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Bacredi
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  Bacredi (HWS)
July 13, 2009 8:32:05 PM    View the profile of Bacredi 
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Zhar Bacredi
Heavy Weapons
Section: Fire Support Tactics


Bacredi woke—drenched in sweat—in his makeshift one-room Tadath apartment. The air-conduit had been broken by hell knows what, and it left Bacredi with windows all open and no sheets at all. It was about eight in the morning, though, and Bacredi was able to sleep in—as he had a class at ten. He would take the SurroTransport system that spread across the planet, and would get there in ten or so minutes. Bacredi went into the refresher and wiped off the grease from his body. Once exiting, he began to put his pants and sweater on. He plopped his satchel over his left shoulder and it hung on the other side—the satchel contained Bacredi’s pistol, books, and computer terminal. Bacredi checked the time—eight thirty, he had to catch the train at nine.

He set off out into the hall, locking the door behind him. He moved into the basement from the elevator, and immediately turned into his AV-21 speeder. He jumped into the speeder and hit a switch, immediately igniting the speeder and putting the screen over the AV-21’s cockpit. Bacredi moved out into the street and set off towards the station—which was about five minutes away. He got there in four, and parked it in the ‘long term’ parking slots. He bought a ticket and arrived at the train, taking a seat and cocking his head back. The train set off towards the Tadath training facility. Bacredi fell asleep, and woke up to find the train emptying towards the training facility. He got up, showed his ticket to the conductor, and began to walk fast towards the training facility.

-- -- -- -- --

“Good day, class.” The instructor—Sergeant Major Yulia—told the entire class, which was eight people. “Today we are doing a simulation of fire support, I am splitting you all up into two fire teams. Once you are called, go to the selective sides of the room—Charlie Team is on the right, Zulu Team is on the left. Ok—James, Bacredi, Gorge, Ruggles, Zulu. Rest of you, Charlie. The gear is in the door to the left.” The female instructor petted her hair as she slowly began to walk towards the door that would soon become a war-zone. Everyone got into the camouflage gear that was assigned to them, and picked up the A280 weapons that were set for stun. They entered the room that had been assigned to them…it looked huge. 20,000 square feet at the least. They all put in their ear buds.

They all separated to separate ends of the brush battlefield. Yulia’s voice rang into everyones ear.

“We’ll start with a simple drill to get it started. My assistants set up sandbags and in between the two bunkers, a small pathway. Your squad will go into the pathway while you do covering fire at the enemy bunkers. If a member of your team gets hit, they’re out, and once the first shot is fired, it’s all game.” The instructors voice finished, and then a bullet shot out. The game was started. Bacredi and James immediately headed for the sandbags, they set down their rifles quickly and looked through their scopes—they found a target quickly and fired. The shots all missed Gorge was able to run through and into the bushes, hiding himself.

“Covering fire!” James said as more blasts came their way, Ruggles responded by ducking his shoulders as if he was going in for a tackle. He ran through, but was immediately closelined by a stun bolt that nailed him dead center. “Fuck,” muttered James. He kept up the fire as one of their men screamed covering fire, Bacredi responded by checking their pathway and firing—one man on their team was down, closelined as well.

“Cover me,” Bacredi said as he moved out into the pathway and James screamed something again. Bacredi began to fire and then just sprinted towards the end, more blaster bolts came towards him but he jumped for the end of the pathway and reached it, rolling into the bushes. Gorge was right there, and Bacredi knew what they had to do. James had to get down there. “COVERING FIRE!” Bacredi screamed, Gorge and Bacredi both plomped themselves down on their chests and fired from the bushes, hitting brush as it came out. One more enemy was down from Gorge’s blast. James made it down just in time, and began to help out in their effort.

“We need to move to the east, they are converging over there.” James said, kneeling down from enemy fire.

