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Loony
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Simple beginning

June 27, 2009 4:43:19 PM

=Personal appearance=Tall,young,medeum build,full head of hair,smiling all the time .

Home World

antooine

AGE :15

Species :human

Known language :Galactic basic

Gender :male

Hight :6' 2''

Weight :234 lbs

Facial hair :None (shaved)

Eye color :Hazel

Scars :none

Tattoos :none

=Biography= I was born on Dantooine and lived on a small farm for most of my life . I had always wanted to do something exiting . With my parents permission I left my home to join empire .

= Characters Personality= Shy,friendly,open minded .

Riqimo
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RE: Simple beginning

June 27, 2009 4:49:24 PM

Loony wrote:=Personal appearance=Tall,young,medeum build,full head of hair,smiling all the time .

Home World antooine

AGE :15

Species :human

Known language :Galactic basic

Gender :male

Hight :6' 2''

Weight :234 lbs

Facial hair :None (shaved)

Eye color :Hazel

Scars :none

Tattoos :none

=Biography= I was born on Dantooine and lived on a small farm for most of my life . I had always wanted to do something exiting . With my parents permission I left my home to join empire .

= Characters Personality= Shy,friendly,open minded .

It's a good start, you have the personality down, as well as the fact he was a farmer before coming to the VE.

Do you think you can expand your biography to maybe two paragraphs? Maybe even write a small story of his average day on the farm.

Good luck!

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RE: Simple beginning

June 28, 2009 7:42:00 AM

Welcome to the VE, Loony!

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RE: Simple beginning

June 28, 2009 9:24:56 AM

Welcome to the Vast Empire.

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