly humans) travelling between bars and restaurants.  The clean streets and peaceful people reminded Zail of Alderaan, and he could readily understand how his grandfather had made the leap from this world to the other.

He toyed with the idea of getting something to drink, but something else caught his eye.  A small shop, that looked like it was about to close for the day, had a very bright window display, covered with trinkets and souvenirs.  One of them caught Ardus’s eye, and he found himself staring at it.

Entering the store, he approached the short man behind the counter.  “Hey, you still open?”

“Sure,” Said the man with a raspy voice, “What can I do for you?”

“In the window,” Said Zail, “You have a holo-emitter...”

The shop owner smiled.  “The one shaped like the Citadel?  Yeah, one of our top sellers.  Want one?”

Ardus nodded, and reached for his credit chip.

-----

The following day a parade of Admirals and Captains gave talks on everything from anti-piracy to the changing command structure in response to the growing power of the Moffs and Grand Moffs.  Ardus paid attention and studied all he could, and wondered just how long it would be before he reached those august ranks and became the one giving the lectures.

Finally, the conference came to an end, and Zail boarded the shuttle to Alderaan.  The few hours of the trip felt like an eternity, but soon enough he was coming in to a landing on Aldera.  No one greeted him at the city’s starport, but that was okay.  He knew that they were busy.  Calling a taxi, he travelled out to the large house that he and Sillana had purchased a couple of years previous.

Ardus let himself in through the front door, taking a moment to admire the large two-story home and mentally thanking his officer’s salary.  Beyond the entrance hall, he found himself in the living room, and the family gathering was already in full swing.

His loving wife, Sillana, hugged Ardus the moment he entered, and was the first person he noticed.  She whispered, “Glad you could make it,” in his ear and then led him to a chair set aside for him.

Those gathered were not big in number, but they were family, and Zail could not think of a finer party.  His brother, Etran, was present, still looking like the roguish heartbreaker that the whole family adored.  Sat near to him was their sister Adria, so much the regal image of their mother, and her husband, Quentin Iltris.  From his humble beginnings, Quentin had risen recently to become a local politician of some fame.  Adria was ever supportive of him, and her winning smile and ladylike image had certainly helped her husband’s career.

Away from the older people, the teenagers lurked.  The Iltris children, Hedrin and Delilah, chatted easily with their cousins, Pherik and Geaden.  The eldest of those present, nineteen year old Pherik, rose and walked over to his father upon seeing him enter.

“Hey dad, welcome back,” Said the younger Zail, his bright blue eyes the mirror of his father, and they even sported the same unruly black hair.  They looked so similar, and both men saw their past and future in the other.

“I wouldn’t miss your big day,” Replied Ardus, mentally adding that his duty to the Navy had already cost him more ‘big days’ in the lives of children than he would care to admit to himself (even the day of Pherik’s birth).  “You all packed for Corulag?”

“All sorted,” Said the young man breezily, “I leave on the morning transport.”

“It’s a good University,” Mused Ardus, pleased that his son had gotten into such a fine core world centre of learning.  “A course in linguistics and xenoanthropology will serve you well, whatever you choose to do in life.”

Pherik smiled.  “You mean, if I choose to pursue a military career, right?” Asked the youth, amused by the thought.

Ardus raised surprised eyebrows.  “And your room full of naval history, memorabilia, and model Star Destroyers is just, what, an idle whim?”

The other shrugged.  “I haven’t decided anything,” Said Pherik, “Not yet.  Now, moving on to more important matters, I note that you are the only relative present who hasn’t provided me with a present!”

“So like your mother,” Murmured Ardus, and heard Sillana laugh from nearby.  “Okay, here it is,” He said, and reached into the bag he was carrying.

Pherik’s eyes lit up at the sight.  He knew at once what it was.  “The Anaxes Citadel!” He breathed, having read so much about it.

“And not just a beautiful replica,” Said Ardus, and thumbed the button beneath.  Suddenly the ornate holo-emitter flared into life, projecting an image of the four members of the Zail family, taken during their trip to Crevasse City the year previous.  “Something to remember us by while you are away,” Explained the father.

Taking the gift, Pherik smiled.  “Thanks dad,” He said.

Ardus was about to say something, when the door chimed.  He frowned, wondering who it could be.

“I’ll get it,” He said to Sillana, headed to the front door before she could offer to go herself.  Walking to the entrance, he keyed the release and the door shot open to reveal two figures, a man and woman in their late sixties.

“Mother, father!” Breathed Ardus, stunned by the presence of the parents he had had no contact with in years.  He knew that Sillana sometimes took the kids to visit them, and of course his brother and sister had remained part of their parents’ lives, but he had not spoken to them in almost twenty years.

“We...” Began Kenth Zail, the strong and powerful man suddenly seeming so nervous in the presence of his estranged son.  “We heard that our grandson was leaving Alderaan...” He said at last.

“We wanted to say goodbye,” Said his wife, the haughty Deliliah Zail.  “If... if it was okay with you?” She asked, and Ardus could not recall when his mother had asked his permission for anything.

On another day, Ardus may well have turned them both away, but today felt different.  Something about having all the family together touched the Imperial Commander, and he found himself taking a deep breath.  He let it out slowly, feeling nineteen years of anger drain out of him, and nodded.

“Come in,” He said at last.

The rest of the evening had its ups and downs, but slowly the family got past the awkwardness and something magical happened.  For the first time ever, the Zail family of Alderaan seemed united and complete.

By the time the night ended, Ardus felt more content and more at peace than he had felt in a long time.

How was he to know that this was the last time he would see most of them alive?


OOC:
Word Count 2129.  This post contains a second reference to Grand Admiral Osvald Teshik, my favourite non-Thrawn GA.  Also, this post represents a bit of a retcon for my character, Pherik ‘Serpent’ Zail.  When I first joined the VE, I submitted in his bio that he went to university on Corulag and studied ‘linguistics and xenobiology’.  Only now, months later, have I realised my mistake.  It was meant to be ‘linguistics and xenoanthropology’ (xenobiology?  What, was I going to make him a medic or something?).  Since no story or CD post has made reference to my character being adept in either, I figure this is an easy change to make (and will now amend it on my wiki page).

After Action Report: Ardus, now a Commander, heads home on shore leave.  He stops at Anaxes, home of his grandfather, to attend a series of lectures on the changing role of the Navy, including one by Grand Admiral Osvald Teshik.  Ardus then proceeds home to attend Pherik’s nineteenth birthday before the young man heads off to university on Corulag.  He also begins to patch up some long overdue family disputes. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
January 24, 2012 10:25:29 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
The Battle of Yavin, Nineteen years into the reign of Emperor Palpatine
Commander Ardus Zail surveyed the bridge of the Blazing Crown with satisfaction.  After seven years as the XO of the old but still powerful warship, he and Captain de Maquel had forged the crew into a well-oiled machine.  Officers went about their duties with quiet competence and dedication, needing only the minimum of Zail’s time and attention.

