Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6661 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | Immortalis | May 26, 2008 2:18:22 PM | | General Cosmic silently strode down the hall of the Stormtrooper Corps Academy training facility with a data pad tucked away in his left pants pocket. The data pad contained orders for a new type of mission scenario - was it unorthodox? No. It was realistic and a good evaluation of where the new recruits were with their combat skills. The mission required the recruits to be placed in the heat of battle right from the get-go. They are given a specific task, and they are to execute that task without getting "killed". In other words, you have New Republic forces engaging you, and should you get shot, a simulation of the pain from a real blaster will be rendered (well, at least your skin will feel the sensation of pain). Cosmic approached the large steel doors of the barracks and slid them open with a swift push of his right hand. As soon as the doors opened, the sound of a chattering, laughing crowd seeped into his ears. The trainees were all sitting at-and-surrounding a circular table - apparently watching an intense game of Sabacc. One of the mingling Corporal's spotted Cosmic standing in the doorway out of the corner of his eye, and immediately stood erect and gave him a crisp salute, "Attent hut!" The room's laugher quickly faded, and everyone rose to their feet, facing Cosmic with a salute. "General Cosmic, sir, I apologize. We didn't see you there, sir." said Corporal Finney. Cosmic returned the salute, "At ease." He walked over to the gathered trainees and quickly scanned over their uniforms to be sure everything was tucked in and clean. Once satisfied, he pulled the data pad from his pocket and handed it to the nearest Private. Cosmic nodded to Finney, "Thank you, Corporal, that'll be all." Finney gave a nod, saluted, and quickly left the room. Cosmic then turned his attention to the recruits, which were passing around the data pad and reading it over. "For some of you, this is your first mission. For others, this may be your second. Nevertheless, this will be a first for all of you." Cosmic motioned toward the data pad in a nearby Private's hands, "That mission will be unlike anything you've experienced before: you're going directly into the heart of enemy fire and behind enemy lines." A few "oohs", "aahs", and a slight gasp floated in the air. Cosmic continued, "Your objective is within a guarded military bunker on a sticky, hot jungle planet. Your target is a New Republic Colonel by the name of Trunx. He'll be securely guarded by numerous NR guards, and the militia will be out and about in the jungle as well in scout patrols. You will be dropped in via Lambda-Class shuttle five clicks before enemy lines. You will need to get behind enemy lines in order to eliminate your target and eliminate any opposing forces. You will do this all on foot, so this will also act as a test to be sure you're in fit condition." Cosmic eyed the recruits a bit more sternly for this: "I highly suggest that you not try and get shot in this simulator. The settings have been set to High for this particular mission - meaning if you get shot by a blaster, you won't die, but you'll definitely feel like you will. Are there any questions?" No hands rose, "Good. Report to Landing Platform 0033X by thirteen hundred hours. Dismissed." - OOC:
- Recruits: Go ahead and report to the landing platform. Once everyone has arrived, go ahead and get your Lambda-Class shuttle to the designated landing zone. No need to "wait for others" because, since theres going to be potentially many of you, you will require more than one shuttle. Work together, read each other's posts before posting your own so as to prevent any story-mix ups and post-rewriting. Above all, have fun completing the objectives, and if you have any questions, feel free to ask in an OOC.
Merrick: I know you've got a story that you're making, but the recruits were wanting one immediately, so I just went ahead and created this on the spot. Yours can follow right after.
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE | Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6663 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | May 26, 2008 7:12:44 PM | | - OOC:
- Didn't see that a story had already been posted (or I forgot). Save this one for later.

Your story is here: http://comnet.imperialnetwork.com/topic/10237/
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE | Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6674 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 1, 2008 2:21:45 PM | | - OOC:
- This story has been re-opened! Start posting, folks! If you have any questions, feel free to ask in an OOC.
