Eagle12
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Status: Offline |  Eagle reporting for duty | June 30, 2009 3:13:45 PM  | |
all right I'm new and I'm waiting for Riqimo |
Riqimo
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[VE-ARMY] 1st Lieutenant
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Status: Offline | | RE: Eagle reporting for duty | June 30, 2009 3:14:41 PM | |
Hello, and welcome to the Vast Empire Private Eagle12. I am 1st Lieutenant Riqimo, the Assistant Training Officer 'round these parts. Most folks call me 'Doc' so feel free to do the same. By posting here you've completed the first step every member of the Army takes, posting in the academy. Congratulations. The next step in your training, is to post a biography. Character development is important in the Vast Empire, and this is just the start. Just reply here in this post. You can copy past this, and fill in what's required: - OOC:
- == Physical Appearance ==
Homeworld:
Age:
Species:
Native Language:
Gender:
Skin Color:
Height:
Weight:
Hair Color:
Facial Hair:
Eye Color:
Scars:
Tattoos:
== Background History ==
(Give about 1-2 paragraphs worth of background history for your character. This doesn't have to be long and detailed since this is a new character for you, and you need to still flesh him/her out a bit. If you do want to go into great detail, by all means do so!)
== Character's Personality ==
List/write about your character's personality. What makes him/her the way she is? Anything in particular (pet peeves, etc.) that irk your character? Etc.
Our method of writing here is in third person, so please do the same, thanks. If you have any questions, feel free to ask! Riqimo "Doc" Ray PershawVast Empire Army, Assistant Commander of Training
Imperial Navy, Adjutant Naval Tactical Officer
Imperial Center, Chief Technical Officer
Duke of Aaclu, Tadath
"Put a blaster in a citizen's hands, and you have an expendable troop. Put a purpose in his heart, and you win a soldier."A:CoT/1LT Riqimo/Tadath/VEA/VE [CotE][CDS][EW1][ES2][MSM][SC][BM]
[AS-2][SoH][CoS][GRP][VUA-Eclipse][VUA-ARC-Lambda]ADJ:NTAC/1LT Riqimo/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE (=*A*=)(=*SA*=) TRN/Journeyman Riqimo/Training 1-2/mSSD Atrus/VEDJ/VE RDO/CE Riqimo/Cepany/Rnd/VEEC/VE |
AlanRJ
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Status: Offline | | RE: Eagle reporting for duty | July 2, 2009 4:45:45 AM | |
Welcome to the Vast Empire. I hope you enjoy your time here. SL/SGM AlanRJ/1SQD/2PLT/1COM/1BAT/1RGT/VEA/VE [<3 Luckystar] [ES2] [IH] [BC] [SoH] [EW2] [CoS] [RoM] [ES1] [CCA] [SC] [GC] {RES} {MRT} [IG] [ICE]  Paladin Website http://paladin.stormtroopercorps.com |
Eagle12
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Status: Offline | | RE: Eagle reporting for duty | July 12, 2009 1:45:20 PM | |
== Physical Appearance ==
Homeworld:Earth
Age:20
Species:Human
Native Language:Spanish
Gender:Male
Skin Color:White
Height:5.2
Weight:106
Hair Color:black
Facial Hair:none
Eye Color:brown
Scars:none
Tattoos:none |
Riqimo
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[VE-ARMY] 1st Lieutenant
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Status: Offline | | RE: Eagle reporting for duty | July 12, 2009 1:52:20 PM | |
Looks like there might be a slight misunderstanding somewhere. We're in the Star Wars Universe (where Earth doesn't exist, nor does Spanish). What you are basically creating is a fictional character you will be playing in story with this information.
I also like to see you attempt to write a small background strory explaining your character's history/personality/etc. It doesn't have to be much, perhaps two paragraphs.
I look forward to your next attempt  Riqimo "Doc" Ray PershawVast Empire Army, Assistant Commander of Training
Imperial Navy, Adjutant Naval Tactical Officer
Imperial Center, Chief Technical Officer
Duke of Aaclu, Tadath
"Put a blaster in a citizen's hands, and you have an expendable troop. Put a purpose in his heart, and you win a soldier."A:CoT/1LT Riqimo/Tadath/VEA/VE [CotE][CDS][EW1][ES2][MSM][SC][BM]
[AS-2][SoH][CoS][GRP][VUA-Eclipse][VUA-ARC-Lambda]ADJ:NTAC/1LT Riqimo/mSSD Atrus/1Flt/VEN/VE (=*A*=)(=*SA*=) TRN/Journeyman Riqimo/Training 1-2/mSSD Atrus/VEDJ/VE RDO/CE Riqimo/Cepany/Rnd/VEEC/VE |
Eagle12
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Status: Offline | | RE: Eagle reporting for duty | November 15, 2009 11:50:05 AM | |
== Physical Appearance ==
Homeworld:Kamino
Age:20
Species:Human(clone)
Native Language:English
Gender:Male
Skin Color:White
Height:6
Weight:135
Hair Color:black
Facial Hair:Mustache
Eye Color:brown
Scars:1
Tattoos:0
== Background History ==
(Give about 1-2 paragraphs worth of background history for your character. This doesn't have to be long and detailed since this is a new character for you, and you need to still flesh him/her out a bit. If you do want to go into great detail, by all means do so!)