Time and again Ardus had been praised for his leadership of the crew, and it was for this reason that his name was being floated around at High Command.  Rumour was that Zail was being lined up for a captaincy of his own ship.  Just what type of vessel did not matter (though one of the big Imperial – Class Star Destroyers would obviously be his first choice), Ardus was just eager for his own command.

He had mentioned his hopes for promotion in his last message back home to Sillana on Alderaan, but thus far his wife had no sent a reply.  She was normally more prompt with her letters from home, so Zail assumed she must be busy at work.  No matter, he would see her next month on his upcoming shore leave.

Suddenly, the internal coms officer spoke up.  “Commander, the Captain requests your presence in his office.”

“Very well.  Lieutenant Ureen, you have the bridge,” Said Zail, turning swiftly on the spot and marching towards the back of the command deck.  He did not bother to knock before entering, as he knew that if de Maquel summoned him then there was no need.  In he marched and snapped to attention before the desk at which the Captain was seated.

“Better sit down for this one, Ardus,” Said the CO solemnly.  In recent years, Alek de Maquel’s dark hair had greyed and his once slim goatee had filled out into a full (though trim) beard.  This had only added to the Brentaal man’s air of authority.  However, something about his tone of voice and his demeanour told Zail that something was wrong today.  The authority was gone, and sadness was in its place.

“Sir?” Asked Ardus, confused.  “Has something happened...?”

“Yes,” Said the other officer simply.  Reaching behind him to an array of shelves filled with medals and honours, he reached for a bottle of Corellian ale and, without even asking Zail, poured out two full glasses.  Handing one to the XO, the Captain went on.  “Drink, my friend.”

Ardus took a swig of the bitter-tasting drink, and fought off the guilt he felt at partaking of alcohol while on duty.  Whatever the other man was about to tell him it was serious.

De Maquel took a deep breath and then, as was his style, just went for it without preamble.  “Two days ago there was an incident involving the Rebel Alliance.  Imperial analysts are still working out the how, but the fact is that they hit Alderaan.”

Zail felt his stomach tighten, the lack of a message from home suddenly being cast in a new light.  “What... what did they do...?” He found himself asking.

“They blew up the planet,” Said the Captain bluntly before taking another sip of his ale.

“Wh... what?” Breathed Ardus, convinced that he had misheard.

“I’m so sorry, my friend,” Said De Maquel, and there was no mistaking the genuine concern and sorrow in his voice.  “Your world is gone, and your people...” He trailed off, unsure how to continue.

“My... family?” Asked Zail, his voice weak.  “Were there any survivors?”

The Captain shook his head.  “Whatever the Rebels did, it was fast.  I am afraid that your family... there is no hope, Ardus.  I... I can’t offer anything to console you...”

The CO seemed at a loss for words, the sheer magnitude of the catastrophe rendering him speechless.  Zail was beyond listening to him anyway, too lost in his own thoughts.  Images of his wife and youngest son swirled through his head, and his stomach churned as if he was about to be sick.  “May... may I be excused from my duties... sir?” He summoned the strength to ask.

De Maquel nodded.  “Please, take all the time you need, Ardus.”

The Commander did not even have the presence of mind to thank the other, as he turned and walked in a daze from the office.

-----

Tears and pain.  So much sorrow that Zail thought his body would crumple under the weight of it all.  Could you die from such despair?  Ardus had no idea, but at that time he was finding out.

Zail lay upon his bed, agonised merely by looking upon the hologram of his family that he kept by it.  How he had made it to his quarters he had no idea, and while he had summoned the focus to walk in straight line, but he could see the concern on the faces of every crewman he passed.  None of them knew about the destruction of Alderaan, but no-one could fail to miss the torment upon Ardus’s face and know for certain that something was wrong with the XO.

Hours passed, though how many he could not say.  At some point Zail slipped into sleep, but it brought him little respite from the horrors.  He dreamt of Sillana and young Geaden, ripped asunder by a great firestorm, though of course he had no idea of the specifics of their death.  And when Ardus awoke, for the most wonderful of brief moments he thought it was all a nightmare and nothing more.

And then the horrid reality sank in, and the pain returned anew.

Around his fourth or fifth time of waking, Zail rose to the sound of his door chime.  “Go away!” He called, though his voice was cracked and weak.

“Please, sir, I need to speak to you!” Spoke a person from the other side of the cabin door.

Ardus frowned.  He did not recognise the voice.  His first guess upon hearing the door chime was that it was one of the senior staff, probably even the Captain, as they were the only ones on board he allowed himself to get close to and call friends.  This voice was different, young, nervous.  Who was it?

Rising slowly from his bed, Zail looked down at the crumpled uniform he had neglected to remove, and tried to smooth it with his hand.  Quickly he decided that he did not care how he looked, and walked instead to open the door.

The person standing at the other side was a fresh-faced Petty Officer, one of hundreds of non-coms that filled out the roster of the Blazing Crown, and not one to whom the First Officer could put a name.  The man, plump of cheek and wide of eyes, was clearly nervous.

“Please, Commander Zail, I need to speak to you on a matter most urgent,” Said the boy, who could not have been past his mid-twenties.

Something about him got Ardus’ interest.  “Come in,” He found himself saying, stepping aside to permit the other entry and gesturing to a couple of chairs.  Once both men were seated, Zail asked, “Who are you?”

“My name is Elson, sir, Karl Elson.  I have come to speak to you about... Alderaan,” He said eventually, as if hesitant to speak the word aloud.

A shot of pain lanced through Ardus, but forced himself to stay focused.  “Are you...?” He asked, now searching for a familiar accent in the youngster’s voice.

“No,” Said Elson, “No, I am from Naboo, not Alderaan.  However, I have certain... friends who know of the destruction of your planet, and wish to help.”

“Help how?” Asked Zail, now deeply suspicious.

Elson pulled out a data disc.  “My friends pulled this from the Alderaan satellite grid just before the planet... before the end,” He amended, careful not to upset the Commander.  “We are showing it to all who will listen, who want to know the truth.”

“What truth?”

“The truth about what really happened,” Said the Petty Officer, “And who is really responsible.”  He handed the disc to Ardus, and then said, “I leave that for you to examine at your leisure.  I shall be back in twelve hours if you want to talk about it.  Until then, Commander,” He said quickly, and rose to depart.