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE | Goshin7 ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 6 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 2, 2008 6:32:02 PM | | Private Goshin was sitting around the table, watching the exciting game of Sabacc, when suddenly, ol' Finney jumps up. "Attent Hut!" He cried. Goshin jumped up, saluting with one hand, and using the other behind his back to hurredly tuck his shirt in. It was General Cosmic. "At Ease" Cosmic said, and Goshin put down his hand. The General slowly walked around the room looking at everyone's uniform, then he handed Goshin a data pad. He quickly scanned it over, the handed it to the private beside him. General Cosmic continued on to tell about the mission, Goshin listened intently. Oh boy, my first mission he thought, Excitement showing on his face. That excitement ended however, when General Cosmic got to the part about it feeling like you were dying when you got shot. Goshin was still imagining the pain as General Cosmic left the room. He hurried to his bunk, grabbed his pack from under his bed, and started to pack. He was only taking what he needed. Goshin then proceeded to throw in his pack his thermal detonator, his C-22 Fragmentation grenades, his DC-15 pistol, his DC-17M Interchangeable combat system, and his E-11. Last was his Katarn Clone Commando Armor, which he put on. Goshin pulled out his datapad, he went to the directory, and found General Cosmic, and sent him a messege that read: "General, this is Private Goshin, I happen to own a Aratech 74-Z Speeder Bike, should I bring it for this mission." A few minutes later, he got his answer. "Yes, I think you will be able to use it on this mission. Bring it in case you need it." Goshin looked at the time, he had 23 minutes until he had to be at the landing platform. He grabbed his pack and went to the bunker that had his bike. He checked it out from the man there. He also borrowed a transport unit to haul it to the landing platform. A heavy droid was driving. He got in the passenger seat. "Where are we going" said the droid, in it weird monotone voice. "Landing Platform 0033X" Goshin replied. They arrived, Goshin checked the time, he had 6 minutes to spare. He was the first one there. He loaded his pack and Speeder Bike on one of the Lambda's, but he kept his DC-15 in his holster. You never know what could happen in 6 minutes, plus, he liked being armed all the time, it gave him a sense of power. "You're here early." Came General Cosmic voice behind him. "Yes sir." Goshin said. "That's good, in my opinion, if you are early, you're on time, if you're on time you're late, and if you're late, well then you're in for a serious butt-kicking." The General said with a smile. "Yes sir, I agree sir." They gave each other a salute, then Goshin boarded his ship. Private Goshin7
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 2, 2008 7:47:20 PM)] [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 3, 2008 11:20:30 PM)] [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 3, 2008 11:22:56 PM)] | Wildstorm ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 3 Total Posts: 12 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 2, 2008 9:50:16 PM | | Wildstorm sat in the back of the room alone and quiet in this whirlwind of activity. Today would be her first day of full participation in Hellgate Squad. She had to admit, to herself if to no one else, that she was eager to get started. Wild kept such feelings locked inside for the time being, not that anyone here would notice. She allowed her grey eyes to wander the room freely, taking in everything and studying all the faces she could get a clear view of. When her eyes fell on CPL Finney she couldn't help but smirk. I'll just bet these boys feel like glorified babysitters. Wildstorm thought as she shook her head. To be quite honest she felt like she was being watched. She shook the feeling away and looked up as the door opened and admitted a rather dignified looking man holding a datapad. It took her only a moment to recognize this man as General Cosmic. "Atten Hut!" Finney called to the room, and the reaction was immediate. Wildstorm gave herself one last mental go over as she saluted with the rest of the trainees. Satisfied with the way she looked and presented herself she was more than willing to relax as the general gave the at ease order. Listening intently to Cosmic brief them on simulated mission they would all be participating in, Wild couldn't help but feel a bit anxious for the first time since joining up. She took a deep breath and quelled the fluttering inher stomach and recieved the datapad from the trainee next to her. She went over what was there carefully and then passed it on. As General Cosmic finished his briefing and walked out, Wildstorm had to stop and take stock of herself before leaving the room and heading to her own quarters. There she grabbed the equipment she would need not the least of which would be her armor. She also grabbed her E-11 Blaster Rifle and her personal DH-17 Blaster Pistol and a vibroblade she had brought with her in all her wanderings. She reasoned that at least two ration packs would not be a hinderance to her movements and so she packed those as well. At last she felt she was ready to head out. To conserve her energy for what was to come, Wildstorm took a tram car to the landing platform. She was not the first there but she didn't see any others there either and she was still early. She didn't waist time making her way completely onto the platform where another trainee she had seen in the training room was also waiting. She gave a nod to him and took a look around. Still no others had shown up but that didn't bother as much as her own anxiety did. The other trainee looked to be chipper and in high spirits as he chatted with General Cosmic. She gave Cosmic a nod without a word and also boarded the shuttle behind.... ...What's his name again? Wildstorm asked herself. Thats right, Goshin.She sat there waiting for a moment then decided to say something. "Hey, I'm Wildstorm." She said lamely and held out her hand to him. He looked at for moment then took it and shook it firmly. "Goshin." He replied shortly but not unkindly. Wildstorm nodded and looked out her view port to watch for the others, without saying another word. TRN/PVT Wilstorm/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadath/VEA/VE [This message has been edited by Wildstorm (edited June 2, 2008 11:18:35 PM)] | Cursed ComNet n00b [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 3 Total Posts: 90 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 12:14:55 AM | | Anden sat in the back of the room, Private Wildstorm sat in the back of the room with him, her curly hair sat right next to his shoulder. Two paces to his left was a bag full of his weaponry, and his helmet. Anden wore his Swamp Trooper Armor, the DC-15S Blaster Rifle lay in his bag with his S-5 Blaster Pistol-with refills of tibana gas. High General Cosmic, Anden's Idol stood in the front of the room, and opened his mouth to speak.