Born on Kamino,spending 10 years training and was assigned to the 324th Army battalion.After 2 years in the 324th Army battalion he was sent to the planet of Mindoir to assault and destroy an enemy base producing mini WMD(weapons of mass destruction). upon arrival enemy forces overwhelm his team.while they still punched through by the time they were in side 150/1000 men were alive.by the time they reached the WMd base generator only 25/1000 men were alive. after a while only Eagle and the Captain remained.while trying to attach and Imperial WMD the captain was shot and killed.2 minutes later the Imperial WMD was ready and Eagle's hand was on the trigger.Eagle was able to escape the enemy base and ran 7 kilometers away from the base. The very moment he reached a safe distance he was shot in the leg and fell on the trigger.BOOOOOOOOOOOM.The WMD blew behind him.he got up to look at his masterpeice.45 seconds later flying debris fell and stabbed him right through the stomach.He survived.after that he became the commander of the NEW 324th Army battalion.
== Character's Personality ==
List/write about your character's personality. What makes him/her the way she is? Anything in particular (pet peeves, etc.) that irk your character? Etc.Within the first 10 years of his life he was ecstatic and energetic.after the wipe out of his unit in The Battle Of Mindoir He became extremely anger and strict to his new unit. |
Eagle12
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Status: Offline | | RE: Eagle reporting for duty | November 15, 2009 3:13:43 PM | |
Homeworld:Aboard Star Destroyer Beta 5000
Age:32
Species:Human
Native Language:Basic
Gender:Male
Skin Color:White
Height:6
Weight:135
Hair Color:black
Facial Hair:Mustache
Eye Color:brown
Scars:1
Tattoos:0
== Background History ==
Born on Beta 5000 Eagle watched as the Imperial ships flew across the galaxy. At the age of 18 he followed his father's footsteps and joined the Imperial Marine Corps. He was in training for 3 years and was at the top of his class. At the age of 21,he began working as a spy in enemy territories. At the age of 23 he signed up to be in the 324th Army battalion. At the age of 25 he became lieutenant of his unit. At the age of 30 his unit was sent to Mindoir to destroy an enemy WMD production base. Unfortunately 850/1000 men were killed before they could even enter the base. By the time his remaining unit entered the base only 50 men remained.When they reached the generator and charge location only Captain Red,Commander Sank and Lieutenant Eagle remained. When Eagle was placing the charges the Captain was shot and killed. After the charges where placed Eagle and the Commander began to run. Moments after Eagle was past 7 kilometers away from the base he was shot in the leg and fell on the trigger.After the explosion,Eagle could not see the Commander. He went back to find him and saw him laying down on the ground with debris in his neck. 45 seconds after he saw his commander dead on the ground,debris finally began to fall. 1 piece of debris came down and stabbed him in the stomach. Thankfully he survived. The day he was going to leave the Marine Corps when he was interrupted by the colonel of his ship and was asked to be the commander of the NEW 324th Army battalion. Eagle refused,or so he thought. The colonel said that The Empire would pay his parents 10,000 Imperial credits every 2 months,even if he died. Eagle then accepted and he is now 32.
== Character's Personality ==
Eagle was a happy and ecstatic person until the age of 18 when he became serious but is funny when the time comes. At the age of 30 he loses most of his sense of humor replaced by anger,but when the time comes(very rare)he cracks some jokes. [This message has been edited by Eagle12 (edited November 15, 2009 3:21:56 PM)] [This message has been edited by Eagle12 (edited November 15, 2009 3:22:46 PM)] [This message has been edited by Eagle12 (edited November 15, 2009 3:29:13 PM)] [This message has been edited by Eagle12 (edited November 15, 2009 3:30:01 PM)] [This message has been edited by Eagle12 (edited November 15, 2009 3:34:53 PM)] |
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