Zail did not even notice Elson leave, and just stared at the disc in his hands.

-----

Ardus watched the video a dozen times or more.  It had been enhanced and enlarged from an image caught by chance, so the picture was a little grainy, but he saw what he needed to.

A grey moon, a battle station of colossal proportions, fired, and then the image was lost.  There was no fleet, no chain reactions of bombs, nothing in conventional warfare could explain the sheer power of a single shot reducing a planet to rubble.  Again and again he watched, his mind trying to get to grips with it all.

Also included in the data was a report on the ‘Death Star’, the battle station that he was watching.  The technical specs, the sheer size of the monstrosity, were almost beyond Zail’s ability to comprehend.

Elson’s data disc had rounded out the technical data with extracts and quotes from the official records of the Death Star’s construction.  Ardus did not need to read them to understand that this weapon had been built by the Empire.  The sheer size of the station indicated Imperial design, as no other power in the galaxy could even conceive of building such a thing.

He knew also that Elson had to be with the Rebel Alliance, for only they could and would get hold of and distribute this information.

Commander Ardus Zail sat in his room, a storm of thoughts running through his head.  His family were gone, his whole planet was gone, and the Empire to which he had dedicated nineteen years of his life was responsible!

It could not be!  His whole being stuggled against the impossibility of it, and he was too confused for rage or sadness, and instead he was lost in a limbo of emotional turmoil.  He felt like he had to do something but could not figure out what!  He felt like he was going mad!

He did the only thing he could, he slept, though again he found little respite in his dreams.

When Elson returned, Zail answered him at the door.

“I’m listening,” Said the Commander, and invited the Rebel into his quarters.

OOC:
Word Count 1750.  This was a big part of the story of Ardus Zail that I wanted to tell.  Ardus is a family man, and the loss of that family is devastating.  I read that the Empire originally lied about who destroyed Alderaan, but that the Rebels got the truth off world and spread it.  That added an extra dimension to the story that I had not originally intended, but it worked out well!

After Action Report: Commander Ardus Zail is shaken by the death of Alderaan.  He believes it was the Rebel Alliance that were responsible, until he is shown the truth to the contrary.  Now not sure who to believe and who to hate, Zail wrestles with his loyalty to the Empire and the ghosts of his family. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
February 12, 2012 11:25:04 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
The Battle of Yavin, Nineteen years into the reign of Emperor Palpatine

Ardus sat in his room, and listened to the man across the table from him speak.  The young Petty Officer, Karl Elson, was far from a charismatic speaker.  In fact, he spoke too quickly, and he had a nervous edge to him.  However, there was an earnestness about him that got Zail’s attention, a passion to the man.  Elson clearly believed in his cause, and badly wanted Ardus to believe in it too.

“The Empire must fall,” Said Elson.  “Palpatine has been in power too long, and the system he has built is growing corrupt.”

Commander Zail could scarcely believe what he was hearing.  “You people seriously think you can stop the entire Empire?”  He snorted.

“The Alliance is strong!” Insisted the other man.  “We have been cataloguing atrocities like Alderaan for years,” He said, and noted Ardus’s twitch of pain at the mention of his destroyed home.  “Every crime the Empire commits sees more and more people flock to join the Rebellion.  Some day we will have enough supporters to...”

“To what?” Demanded Zail, growing impatient.  “What, are you going to attack Coruscant?  Blast your way past a few dozen, or even few hundred Star Destroyers, storm the most fortified planet in the galaxy and simply arrest the Emperor?  The Confederacy of Independent Systems could not stop the old Republic, even with legions of droids, state of the art ships, and the backing of thousands of planets!  The Empire’s military is much stronger than the Republic’s, and your little Rebel Alliance does not seem even a ghost of what the C.I.S. was!”

“Some day,” Insisted Elson, determination on his face, “We will bring the Empire down.  But that day can only come if experienced leaders like yourself join us.”

Ardus looked at the young man, saw the belief written on his face, and his shocked outrage ebbed.  Calming, the Commander said simply, “They blew up my home.  How can you fight something like that?”

The Petty Officer just glared at him.  At that moment Zail wondered how pathetic he looked to Elson, for his words were those of a beaten man, one cowed in the face of overwhelming power.  “How can we not fight it?” Asked the youngster at last.

The Commander stared back.  Slowly, he raised his hands to the red and blue rank plate upon his chest.  Removing it, he held it in his hands and said, “I worked a long time for this.”

Elson nodded.  “As I did for mine,” He said.  “But let me ask you.  Why did you don that uniform?”

“To help bring order to the galaxy,” Said Ardus firmly.  “To build a safe place for my family to live in.”

“And yet it was men wearing that uniform that have killed your family,” Pressed the Petty Officer, finding eloquence in truth.  “You are not abandoning the Empire.  It has abandoned you.”

Zail dropped the rank plate to the table, glaring at it like it was a bloody dagger that had murdered his kin.  “What do you want of me?”  He asked.

“There is a Rebel base near here,” Said Elson, not giving an exact location yet.  “I have spoken to several other crewmen who are outraged about Alderaan, and we plan to jump ship and make for the base on our next shore leave.  The Alliance is building its own military, its own fleet, and they need experienced officers like yourself.”

Ardus nodded.  “I need to inform my son, Pherik.  He is at college on Corulag, and is the only relative I know who has survived.  If I were to betray the Empire, I have no idea what they would...”

“I understand,” Said Elson.  “Send a carefully worded message to your son, but don’t give too much away.  Imperial Intelligence have eyes and ears everywhere.  You have time, though, as we won’t be able to leave for another few days yet.  I shall speak to you then.”

And with a short bow, the Rebel rose from the table and departed the room.

Zail sat back in his chair, pondering the decision he had made.  Abandon the Empire?  Could he really do it?  After they had killed his family, could he really not?

And one thought kept coming back to him.  Betraying the Empire was one thing, but could he also betray Captain de Maquel?  He had been a good friend to Ardus over the years, had really helped him come along as an officer.  More than that, he had been a mentor and confidante, and had seemed genuinely sorry to tell Zail of Alderaan’s loss.

He paused at that memory.  Did the Captain know what had really happened to Alderaan?  Did he know about this ‘Death Star’ thing, or had he been duped by Imperial propaganda too?

Ardus could not shake the thought that de Maquel was in the dark too.  He was a good man, and Zail owed it to him to tell him the truth.  The Captain would understand once he saw the evidence about the Death Star, he knew he would!

Lifting his comlink, he said, “Captain, its Zail here.  Sir, can you... can you come to my quarters?”

The concerned voice of Alek de Maquel answered.  “Of course, Ardus, I shall be right there.”