“Got it. Let’s go, Gorge take—” Bacredi started but Gorge was nailed in the head by a stun bolt, effectively knocking him out. “Mother of… James, I got you. Way is clear. Covering fire!” Bacredi and James by then where hiding behind a large, falsified tree. He shot in full-bursts, he checked the heat meter and made sure that he didn’t overheat. Two enemies—all that was left—ran over the pathway and James swiveled around and shot two shots, one hitting an enemy and the other missing. Bacredi raised his rifle and looked through the scope, the last enemy wasn’t expecting a blaster bolt to dodge in between his legs, and then another to hit him right in the chest.

The covering fire drill was over and now they were onto the next exercise: grenades and flanking maneuvers. "Ok, everyone get into place. We're not going into our teams for this exercise." Sergeant Yulia's voice rang into everyone's ear communication unit. "We're going to be lining up against the walls. Not in teams, and we'll be approaching everything from the sides in a flanking maneuver. Two men will be on the sandbags per line and they will throw flashbangs and at the same time fire covering fire. Everyone got it?"

They all nodded. There were several instructors on the other side, unknown of what would happen during this. All they knew is that they needed to defend their area. Everyone began to gather flashbangs and Bacredi and James both moved to the side of one sandbag, while Gromov and Gorge both moved to the sandbags to throw grenades and provide covering fire. Bacredi was at the front of the first line (the other was on the opposite side of the sandbags). "Covering fire!" Gorge and Gromov both screamed at the same time, Bacredi threw a flashbang while James moved up to Bacredi's right and fired a quick burst of his submachine gun. Bacredi charged and moved out into the flanks of the left and right. The flashbang had obviously affected the instructors.

Bacredi and the other soldier on the other flank both nodded to each other, the instructors couldn't see them. Bacredi was soon met by James and another soldier, the flank had to work. Bacredi pressed into his ear, "this is Bacredi, you guys got us covered?"

"Yeah, we'll distract them. Ready when you are." The opposite soldier said, he was on all fours, his rifle aimed as he peered through his scope.

"Now." Bacredi chucked his last flashbang over the sandbags, as did James and the other soldiers. They moved around the sandbags into a flanking position and took up another hiding position - they had made ground, however. Bacredi motioned for James to throw his last flashbang, and James did so. The flashbang threw one instructor on the ground and Bacredi and James both went out and put a quick burst into him and two bursts into another instructor. The flank they came around allowed them to fire another burst at two more instructors, knocking them on their feet. The other instructors reacted instincitvely and shot their rifles at Bacredi and James, who were closelined. They began to peel their way out of the battlefield, still in immense pain. But, as that sounded, the covering fire that Gorge and Gromov were able to fire and nail the remaining instructors.

A pathetic performance.

“Zulu Team—A for Covering fire, B for effort. Charlie Team—three hours at the gym. Class dismissed.”
First Sergeant Zhar Bacredi
Active Duty, Stormtrooper Corps

"I have opinions of my own, strong opinions, but I don't always agree with them."
[This message has been edited by Bacredi (edited July 14, 2009 8:46:03 PM)]
Bacredi
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  RE: Bacredi (HWS)
July 13, 2009 9:07:39 PM    View the profile of Bacredi 
OOC:
Zhar Bacredi
Heavy Weapons
Section: Indirect Fire Operations


Bacredi was on the transit early, and had made it to the classroom by nine thirty. He was in the classroom, fiddling with his terminal and typing up his tactics, when he checked up on the lesson he was suppose to be studying…Indirect Fire Operations. Shit, shit, shit! Bacredi thought, he had never, ever fired artillery. He checked the manual for the average artrillery and realized it was mainly computer generated and had a navigation screen, but took skill to navigate in wind, hail, rain, snow, etc—almost all conditions that wasn’t clear and no breeze, whatsoever. They apparently also would practice the use of mounted turrets in this lesson as well.

The sergeant major—Sergeant Major Yulia, who had fought in the first engagements—walked through the door. Bacredi saluted and stood up from the chair, along with the only other member of the class in there—James. The rest of the class bustled in at ten o’clock, right on time. Bacredi and the rest of his team—Zulu—for which they would be known and would be in the teams for quite awhile, went to change into their gear. “You will be allowed a pistol and a rifle, today, if you have a projectile rifle, then you must use rubber bullets.” Sergeant Major Yulia said, echoing Bacredi’s question into an answer. Bacredi chose a StA-67 and his modified IvP-18 Tropov. The gear was all placed, and when the two teams—Charlie and Zulu—got out of the rooms, there were four turrets on the tables. “Bring them out into the ‘zone’, we are going to be using rubber bullets…but they still hurt.”

