Dnarion
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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March 22, 2010
9:21:39 AM
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Been gone due to lack of internet service...hope to catch up again tonight if possible. Sorry for my absence. |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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March 22, 2010
2:22:24 PM
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Welcome back, Dnarion. You ought to send a report to StOrMz just to make sure, then you ought to be ready to move up into a combat squadron.
I'd like to welcome Crewman Hoff to Raptor.  Please read the first two posts in the Training Run (you can find it in the Naval Storyboard) and the last two to three and then make a post of your own. Once that is done, I or another Trainer will grade it and give you your next orders.
-Drac NAT:1/MCPO Drac/B-1/S:137 Raptor/W:1 Javelin/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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March 23, 2010
9:29:47 PM
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On my way now. I will take care of that asap. Thank you. |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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March 23, 2010
9:56:32 PM
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Hey, Stormz, I have returned at long last. Blasted Holonet was down in my area til just recently. So, I am here to continue with my service to the Imperial Navy. Let me know what you want me to do next. Thanks. |
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April 3, 2010
8:47:56 AM
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Reporting in for training.
Story is on the way. Michizane Sugawara - Aspirant of the Blade / Scholar of the Five Rings /
Imperial Navy Intelligence Agent
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April 3, 2010
9:22:29 AM
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Welcome to Raptor, Sakura. If you have any questions about the training mission, please feel free to contact me.
-Drac NAT:1/MCPO Drac/B-1/S:137 Raptor/W:1 Javelin/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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April 28, 2010
10:00:49 PM
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Hi everyone, I'm new, and reporting for training. |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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April 28, 2010
10:06:13 PM
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Hello, Zark. Good to have you with us. Edit: Nevermind what I had here before, if you saw it. You're ready for Chapter II. Please look up the information on ID Lines in the wiki (Chapter II in the Flight School). Also, please make a mission post in the following topic: Raptor Squadron: The Training Run. Instructions for posting in it can be found in the first two posts. Best of luck, Zark. If you have any questions, feel free to approach Hunter, myself, or another VENA staffer. -Drac NAT:1/MCPO Drac/B-1/S:137 Raptor/W:1 Javelin/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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This is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didnt want to fall
But I don't have to crawl
I'm not the One with two scarred hands
Giving him the best of everything thats left of
The life inside this man
I've been Born Again.
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 5, 2010
9:54:25 PM
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Crewman Xileteros reporting as ordered, sir. |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 6, 2010
12:18:33 AM
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Welcome, Xileteros and ConAndores. 
Please read the first two posts in the Training Run (you can find it in the Naval Storyboard) and the last two to three and then make a post of your own. Also, find the Naval ID line wiki page (A link is located in the Chapter II page in Flight School), study the information, create your ID line, and add it to your signature.
For simplicity's sake, assume that your positions in Raptor Squadron are the following:
Xileteros: Alpha 2
ConAndores: Beta 2
I or another Trainer will grade the story post and ID line and either give feedback on what needs to be changed (if anything) or give you further orders.
Best of luck,
-Drac FM/MCPO Drac/Γ-3/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:1 Javelin/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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This is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didnt want to fall
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I'm not the One with two scarred hands
Giving him the best of everything thats left of
The life inside this man
I've been Born Again. |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 6, 2010
1:17:39 AM
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 6, 2010
11:03:56 AM
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Just for clarity, Xileteros and ConAndores have both been placed in their respective positions on the roster (VENA Roster is at the bottom of the Navy Roster) Naval AcademyNTO/1LT Stormz/NP Saratoga /TF:TH/3Flt/NAD/VEN/VE
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 7, 2010
2:07:51 AM
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I just posted my first story post. Don't worry that I haven't actually launched yet, it's the first of two posts. I just wanted to get what I had so far up there and get some feedback on it.
Also, in the roleplay/storytelling systems I'm used to, it's considered poor form to control someone else's character. I wanted to get an idea of what the general opinion on that was here. The other trainees seemed to be pretty liberal with it, saying what others responses were and so forth. I was just wondering if that was the way things are done here or if I should shy away from doing such things.