-----

De Maquel arrived quickly, and soon was sat across from Zail in his quarters.  Each held a glass of Corellian ale and they took a gentle quaff of the harsh drinks before speaking.

“How are you doing, my friend?” Asked the Captain, concerned for his First Officer.

“Not good, sir,” Said Ardus honestly.

“Please, please.  Alek,” Insisted the other.  “We can leave rank aside for once.”

“Very well, Alek,” Said Zail, stumbling over the name.  “I asked you here because, well, I’ve found out something about Alderaan.”

“Oh?” Exclaimed de Maquel with a frown.

“It was...” Ardus suddenly found it hard to speak.  “I was destroyed by the Empire,” He managed after an awkward pause.

“Ah,” Said the Captain, utterly unsurprised.

“You knew?” Asked Zail quickly, his voice suddenly accusing and eyes narrowing with anger.

“I was under strict orders not to tell you,” Said de Maquel.  “But yes, I knew.”

“Well then why...?” Began Ardus, his voice rising, but the other cut him off sharply.

“Because I thought you would lose perspective!” Snapped the Captain.

Perspective?” Echoed Zail.  “We are talking about the destruction of an entire planet!”

“Yes we are!” Retorted de Maquel.  “One planet out of a million!  One world to send a message to hundreds of thousands!  A message that I thought you understood!”

“And what message is that?” Asked Ardus through clenched teeth.

“That we can’t go back to the Clone Wars, kriff it!” Thundered the Captain.  “Cards on the table, Ardus?  You want the truth?  That anti-Imperial nutcase, Bail Organa, was a leader in the Rebel Alliance.  Maybe even one of its founders!  Your home, my friend, had become a Rebel base, full of sympathisers and weapons stockpiles, all getting ready to start another war, all ready to plunge this galaxy back into the madness that you and I fought against twenty years ago.”

Zail stared back, taking this all in but saying nothing.

“So yes,” Continued de Maquel, “Grand Moff Tarkin blew up the planet!  He fired the first shot, he struck before the Rebels could, and your family got caught in the crossfire.  And I am sorry, I genuinely am, that innocent people had to die.  But tell me this, how many more innocents will suffer and die if these Rebels take us into another war?”

“That doesn’t make it right,” Said Ardus flatly.

“I’m not saying it does,” Replied Alek, his words also suddenly lacking emotion.  “I am saying that it is the lesser of two evils.”

“I will think on what you said,” Said Zail, taking another deep drink of his ale.  “Now please, leave me be.”

The Captain thought of speaking more, but no, he had made his case.  “Okay, Ardus, I’ll go.  And I won’t threaten or cajole you, I won’t ask you think of your career.  Just, please, as a friend, consider my words.”

The Commander did not reply, and de Maquel put down his empty glass and let himself out.

-----

Elson entered the Commander’s quarters, clearly nervous to be meeting Zail again so soon after their last meeting.  The Rebel clearly feared being seen and having to answer awkward questions, so Ardus hurried him in quickly.

“You wanted to see me, sir?” Asked the Petty Officer.

“Yes,” Replied Ardus thoughtfully.  “I have been going over what you told me about the destruction of Alderaan, and I have some questions.”

“Questions?  Of course,” Replied Elson.  “I shall help anyway I can.”

The Commander nodded.  “Very well.  Then tell me this.  Why?”

The other man made a quizzical face.  “Why...?”

“Why Alderaan?” Zail elaborated.  “The Empire exalts humans over aliens, and Core world people above those from the Rim.  Why obliterate a human dominated Core world?”

Elson took a step back, hearing some anger in Ardus’s voice.  “We... we are not sure...”

“Were there Rebels on Alderaan?” Demanded Zail, now with open hostility.  “Was Senator Bail Organa a leader in the Alliance?”

After a pause, Elson nodded and spoke quickly.  “We had been building strength there quietly for some time and...”

“So there were military targets on the planet?” Snapped Ardus.  “You neglected to mention that before!”

“I... we...” Stammered the Rebel.  “They killed millions of innocents!  Surely any small military advantage is not worth...”

Ardus felt his rage explode inside him.  “Frak the lot of you!” He roared, and pulled his sidearm.

The other man had no time to react, as the stun bolt caught him full in the chest.

-----

Petty Officer Karl Elson writhed in agony, rattling the chains that kept him secured to the cell wall.  The IT-0 Interrogation droid went about its work, injecting chemicals that made the Rebel’s nerves explode with indescribable pain, all the while as Commander Zail and Captain de Maquel looked on.

“He spoke of others,” Said Ardus, his face dark and his tone angry.  “Rebel sympathisers on board who plan to defect during next shore leave.  Make sure he gives up their names before we execute him.”

De Maquel nodded.  “Very good, Commander.  I am glad you turned this man in.  I was worried about you...”

“No need to be worried, sir,” Replied Ardus firmly.  “This man tried to manipulate me.  His Rebel friends painted a target on my world, and then tried to make out like it was the Empire’s fault that my family got killed when the fighting began.  I want nothing more than to see this insurrection crushed.”

“Excellent, Commander.”  And so saying, the Captain led his XO out of the cell and into the quieter corridor beyond, to allow the droid to continue its work.

“One thing, sir,” Said Ardus, as the two officers headed back towards the bridge.  “I was hoping I may have a couple of days impromptu leave.”

De Maquel nodded.  “You want to go and see your son?”

Zail nodded.  “I have a lot to speak to him about, and I would rather do it in person.  If you would rather I not depart the ship so soon after being tempted to defect then I understand...”

The officer from Brentaal waved a hand, stopping further explanation.  “No, no need.  I trust you, and I understand.  Leave granted, Commander.”

“Thank you, sir.”

-----

The wind rustled gently through the trees that lined the impressive courtyard of the University of Corulag.  Ardus found Pherik sitting alone on a bench, looking uncomfortable.  A datapad sat next to the student, as if he was trying to read it but had could not.  From the bags under his eyes, Pherik was clearly having trouble sleeping as well as studying.  His father knew that he must have heard about Alderaan.  How could he not?  The whole galaxy was talking about it.

“Hey son,” Said the elder Zail as he approached.

“Dad?” Asked Pherik, standing up and trying to compose himself.  Tears welled in his eyes to see his only living relative.  “I tried to contact you, but fleet communications has been a mess and...”

“I know, I know,” Said Ardus, and embraced his son in a tight hug.  “I am so happy to see you, Pherik.”

“Thanks dad...” Said the youngster, hugging him back.

After a few moments, they sat down on the bench and eventually it was Ardus who summoned the strength to speak.