"For some of you, this is your first mission. For others, this may be your second. Nevertheless, this will be a first for all of you. That mission will be unlike anything you've experienced before: you're going directly into the heart of enemy fire and behind enemy lines." Cosmic closed his lips, and a few "oohs" floated through the air. Anden had just to wait to see what this mission was about. "Your objective is within a guarded military bunker on a sticky, hot jungle planet. Your target is a New Republic Colonel by the name of Trunx. He'll be securely guarded by numerous NR guards, and the militia will be out and about in the jungle as well in scout patrols. You will be dropped in via Lambda-Class shuttle five clicks before enemy lines. You will need to get behind enemy lines in order to eliminate your target and eliminate any opposing forces. You will do this all on foot, so this will also act as a test to be sure you're in fit condition." Cosmic eyed the recruits a bit more sternly for this: "I highly suggest that you not try and get shot in this simulator. The settings have been set to High for this particular mission - meaning if you get shot by a blaster, you won't die, but you'll definitely feel like you will. Are there any questions?"
None of the Private's hands rose, Anden got out of his seat and picked up the bag that was next to him-better get his weaponry that he needed and such. A sniper would be useful, along with thermal detonators, maybe even a DC-15A Blaster Rifle. Grabbing a datapad Anden walked out of the room, Anden would have to rest up before this trip.
Grabbing his helmet out of his Bag Anden put it on, his photoreceptors began to scan everything around him. Now moving down into a locker, Anden grabbed a DC-15X Sniper Rifle, five Thermal Detonators, and numerous other gadgets and gizmos. The utility belt on Anden's chest now held 20 clips of Blaster Gas, two S-5 Heavy Blaster Pistols, five thermal detonators, and TD.2 3 Electrobinoculars. He was set.
Taking the tram to the landing pad, Anden met up with Wildstorm. This was going to be easy. | Goshin7 ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 13 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 9:24:16 AM | | Apart from small talk with Wildstorm, and a pathetic attempt at a conversation with Andar, the shuttle ride was pretty silent. Goshin sat up from, he had a clear view of the pilot and co-pilot's controls, and watched them, imagining he was a navy pilot. "Pilot!" Goshin yelled, over all of the noise. "What?" The pilot replied, in the same loud voice. "How long till we get there?" Goshin asked. "Roughly 45 minutes." The pilot replied. "This is insane, we only have three recruits. I hope very much that there is another shuttle coming. I don't know if three can do it." Goshin thought to himself. "So, Goshin, what's your real name?" Wildstorm asked, with a bored tone. "H Liesen" Goshin replied. "Mine is Sara Frost." "Nice name." "Thanks, your's too." "Thanks." There it was again, silence. Goshin couldn't wait till we got to this mysterious swampy planet. That's where the action was. Goshin craved and needed action as much as needed water and food. He was not the type to sit around on a shuttle. At least if there wasn't action, there must be something going on. "15 minutes till we get there!" Yelled the pilot, toward the back of the ship. "Okay" Goshin said. "Time to plan out our next move." - OOC:
- cursed, all that equipment you claim you have, needs to be bought at imperial center. you can't just have stuff.