-Xileteros CRW/TRN Xileteros/A2/S:137 Raptor/W:1 Phoenix /mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1 Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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May 7, 2010
10:04:13 AM
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We are rather lax about it so long as you're not hurting other peoples' characters or contradicting that character's previous actions or its personality. The best way to get an idea of our attitude toward it would be to skim over a couple of old missions there in the Storyboard. Pay attention to what the vets do in those and you'll get a good idea of it. Your post looks great. I look forward to seeing the second one. On your ID line: You got very close there, with only a couple of small things to fix: -Make sure you italicize a ship's name any time you use it. In this case, you should have: mSSD Atrus-Make sure you get a dash in there between the A and the 2 on your position section. It helps in making it easy (relatively) to read. Yes, it's nitpicking.  ID lines tend to require that, though, since a problem with one will otherwise probably never be fixed. -Drac SXO/MCPO Drac/B-1/S:26 Tuk'ata/W:1 Javelin/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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This is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didnt want to fall
But I don't have to crawl
I'm not the One with two scarred hands
Giving him the best of everything thats left of
The life inside this man
I've been Born Again.
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 7, 2010
12:39:12 AM
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Sounds good. I think i'll do that. Thanks for the encouragement.
ID Line is fixed. Now, the wiki on how to build an ID line says that W:1 is Phoenix, but it says on Phoenix's page that it's deactivated. On Javelin's page it says that Javelin is the 1st wing. Which am I part of? Javelin or Phoenix? (If Javelin, should someone change the wiki on how to build an ID line?)
Thanks!
-Xileteros CRW/TRN Xileteros/A-2/S:137 Raptor/W:1 Phoenix /mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1 Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 7, 2010
1:56:28 PM
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Thank you for pointing that out, that particular wiki page has been fixed. Let us know if you stumble across any others. -(William the Conquerer)- Captain of the Overlord King of PPC 17,000 clicks and counting "Anyone who fights us is either stupid or on our enemy's payroll. Killing the latter is just business; killing the former is a favor to the universe." - Urdnot Wrex, Mass Effect "Have to trust someone to be betrayed. I never did." - Cpt John Price FM/1LT Willtconq/A-3/S:153 "Rhegent's Reign"/W:1 "Javelin"/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN /VE SXO/1LT Willtconq/C-LC Tempest/TF:X/5Flt/CSS/VEN/VE(=*A*=) (=*SA*=)(=^MA^=) [VC:G][SoV][BWC][SWC][NSR:5][CBV][NC][MC:1][SoL][CO]   |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 8, 2010
5:12:39 PM
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CRW/TRN Xileteros/A-2/S:137 Raptor/W:1 Javelin /mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1 Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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May 8, 2010
7:02:18 PM
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haha, a pun, i like this guy. -(William the Conquerer)- Captain of the Overlord King of PPC 17,000 clicks and counting "Anyone who fights us is either stupid or on our enemy's payroll. Killing the latter is just business; killing the former is a favor to the universe." - Urdnot Wrex, Mass Effect "Have to trust someone to be betrayed. I never did." - Cpt John Price FM/1LT Willtconq/A-3/S:153 "Rhegent's Reign"/W:1 "Javelin"/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE SXO/1LT Willtconq/C-LC Tempest/TF:X/5Flt/CSS/VEN/VE(=*A*=) (=*SA*=)(=^MA^=) [VC:G][SoV][BWC][SWC][NSR:5][CBV][NC][MC:1][SoL][CO] |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 9, 2010
9:12:31 AM
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You're sick, man. Lol- you know that, right? *Flash Was Here...*
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Xileteros
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 9, 2010
11:43:27 AM
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Shazam - Who's sick? Willtonq or me?
Willtonq - I'm still trying to figure out what pun I made. Care to point it out? CRW/TRN Xileteros/A-2/S:137 Raptor/W:1 Javelin /mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1 Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 9, 2010
12:23:42 AM
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my call sign, i go by "Will" -(William the Conquerer)- Captain of the Overlord King of PPC 17,000 clicks and counting "Anyone who fights us is either stupid or on our enemy's payroll. Killing the latter is just business; killing the former is a favor to the universe." - Urdnot Wrex, Mass Effect "Have to trust someone to be betrayed. I never did." - Cpt John Price FM/1LT Willtconq/A-3/S:153 "Rhegent's Reign"/W:1 "Javelin"/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE SXO/1LT Willtconq/C-LC Tempest/TF:X/5Flt/CSS/VEN/VE(=*A*=) (=*SA*=)(=^MA^=) [VC:G][SoV][BWC][SWC][NSR:5][CBV][NC][MC:1][SoL][CO] |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 10, 2010
3:45:04 AM
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Aha! Well, no pun intended, Will! CRW/TRN Xileteros/A-2/S:137 Raptor/W:1 Javelin /mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1 Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 25, 2010
7:40:36 PM
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Here i am!