“Your mother, your brother...” He began.  “No one... no one survived...”

“I know,” Said Pherik, a tear now breaking free of his right eye and rolling down his cheek.

“I don’t know what to do... about funerals and...” Ardus shook his head.  “I can’t even begin to sort this out.”

“You don’t need to, dad,” Said Pherik, seeing the pain his father was in.  “We will have time for that after you have found a new job and...”

“New job?” Queried the Imperial Commander.  He had neglected to wear his uniform on his leave, and wondered if that had confused his son.

“You haven’t heard?” Asked Pherik, stunned.  “Makes sense, I suppose they would keep even you in the dark.  Dad, it was not the Rebellion that destroyed our home, it was the Empire!” He announced, as if imparting a great secret.

Ardus feared that something like this would happen.  The Rebels had been very thorough in distributing their intel on the Death Star, and that a politically active student population, such as on Corulag, had picked up on it was of little surprise.

“I know,” Said the elder Zail, “But I am not quitting the Navy.  The Rebels made the Empire do it, Pherik.  They had secretly turned our world into a base for their insane revolution and the Emperor had to do something.  They are the real ones to blame!”

His son just stared back at him for a few moments, and then, the sadness gone and anger in its place, Pherik said, “You cannot be serious!  You are defending the murder of mother, Geaden, and our whole family!?”

“I am defending the legitimate galactic government,” Retorted Ardus, getting defensive.  “A government that did what it felt was necessary to avoid another war!”

“I can’t believe this!” Snapped Pherik, rising from the bench.  “I have heard of Imperials who defend Grand Moff Tarkin’s actions, but I never believed for one second that my own father would be one of them!”

“Now listen here, young man!” Snapped Ardus, also standing so that he could look his tall son in the eyes.  “The Empire has done a lot of good in this galaxy, and we owe the Emperor many times over.  My career gave us a good home, and is paying for this excellent education of yours, so don’t you dare...”

“No!” Snapped Pherik.  “I do dare!  I don’t need you or your blood money!  I will never forgive the Empire, and as long as you defend them, I will never forgive you!”

And so saying he turned and stormed off, leaving Ardus standing alone and shocked.

However, the Commander told himself that it would be okay.  His son would come around eventually.  It might just take some time.

Until then, he had an Empire to serve.

OOC:
Word Count 2566.  At this point Ardus is pretty lost.  He lost most of his family, and the one remaining person who matters to him (his son, my character, Pherik ‘Serpent’ Zail) has turned his back on the Imperial officer.  From here there is nothing in Ardus’s life but service, and despite whatever the Rebellion says about why Alderaan was destroyed, nothing will sway Ardus from the Empire, the only thing keeping him going.

After Action Report: Commander Ardus Zail comes to the conclusion that tragic as Alderaan’s destruction was, he cannot put his own kin above the stability of the galaxy.  He pledges himself anew to the Empire, though this comes at the cost of his relationship with his surviving son, Pherik. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
February 25, 2012 2:45:52 AM    View the profile of Serpent 
4 ABY, The Battle of Endor
Ardus Zail stood stalwart at the side of his Captain, as he had for the last four years.  Four years since the loss of his home planet, four years since his son had stopped talking to him for siding with the Empire.  Ardus did not even know where Pherik was.  The younger Zail, the only other member of their family still alive, had left the University of Corulag before graduating and departed for the Outer Rim.  Ardus did not even know if his son was still alive anymore.

On his uniform, Ardus still wore the rank of Commander, something he had envisioned surpassing before now.  However, Naval High Command had not seen fit to pull out the Captain’s chair for a son of Alderaan, not with so many of his countrymen leading figures in the Rebel Alliance.  Yet Zail had born the stigma, proved himself time and again.  He was an Imperial, and had never hesitated in his duty or in carrying out his orders.

Such as now.

“Commander, commence the bombardment!” Barked Captain de Maquel.  In the viewport before them they could see a small space station, a minor refuelling depot at a remote hyperspace waypoint in the Mid Rim.  Over the last twenty minutes, the Blazing Crown and its smaller escort vessels had torn through a pathetic ragtag force of Rebel starfighters, leaving this depot, their base, defenceless.  And now the time had come to obliterate it, slaughtering all one hundred and fifty people within.

“Understood, sir,” Said Zail crisply, carrying out the order.  Turning to the Weapons Chief, he said, “Lock on all forward batteries.  You may fire when ready.”

The neon green beams erupted forth a split second later, tearing through the flimsy construction of the depot and igniting the massive fuel stores to explosively brilliant effect.  Ardus saw a few escape pods try to flee at the last moment, but they were engulfed by the expanding series of fireballs that had moments previously been their base.

Zail winced slightly at the bright display, but as the weapons fire of the Venator Star Destroyer died down and the din of the explosion dissipated, he was able to take a more thorough look.  Little remained of the Rebel base, and certainly none of their enemy had survived.

“Target annihilated,” Announced the Commander.

“Excellent,” Said Captain de Maquel, a smile on his lips.  “Stand down alert stations, recall our TIE fighters, and then set course for Bilbringi.  We are due there to dock and resupply for a few days.”  And so saying the CO marched off to his office to write up the mission report for their minor but important victory.

Ardus took command of the bridge and returned to his duties, the death of the Rebels swiftly forgotten from his mind.

-----

They exited hyperspace some time later, the expansive and amazing mechanised docks of the Bilbringi Shipyards spread out before them.  Zail used to love the times that the Blazing Crown was docked, allowing him to get off ship and see a new place.  Yet now the novelty had long since faded, and the sight of the shipyards just made him think of the mountain of paperwork he would have as many of the Star Destroyer’s crew requested shore leave.

“Incoming priority message from the Shipyard, sir!” Piped up the Com Officer in the crew pit.  “Its marked for the attention of the Captain!”

Ardus frowned, wondering what it could be about.  “Put it through to his office.  Then contact the shipyards and request permission to dock.”

It was a full quarter of an hour before a birth opened that was big enough for the Blazing Crown.  Though military ships were given docking priority over civilian ones, Zail could not help but notice the large number of Imperial Navy vessels at Bilbringi, and wondered if the delay to docking was due to so some large taskforce or operation being under way.

Eventually their time came, and Ardus ordered the pilot to take them in.  Once docking was complete, Zail was just about to give orders for repairs and resupply, when he noticed Captain de Maquel re-enter the bridge.

Right away he could tell that his friend and superior was not good.  In just the fifteen minutes since that priority message had come in from High Command, de Maquel seemed to have aged a decade.  His eyes were haunted, his shoulders and posture slumped, as if something had suddenly stolen the life from him.