They set them up near the sand bags—that is what Yulia informed them to do—then convened back at the center of the battlefield to hear the instructions. Yulia was no where to be seen, but eventually came back with a large bag of ‘glasses’—which turned out to be simulation glasses. They put them on, and a large object appeared out of the middle of the ground. They were in a war zone with these simulation glasses, and Yulia told James to step up to the artillery and fire three times at desired targets. He did so…and hit one of them. Yulia failed him. It was Bacredi’s turn, he hit ZERO. Zero. He leaned back into the ‘chair’ that was somehow holding him up and got out of the seat, he moved over near James and began to mutter about something until everyone was done.

“Glasses off.” Yulia said. “We will be going over more of this later, but for now, this will have to do. Get to your sides, you guys are just playing a drill of ‘covering-fire’ and ‘hit them with the turret’, on my shot…” he waited for all the teams to go to their respective sides. He then shot his revolver in the air. Bacredi immediately headed for the turret in the right sand-bag bunker, James headed for the left. James cocked the turret, and Bacredi made the fault of not. He pulled the trigger only to hear a faint click, while James was firing away. Rubber bullets came straight towards Bacredi, piercing the air around him, but he was able to duck fast enough. He put his hand up by the gun and cocked it—he turned back to Gorge—who was climbing a tree—and raised him on his com link.

“Gorge?”

“Gorge here.” Gorge replied, stopping for a second on the tree.

“Tell me if I’m close to the target.” Bacredi said.

“Roger that.” Gorge replied. Bacredi was going to fire from his position below the sandbags before propping himself up. He pulled the trigger and shots flung from the gun, and Gorge began to breathe into the com. “Ok—that’s your closest one, keep it there. They’re firing at James now and hiding.”

“Copy, thanks, Gorge.” Bacredi fully propped himself up and began to take control of the turret. Bacredi turned to Ruggles, who was right next to the pathway and was ushing for Bacredi. “Need covering fire?” A nod responded. “Covering fire!” Bacredi swiveled the turret around just at the head-level of the sandbags, firing impulsively with James. Gorge sniped a turret-manner, making him keel to the ground, screaming with pain. Bacredi picked off the other member of the team that was heading towards the turret. Gorge was nailed in the process, however, by the remaining turret and limped off of the tree. Ruggles hit the ground and rived around in pain. James and Bacredi were the only ones left.

Bacredi was hit by the turret swiveling, and in the same move, so was James. James and Bacredi both hit the muddy ground, turning over in the process. They were both ‘dead’.

“Zulu Team—A for effort, F for loss. Charlie Team—A’s in both, except for getting picked off as you went to the turret, Gromov. Class dismissed.” The entire class congregated outside, getting dressed quickly. Bacredi wore his suit out of the class, along with his shame.
First Sergeant Zhar Bacredi
Active Duty, Stormtrooper Corps

"I have opinions of my own, strong opinions, but I don't always agree with them."
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  RE: Bacredi (HWS)
July 14, 2009 8:34:39 PM    View the profile of Kanderin Draken 
1st Story
We're going to need a bit more information in this, you focused on cover fire and little else. What's more it became simply a battle, with very little actual training involved. You should also be including use of grenades and flanking manoeuvres.

2nd Story
My problem here is...you wouldn't be able to fire artillery at another team safely. We're talking big powerful mortars, the sort of things that will kill regardless of what you load into them. They're really not safe to be used in that aspect.

A little more explanation of what it is exactly you're firing would be nice too.

General advice, your writing tends to be a bit patchy, its like looking at a series of still frames as opposed to a flowing film. You should work on letting your sentences flow a little bit more, moving from "He moved here. He did this. He went there" to something with a little bit more filling.
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