I was reffered here by hunter-morell, jsut finished my first step.
Lock Terrik reporting for duty! |
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May 25, 2010
7:44:56 PM
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Eh. You probably need to work on your grammar quite a bit.
Also, I'm not a part of your training anymore. You've officially been passed off to Drac, so now you can't ask me about passing you to the next part 
A side note, please try and at least get names correct.
*Hunter-Morrell SC/CWO Hunter Morrell/A-1/S:23 "Tuk'ata/W:1 "Javelin"/Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE(=A=)(=SA=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=) [CBV.][NS-1][SWC][BRC][VC:B][SoL][NSR]
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 25, 2010
9:53:51 PM
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Alright... sorry about that Hunter-Morell.
I posted here because you told me to.... it sounded like you were saying i did something bad? :/
Alright, as i said in my last post.
Reporting for duty! |
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May 25, 2010
9:58:22 PM
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Nah. I was just giving you some pointers. It really does help a lot to work on your grammar. Try using something like Microsoft Word, which has automatic spell-check enabled. SC/CWO Hunter Morrell/A-1/S:23 "Tuk'ata/W:1 "Javelin"/Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE(=A=)(=SA=)(=ME=)(=*MAE*=) [CBV.][NS-1][SWC][BRC][VC:B][SoL][NSR]
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 26, 2010
10:55:13 AM
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Welcome to Raptor, Lock. There are two things you'll need to accomplish here: 1st: Read the first two posts in the story Raptor Squadron: The Training Run, then read the last two or three posts as well. This will give you all the instructions you need, as well as making sure you understand where the story currently is. Once you've read those, write a post of your own. I or Amacuse will grade it and contact you with the results. 2nd: Look up the data on Reports in the Flight School wiki section, then write out a report and send it to Amacuse, StOrMz, and myself. (You can add more names to the Send box by putting a comma and a space after each and then typing the next name.) Side Note: The newest addition to the Academy Staff, Amacuse, will be partnering with me in running Raptor's day to day stuff as you can tell from the mentions earlier in this post. He'll be available to ask questions to through this topic, through PM, or on the Academy's IRC channel #VENA as will I. -Drac SC/WO1 Drac/A-1/S:213 Nightshrike/W:1 Javelin/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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This is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didnt want to fall
But I don't have to crawl
I'm not the One with two scarred hands
Giving him the best of everything thats left of
The life inside this man
I've been Born Again.
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 26, 2010
7:51:25 PM
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I think you mean answer questions asked. And yes, I am the newest addition to the training staff. I look forward to that report on Thursday, Lock! Oh, as for me being on the IRC, that won't be possible for me for about two weeks due to internet issues, graduation, camping, and MEPS. But, as soon as I can, I'll be on the IRC to answer any questions asked. Chief Petty Officer Cayden "Amacuse" Tavers
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 26, 2010
9:35:25 PM
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i just... well i just finished the post. I think its good. But its not up to me is it!
So, hows it going guys? |
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RE: Raptor Topic (Training Squadron)
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May 26, 2010
9:58:53 PM
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@Amacuse: Meh...poor phrasing on my part. You know what I meant, lol. Also, reports in Raptor can come any day, not just on Thursdays. No reason to keep a good pilot here for most of a week if they're already done with everything else, after all.
@Lock: I'm going to have Amacuse grade your post and send his thoughts to me, as a bit of training for him. You should still get your results, from either him or me, within a day or two.
Edit: Having reviewed the post, I'll go ahead and comment. Your writing itself is pretty good, but until you get into combat there's not much we can grade. Please add combat to the end of your post or write up a second one that includes your combat.
-Drac SC/WO1 Drac/A-1/S:213 Nightshrike/W:1 Javelin/mSSD Atrus/TF:A/1Flt/SFC/VEN/VE
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This is who I am
This is where I finally take my stand
I didnt want to fall
But I don't have to crawl
I'm not the One with two scarred hands
Giving him the best of everything thats left of
The life inside this man
I've been Born Again.
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