“Sir, is everything okay?” Asked Ardus, concerned.  What could have happened?  Zail himself had looked that way on the day that he had been told about the destruction of Alderaan.  Was it that something had happened to the Captain’s family too?

“No, nothing is okay,” Said the Captain, his voice strange.  “Coms Officer!” He called towards the crew pit with as much strength as he could muster, “Put me on ship-wide speakers.  I have something to tell the crew.”

De Maquel took a deep breath, lifted a microphone to his mouth, and spoke into it.  His voice was as loud and as clear as always, for he was a Captain of the Imperial Navy and not given to mumbling or sounding weak.  Yet there was a hesitation to his words that Ardus had never heard, a deep and fearful uncertainty.

“Crewmen of the Blazing Crown,” He began, “This is your Captain.  It is with heavy heart that I must inform you of recent developments.  In the week since we departed on our last mission, there was an incident at an obscure Outer Rim world called Endor...”

He trailed off, and during the pause Zail’s mind raced.  Endor?  He had never heard of it.

“Our beloved Emperor himself,” Continued the Captain, “Nobly used himself as bait in a trap to ambush and eradicate the main fleet of the Rebel Alliance.  The trap...” De Maquel hesitated, and standing close at his side, Ardus could make out tears welling in his eyes.  “The trap... failed.  The Emperor... was killed,” He declared.

Gasps ran through the bridge, and no doubt through the entire Star Destroyer, at the revelation.  Zail’s eyes widened, the news hitting him with such force that his knees instantly went weak.  Every ounce of officer training and self-control he had was called on for him to remain standing tall, projecting strength for the crew, but inside his mind was thrown into instant turmoil.

“At the Battle of Endor,” Continued de Maquel, speaking quicker now that the truly horrific news had been spoken, “Lord Vader also perished, Grand Admiral Declann was killed, and Grand Admiral Teshik was captured.  The Executor, pride of the Navy, was destroyed, and the elite Star Destroyers of Death Squadron were routed.”

Ardus listened to the litany of disasters with growing dismay.  This was not possible!  In his wildest nightmares he could not have envisioned such a catastrophe!  The pure horror must have shown in his eyes, for de Maquel glanced at him, sympathy flashing across his face, and then the Captain concluded his address to the crew.

“Grand Vizier Sate Pestage has taken control of the Empire, with the backing of the Ruling Council.  For now, the Navy, and indeed the Empire itself, is depending on the strength and courage of loyal soldiers such as yourselves to see us through this dark time.  I have faith in you all, and I know you shall not let me down.”

And so saying he signed off, handed the microphone to the Com Officer, and walked silently off the bridge.

-----

The following weeks passed in a blur of activity, but none of it was positive.  Pestage proved to be a weak leader, and after a few bold Imperial leaders defied him, others soon followed suit.  The Empire began to fall apart, and Ardus and his ship found themselves at the mercy of a Navy High Command that no longer seemed capable of acting as a single entity.

Different admirals and Moffs gave and countermanded orders, sending the Blazing Crown rushing from one assignment to the next without any real clue if there was an over-riding plan or not.  Sometimes squabbling warlords gave contradictory orders, and to obey one admiral was to anger another.  Word had even reached Zail that some Imperials had begun firing on others, the signs of a growing civil war that the Grand Vizier and the Ruling Council seemed ever more incapable of averting.

In all this, Captain de Maquel, a true believer in Emperor Palpatine and a devotee of the New Order, was not faring well.  The crew needed their CO to be strong in this uncertain time, and he was anything but.  More and more often de Maquel left Zail in command of the ship, and on those rare occasions that the Captain did visit the bridge, he looked ever gaunter, more haggard, and too lacking in sleep.

Ardus did his best to hold things together, but it was tough.  He spoke often to the crew about having faith in the Empire, but he was no longer sure what Empire he referred to.  The administration on Coruscant claimed to be the true inheritors of Palpatine’s regime, but the squabbling members of the Ruling Council reminded Zail too much of the selfish Senators who led to the fall of the Republic.  Privately he began to admire the military leaders, admirals and generals, who struck out on their own.

Finally, the inevitable began to happen among the crew of the Blazing Crown, and Ardus had to take firm action.

“Are these them?” He asked to the Stormtrooper sergeant standing guard at the entrance to the Star Destroyer’s brig.

“Yes, sir,” Replied a firm voice behind the white helmet.  Gesturing to one of the cells, he pointed to a trio of crewman behind the shimmering blue force field.  “We captured them while trying to desert the ship.  They do not deny their crimes.”

Zail nodded and approached the cell.  Coming to a stop, he looked at each of them, non above the rank of Petty Officer, and saw them stare at him in turn.  “What have you to say?” He asked.

“Let us go!” Protested the bravest of the three.  “We want to go home!”

“You swore an oath to serve the Empire,” Said Zail.  “You cannot simply...”

“But we can!” Snapped the deserter, interrupting.  “The Empire is dead, Commander!  Everyone can see it!  Our home worlds have already fallen to the New Republic, and we want to go join them and leave this dead regime far behind!”

Ardus’s blue eyes, the source of his old name ‘Coldeye’, hardened with anger.  “The Empire is not dead!” He protested, but even as he spoke the words he wondered.  “I should execute the three of you for desertion and treason, but I have no idea when we are getting replacement crew.  So I shall leave you here for a few days to think over your actions.”

And so saying he departed.

-----

That evening, Ardus visited the Captain in the other’s quarters.  De Maquel was dressed in his uniform as usual, but it was unbuttoned and hung loose around his limp shoulders.  Zail felt terrible for the man.

“So I have left them there,” Concluded the Commander.  “Unless you would rather them executed?”

“No,” Said de Maquel, lifting a glass of ale to his lips.  He and Ardus were both seated, relaxed in private and away from the eyes and ears of the crew.  “No, there is no need to execute the crew for desertion when the Captain is considering it too.”

“Sir?” Asked the XO, surprised and suddenly concerned.

“I have been corresponding with Fleet Admiral Majere, who plans to break with the Empire.  We will join him,” Said de Maquel, sounding resigned to his course of action rather than enthusiastic.

“But... Captain...” Began Ardus.

“Its over, Pherik,” Said the other sadly.  “This new group that Majere plans to join, they call themselves the Vast Empire.  They believe in order and justice, and the strength of the military.  I am sure that this ship and this crew will be better off in their ranks than under that fool pretender Pestage.”

“I see,” Was all Zail could think to say.

“Part of the price of our loyalty was refuge for our families,” Continued de Maquel.  “The Vast Empire controls several habitable worlds.  I am already arranging for my sister’s family to move there.  The same courtesy will be extended to the rest of the crew.  If they have loved ones in Imperial space and they can make the journey, they had best do it soon, before Intelligence learns of Majere’s plans and goes after our kin.”

