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pmanning18
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pvt pmanning18 bio

August 15, 2008 11:41:59 AM

Species: Human
Native Language:Basic
Hair Color: black
Eye Color: brown
Skin Color: white
Height: 6"2
Weight: 212 pounds
Age: 26
Full Name: pmanning18
Physical Build:Strong
Homeworld: Corellia

[This message has been edited by pmanning18 (edited August 15, 2008 11:50:31 AM)]

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RE: pvt pmanning18 bio

August 15, 2008 1:54:39 PM

Backround History
Pvtpmanning18 was born on Planet Corellia.His parents both worked at a factory producing civillan vehicles.He had a pretty good life until one day when he was 19. His best firend who was a rebel was brutally killed by a stormtrooper.He was furious and decided to join the rebellion. One day five years later on a routine patrol on planet Dathomir. His squad was ambushed only 3 of the guys in his squad got away. But,shortly after they were captured and then they were then brainwashed and put into the impereal stormtrooper divison.

Personality
Strong,Loyal,Vengeful

Strenghts:
Fast,Agile,Smart
Weaknesses:
Not good at stealth

[This message has been edited by pmanning18 (edited August 15, 2008 6:59:58 PM)]

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RE: pvt pmanning18 bio

August 15, 2008 7:51:23 PM

First off, welcome to the Corps.

Second, it's a good biography start, but I want you to put more thought into this.

Make this less of a summary/vague, and more like a story about your character's history/personality.

Also, use the following format and rules/guidelines for your biography: http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/10263/

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