Private Goshin
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 3, 2008 9:25:07 AM)] [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 3, 2008 9:26:47 AM)] [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 3, 2008 9:29:55 AM)] | Ibram Tyrol ComNet Member  [VE-NAVY] Senior Chief Petty Officer [VE-VEEC] Journalist Post Number: 403 Total Posts: 710 Joined: Nov 2007 Status: Online | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 10:35:56 AM | | - OOC:
- Sorry to butt in, but 'Private Cursed' is in fact Leading Crewman Zhar Bacredi from the Navy. He has all of those Items in his Navy account I believe.
"I'm no Physician, but there appears to be a dagger through my chest."
- Innocence is the cost of Justice
Senior Chief Petty Officer Ibram Tyrol Viper Squadron Squadron Executive Officer We fly, you die
----------------------------------- VEN XO/CPO Ibram Tyrol/Viper 9/mSSD Atrus/1W/1FL/VEN/{=*A*=}{=*SA*=}/[NER]
VEEC Ibram Tyrol/WS Ibram/Lotaith/VET/VE | Goshin7 ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 15 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 10:50:26 AM | | - OOC:
- whether or not he is 2 people, he cant use items from other accounts, (i might be wrong), but that wouldnt make sense, they're 2 seperate characters, nomatter who controls them.
Private Goshin
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE | Drakar ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 7 Total Posts: 43 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 1:03:23 PM | | Drakar was sitting at the table surrounded by his fellow recruits when all of a sudden CPL Finney yelled "Atten Hut". Everyone immediately snapped into an erect position followed by a sharp salute. General Cosmic opened his mouth and began to speak,
"For some of you, this is your first mission. For others, this may be your second. Nevertheless, this will be a first for all of you. That mission will be unlike anything you've experienced before: you're going directly into the heart of enemy fire and behind enemy lines." Cosmic closed his lips, and a few "oohs" floated through the air. Anden had just to wait to see what this mission was about. "Your objective is within a guarded military bunker on a sticky, hot jungle planet. Your target is a New Republic Colonel by the name of Trunx. He'll be securely guarded by numerous NR guards, and the militia will be out and about in the jungle as well in scout patrols. You will be dropped in via Lambda-Class shuttle five clicks before enemy lines. You will need to get behind enemy lines in order to eliminate your target and eliminate any opposing forces. You will do this all on foot, so this will also act as a test to be sure you're in fit condition." Cosmic eyed the recruits a bit more sternly for this: "I highly suggest that you not try and get shot in this simulator. The settings have been set to High for this particular mission - meaning if you get shot by a blaster, you won't die, but you'll definitely feel like you will. Are there any questions?"
Drakar had been waiting for this opportunity for a long time and he knew that they would have to learn to work together in order to succeed. When the General left he quickly headed toward his bed.
He began to eye his pack which held his E-11 Blaster Rifle, his PT-212 Vibroblade, his rations, his 8- gauge shotgun, his frag grenades and his DL-54 Automatic pistol. He figured he better take all of it just in case. After putting his last piece of body armour on followed by his helmet he grabbed his pack and headed for the Landing Platform 0033X.