“Are you certain about this, sir?” Asked Ardus.

The Captain shrugged.  “I am certain about nothing anymore, my friend.  But we can’t stay here.  Sooner or later the Empire will fracture into an all-out shooting war.  We need to choose sides now, so the choice is made.”

“I shall inform the crew,” Said Zail.

“Thank you, Ardus,” Said the CO.  “You have been the best XO I could ever hope for, and you deserve better than what you have got.  Maybe the VE will look past your Alderaanian heritage and give you the Captaincy you deserve.”

“Thank you, sir,” Said Ardus, and then excused himself.

It was the last time he would see Captain Alek de Maquel alive.

-----

They found his body in the Captain’s quarters the following afternoon, killed by a blaster bolt to the head.  There was no hint of foul play, and Zail knew at once that his friend had taken his own life.  Ardus stood over the body with some guards and medics, and felt a sadness he had not known since the loss of Alderaan.

“Sir, we found this,” Said one of the Stormtroopers on the scene, handing the Commander a datapad.  Ardus took it and read the suicide note there-on.

To Pherik

I am sorry that it had to end this way, my friend.  I do believe that the Vast Empire is best for you and the rest of the crew, but good as it may be, it is not my Empire.  What I believed in died at Endor, and now there is no reason for me to go on.

Take care of my sister and her family, they are all that survive me.  I always regarded family as important, and yet I never took a wife of my own.  Just one more regret, I suppose.  I do hope that one day you and Pherik can patch things up, and I know how much you long for that day too.

As my final act, I hereby wish it known that you are to inherit the Blazing Crown after me.  Congratulations on your overdue promotion, Captain Zail.

Your friend, Alek de Maquel


“Good bye, sir,” Said Ardus to the corpse, a single tear rolling down his cheek.

OOC:
Word Count 2493.  Obviously, given the fact that no Venator Star Destroyers were present at the Battle of Endor, I could not put Ardus in that key event.  Nor was I ever intending to.  I wanted to take this chance to show how I think loyal Imperials would have reacted to the sudden and unexpected death of a man who had led the galaxy for over thirty years.  I found Fleet Admiral Majere in the wiki’s history page, and figured I’d try to tie my story as closely to the founding of the Vast Empire as I could.

After Action Report: The Blazing Crown is participating on an attack on a minor Rebel base.  They win, but news reaches them of the death of the Emperor.  Like many Imperials Ardus is dismayed, but it is Captain de Maquel who takes the news the most badly and commits suicide.  Ardus becomes Captain in his stead. 
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  RE: Serpent’s Father: The Story of Ardus Zail
March 4, 2012 9:39:51 PM    View the profile of Serpent 
11 ABY, Seven years after the founding of the Vast Empire
Ardus Zail, now in his late fifties, was still strong and healthy, but there was definitely something missing in him lately.  Less to do with age and physical matters, the lethargy that had crept over the Captain in recent years was more emotional in nature.

The galaxy was still in turmoil, torn apart by the New Republic and the Empire, not to mentions the plethora of petty domains and warlords that had sprung up.  In keeping with Captain de Maquel’s final wish, Ardus had pledged his ship and crew to the Vast Empire, and for years now had served it loyally, seeing it as the only credible alternative to the anarchy elsewhere in the galaxy.

It was a morning like any other.  He sighed as he rose from his bed and donned his uniform.  The galaxy was at war, and he was a warrior, but for some reason Ardus had no appetite for battle.  Yes, the Blazing Crown was not a powerful vessel when compared to the newer ships floating through space, but it could still hold its own against cruisers and frigates.

No, his lack of desire to fight was nothing to do with a shortage of faith in his ship, or even its crew.  It was Zail’s lack of direction.  He had lived for the Navy (four of them, in fact) and now, as lines traced his face and his hair greyed, the Navy no longer seemed enough.

And yet it was all he had.

Slowly, he emerged from his cabin and made his way to the bridge.  His XO, Lieutenant Commander Hajinis, saluted smartly, and Zail returned the gesture, quietly ordering the crew to resume their tasks.  He was just about to make his way wearily to his office, there to look over another day of mundane reports, when his First Officer spoke.

“Captain.  A personal message arrived for you last night.  I had it routed to your computer.”

Ardus frowned.  Who could it be from?  Curious, he walked into his office and brought up the message on his terminal.  His eyes widened in shock.

To: Father
From: Pherik
Message: I don’t really know how to write this.  It’s been so long since you and I said our final words on Corulag, and I still find myself revisiting our final conversation in my mind.  I’m not the person I used to be, dad.  I wonder if you are.  It took me a while to track you down, but I did it.  I’ve been through a lot, and I really need to talk to you.  After what I said, I won’t be surprised if you don’t want to meet.  However, if you do, I will be in the Vast Empire next week.  Can you meet me on Lotaith?


Ardus read and re-read the words, a sudden rush of emotion running through him, more potent than anything he had felt in years.  Primary among the flood of feelings was relief.  For whatever reason, fate had brought Ardus’s only living son back into his life.  Though he felt fear about how their meeting might turn out (and he dreaded a repeat of the argument that had ended their last encounter), he could not pass up this opportunity.

After the slightest of hesitation, Zail hit reply, and sent a message of his own.

-----

Ardus chose not to wear his uniform for his meeting, though he wondered why.  He had never felt ashamed about his job or doing his duty, but he thought that Pherik might view it as a painful reminder of what had happened all those years ago.  Still, part of him knew that whatever he wore, his son would still look at him as an officer of the regime that had killed his family.

The aged Captain sat in the bar, the nearby starport a hive of activity in the distance beyond the window.  A wide variety of beings, mostly spacers, filled the tables around him.  Several were off-duty officers like himself, but many more were the legitimate (and not so) traders that the Vast Empire depended on to supply its growing economy.

Suddenly, Zail’s keen eyes picked up a figure entering the room and glancing around.  The man was bordering on tall, with scraggly black hair of shoulder length, and rakish stubble.  He was dressed in rough fringe clothing, and his blue eyes shone with a bright intensity that mirrored Ardus’s own.  Pherik Zail had changed a lot in the last decade, but his father knew him at once.

Ardus waved a hand, and Pherik noticed him immediately.  Slowly, nervously, the younger Zail approached the table.  Ardus rose in greeting, and then suddenly realised he did not know what to do.  A hug?  A handshake?  Finally he decided on simply gesturing for his son to sit.  Once both were seated, Ardus spoke first.

“Thank you for... for coming here,” Said the Captain.

“I... I felt I had to...” Said Pherik, his voice and Alderaanian accent undiminished by the passage of time.  “You look well,” He said, the rather lame comment a feeble attempt to begin a conversation.

“No I don’t,” Said the old Captain with a smile.  “I’ve changed, but so have you,” He observed, gesturing to the other’s scruffy appearance.

Pherik nodded, but did not speak.  Then finally, “Father, I...” He took a deep breath, found some control, and tried again.  “I left the university,” He said at last, starting at the beginning.  “I got a bunch of jobs on the Outer Rim.  I worked on cargo ships mainly.  And then things went wrong, really wrong.  I screwed up dad,” He said, and Ardus could see tears welling in his son’s eyes.

“Hey, easy there, Pherik,” Soothed his father, suddenly concerned.  “Whatever it is, you can tell me.”

Pherik wiped away the tears before they could fall.  “I got mixed up with some bad people.”

“Are they after you?” Asked Ardus, suddenly fearing that his son was in danger.

“No,” Pherik assured him.  “No, they are gone.  That’s the problem.  It was the Empire that saved me.  They... they did just what you always said they did.  They fought the corrupt, and saved those who could not save themselves, like me.”

“I see,” Said Ardus, and he thought he truly did.  “You always thought the Empire was about nothing more than tyranny.  Now you’ve seen the good it can do, and you aren’t sure.”

“I will never forgive what happened to Alderaan!” Snarled Pherik, suddenly angry.  “But... I can also no longer excuse the chaos that exists in the galaxy.  This bizarre ten-way war, it’s exactly as you said it would be if the Rebellion won.”

Ardus sighed.  “Yes, and sad as it is, the Imperial Remnant can’t put this mess right.”

“And this Vast Empire can?” Asked Pherik, seeking to understand why his father had shifted sides.

The Captain shrugged.  “Maybe.  It’s not as large as the old Empire, but it lacks the weaknesses of racism and bigotry.  There is honour here, Pherik, the type of honour I have long sought.  I’m happy here.”

“Forgive me for being blunt, father,” Said the son, “But you don’t look happy.”

“I am a man with no family, no legacy,” Ardus said, and then immediately held up a hand to forestall any further comment.  “Yes, I know why that is, and I shan’t debate it.  But Pherik, if you and I can somehow patch things up...”

The other man nodded.  “I understand.  And I... I think I’d like to have my father back too.”

“Then let’s order some drinks, and talk about the last ten years,” Said Ardus, and they both smiled.

-----

After half a dozen drinks each and several hours, the two men were feeling more at ease with each other, though there was still a tense wariness between them.  Ardus wondered if that would always haunt them.

“So are you still serving on the Blazing Crown?” Asked Pherik with disbelief, trying to keep things semi-joking.

“Of course,” Replied Ardus with pride.  “I now command her, in fact!”

“Dad, those Venators were dated when I was in high school.  Can’t this Vast Empire give you an ISD or something?”

Ardus scowled.  “We’re not exactly a big navy, son.  They don’t have ISDs to spare for an old warrior like me.”

“Sounds like you could do with more ships,” Observed Pherik.

“We could do with more crewmen first,” Countered Ardus.  “What about it?”

“Me?” Echoed his son, coughing on his ale.  “You think I should join the Vast Empire?”

“Why not?  You said yourself you have no life left on Phaeda, you want to help fix the galaxy, and as a kid you always loved reading about naval warfare and history.”

Pherik shook his head.  “I’m not even a citizen of the Vast Empire.”

“We take in new people all the time,” Said Ardus, serious.  “And as a ranking officer I could easily sponsor your application to the Academy.”

“I’m not big on nepotism dad,” Said Pherik.

“Nor am I,” Replied the Captain.  “I’ll get you into the Navy, but after that you are on your own.  I won’t pull any strings on your behalf.  Whatever accolades and victories you achieve are yours alone.  I have no intention of taking the challenge or achievement from your career.”

Pherik looked at him, his blue eyes intense.  Ardus could see that the young man was, almost in spite himself, giving the idea some serious consideration.  Eventually he said, “Okay.  I’m in.”

-----

A few weeks later, Ardus stood on a landing pad on Lotaith, a military transport nearby.  One by one, people showed up to board the transport, which would bear them off to the Vast Empire’s Naval Academy.  Captain Zail kept an eye out, and soon enough he saw his son arrive to take his place on the shuttle.

“Hey dad,” Said Pherik as he arrived.  The young man had shaved his face and cut his hair short, and was now dressed in a smart blue outfit of pseudo-military cut.  “Come to make sure I’m going to go through with it?” He asked, a hint of reproach in his voice.

“No,” Ardus assured him, “I come bearing a gift.  To inspire you through the Academy and in the years beyond.”  And so saying he produced a large plaque with a medal framed neatly upon it.

Pherik took the gift, amazement in his voice.  “This... this belonged to great-grandfather?” He asked, surprised by what he saw.

“Yes,” Confirmed Ardus.  “It was the highest honour that Commodore Jadion ‘Sunset’ Zail ever achieved, and given his career that is saying something.  You’ve never seen it before because I kept it with me on the Blazing Crown, as a good luck charm of sorts.  I give it to you now.”

His son took the item, holding it as if it were a fragile and ancient antique.  “Thank you,” Was all Pherik could think to say.

“Now go, son,” Said Ardus, gesturing to the shuttle.  “Your future awaits.”

Pherik hurried off, but at the entrance paused and turned to wave goodbye to his father.  Ardus returned the gesture, and then Pherik was lost from sight.

Captain Zail watched the ship depart, and then took off towards his own shuttle, there to return to his vessel.  There was a distinct bounce in his step as he moved, a lightness and confidence that had been missing for years.

Ardus knew why that was.  Some men sought power and greatness, but such things were not for him.  He only ever wanted a family and a ship, and now, with Pherik back in his life and his captaincy of the Blazing Crown, he had both.

Ardus ‘Coldeye’ Zail was, at last, content.

THE END

OOC:
Word Count 1966.  And at 32,783 words total, the saga is now over.  At 57 years old, Ardus Zail is a pretty respected Captain in the Vast Empire.  I opted to keep him as one of those men who, despite being offered the rank of Admiral, declined it so that he may continue to serve on a starship.  This is partly because of how I see the character of Ardus, but also because I think it would be dangerous for my character, his son, to have a family member as influential as an Admiral.  Hope you enjoyed this tale, and well done if you read it all the way through!

After Action Report: Now a Captain in the Vast Empire, Ardus reconciles with his son Pherik, and sponsors his application to the VE Naval Academy. 
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