When he arrived he saw General Cosmic, who he saluted and then was told to board this shuttle. As he boarded he saw that the first shuttle had already taken off. If the rebels threaten us or put us down we'll burn their cities to the ground [This message has been edited by Drakar (edited June 3, 2008 1:11:33 PM)] | Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6679 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 2:00:35 PM | | General Cosmic could feel the excitement emanating from the recruits from where he stood in the control tower above Platform 0033X - fear, however, was also interwoven with that excitement. He watched as the first Lambda-Class shuttle departed from the platform and began to make its way to the rendezvous point - the shuttle only had three troops in its durasteel belly. The Stormtrooper Corps Academy had only a handful of recruits, but Cosmic thought it appropriate to use more than one shuttle so the troops could experience the realism of a multi-craft combat landing. The Lambda-Class shuttles had a troop capacity of 20, so most recruits will probably be wondering why there's so much room. Cosmic walked over to the control station behind him and opened a channel to the remaining Lambda-Class shuttle on the platform. "Alpha-9 and Zeta-4, this is Control, come in over." Zeta-4, the Lambda already en route, responded first, "Aye Control, we're here." Alpha-9 was next to report in with a similar response. "Zeta-4 and Alpha-9, be sure you arrive at the rendezvous point together. I want the troops to experience this combat landing as a squad. Zeta, if you slow your pace down a bit until Alpha can get up off the ground - travel together, is that understood?" "Yessir" came from both shuttles. "And you know that Corporal Finney will guide the trainees into the simulation room, yes?" queried Cosmic. "Yes sir," came Alpha. "He'll be riding with me. Both myself and Zeta will make a combat-zone landing, and Corporal Finney will then lead the trainees into the designated simulation room." "Very good. Control out." Cosmic clasped his hands behind him as he made his way back to the view port. He didn't specify what weapons to bring on this simulation, so he was curious to see what each trooper would bring along with them. Bringing too much would not be wise because it'd hinder your mobility, and the weight of all those items would decrease your stamina. Not bringing enough may cause you to use up all your ammo with no back-up weapon. Cosmic spotted Corporal Finney coming up to Alpha-9 with a few more trainees trailing behind. Hopefully, everything will go well, and Finney will successfully lead them into the simulation facility. - OOC:
- Be sure your Lambda-Class shuttles arrive at the rendezvous point at the same time! Once you're there, Corporal Finney must lead you to the simulation training facility not too far from the rendezvous point. Once everyone is in this facility, the simulation of a jungle planet will begin. You may use your weapons, but all of the weapons that are firing back at you are not real (nor are the characters firing them) - they are realistic-looking holograms. As mentioned in my first post, if you are wounded by blaster fire, it will hurt just as much as a real blaster.
I'd like to re-emphasize the importance of landing together, and starting the simulation once everyone is inside.
If you have any questions, feel free to ask.
(Cursed can have his gear. Cursed: just be sure to transfer your equipment from your Navy to your Army character.
Lambda-Class shuttle: http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Lambda-class_T-4a_shuttle
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE [This message has been edited by Cosmic (edited June 3, 2008 2:01:41 PM)] [This message has been edited by Cosmic (edited June 3, 2008 2:02:19 PM)] | Goshin7 ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 19 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 11:03:59 PM | | - OOC:
- who is everybody? isit just myself, wildstorm, drakar, and cursed, or are waiting for someone?
Private Goshin
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE | Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6681 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 11:33:31 PM | | - OOC:
- If it's just you guys, then that's all. The new recruits may participate as well - but I'm not sure they'll enter themselves in for this story.
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE | Goshin7 ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 20 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 3, 2008 11:39:41 PM | | Private Goshin
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 4, 2008 8:59:41 AM)] | Goshin7 ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 21 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 4, 2008 10:05:30 AM | | Goshin, Anden, and Wildstorm were about to start some brief planning when Goshin's datapad vibrated in his pocket.
"I have a messege." he said.
"It says: Goshin, i don't know if you know me, but my name is Drakar, i am a fellow trainee, and i am coming in another ship behind. My pilot said we are arriving at the same time, for some reason having to do with us getting the experience of landing together. Anyway, how many are in that shuttle?"
Goshin pulled out the stylus and began scribbling a messege back.
"Three, including me."
It was a moment before Drakar responded back.
"Okay, i'm the only one in this shuttle, so we will have four. See you later.
Private Drakar."
"Ok well four is better than three." Goshin said to nobody in particular.
The three conversed a little before it was time to land. It turned out Drakar was right, because as they were coming onto the surface, another ship was next to them. They grabbed their gear and stepped outside, Drakar was already there.
Goshin opened his back. His grenades and thermal detonator he put on his belt, his DC-15 pistol in his holster, his E-11 he put on his belt, his DC-17M Interchangeable combat system in his hands, and his Vibroblade was already in a compartment on his commando armor. He went to the cargo hold of his shuttle, and got his speeder bike.
Everyone else was doing the same as him, equipping their gear. Once everyone was done, we followed Corporal Finney, into a mysterious building. Private Goshin
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 4, 2008 11:23:26 AM)] [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 4, 2008 11:26:51 AM)] | Blaze26 ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 6 Total Posts: 6 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 4, 2008 4:23:23 PM | | Blaze stood nervously in te shuttal waiting for it to land.
He Did not pay much Attention to the mission all he knew that they had to take out some NR officer or someting along those lines.
"I wouder why there are so few people in here?" he Woundered. including him there were four people.
after looking around a few more times he sat down and fell asleep. [This message has been edited by Blaze26 (edited June 4, 2008 4:38:45 PM)] | Goshin7 ComNet Novice  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 28 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 4, 2008 10:28:12 PM | | - OOC:
- okay, im not trying to sound bossy, but you kinda ruined then story. You have to post about how you got there, you can't just appear out of nowhere. you being there is not in anybody elses post. could you please edit that or something.
P.S. you might want to make it longer, while your at it.
Private Goshin
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE | Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6688 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 1:16:03 AM | | - OOC:
- Your concerns are appreciated, Goshin, but I'd appreciate it if you left the instructing to myself and the Academy staff.

Blaze: thanks for posting on the story - it's a good start. However, this is what I'd like to see more of:
1) Proof read your posts a bit more - make sure everything checks out (spelling and grammar).
2) Expand the story - make the posts longer by adding more detail. Don't be afraid to include your character's personal thoughts and descriptions of the environment.
3) It's best to read the previous posts before writing your own so your post does not disrupt the story in any way (or cause overlap, etc.)
Other than that, it's a good first attempt, and I look forward to seeing more progress from you.
Goshin: The datapad isn't a cell phone. I doubt it vibrates and has text messaging capabilities.  http://starwars.wikia.com/wiki/Data_pad
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE [This message has been edited by Cosmic (edited June 5, 2008 1:17:02 AM)] | Cursed ComNet n00b [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 5 Total Posts: 90 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 9:44:43 AM | | - OOC:
- Goshin7, you are not his superior! Nor are you his lesser! You can't order other people around! And thanks Ibram.
The Kask
Anden sat in one of the two rooms of the Kask, the Lambda-Class Shuttle that was escorting the three troops to their rendezvous point. From there Corporal Finney would lead them to the simulator-hopefully on a LAAT Transport. Starting to sweat in his Swamp Trooper Suit Anden took the helmet off, and pushed his head down 25 degrees. The Camo buttons did not display in his helmet, and one of them was the Air Conditioning Conduit. Pressing the center button Anden felt a cool rush of air move into his suit, and now placing his helmet back on his head A/C ran into his head as well. He could feel his short hair brushing against his helmet as the cool air brushed him. Just before he had left Anden had grabbed yet another DC-15A Blaster Rifle, when he was at the simulator he would decide if he wanted to use the DC-15S or the DC-15A Blaster Rifle. He looked to his left, Goshin has his DC-15s Pistol Holstered, while Wildstorm was brushing up her weapons. He wondered if this trio of people could pull it off, but if Andar was sniping, or doing something of use they might be able to... just might. But Anden swore if Goshin got them in a predicament they couldn't get out of, he would have hell to pay. As these blaster bolts did hurt like they actually would. Landing "We're comin' in a lil' bumpy! Sit tight!" The Pilot's voice rang through the ship, and the three in the cabin rocked back and forth as the ship made a landing. Anden could hear the landing gear move out, and as the Kask landed. "We have landed, this is Lieutenant Colonel Al-Cygba, thank you for flying." The trio exited the ship on the retractable lift, their weapons in hand. Corporal Finney stood next to two LAAT Transports, one was filled with three Scout Troopers, while the other had two pilots, and that was it. "Welcome Privates, or soon-to-be Private First Classes. We are glad to have you here, and Private Goshin take your speeder and follow this transport. Type the transponder into your Nav. System, Alpha-Zeta-1-0-Esk-83. We will be having our transponder on at all times, and we will arrive at the base shortly. Keep on our tail Private, or you can come with us?" Corporal Finney, dressed in a finely tuned Stormtrooper Off Duty uniform talked to the group. The other LAAT Transport lifted off and went to the distance. "No Finney, I will-" Goshin started but was interupted. "That is Corporal to you! Private!" Corporal Finney said, raising a long index finger. "Corporal, I will head on my speeder." Goshin walked off. "Rude ass, Private Wildstorm.. and Anden is it? Follow me please." Corporal Finney lead the two to the LAAT Transport, and got on. One Stormtrooper accompanied them, Anden had a DC-15A Rifle slung over his shoulder, while his DC-15S was on his hip. Two Blaster Pistols, S-5, and O-6 were clipped to his belt, while a Vibroknife was attacked to his ankle. Anden looked over at Wildstorm and wondered what she had planned for this mission. The terrain of this grassy planet was visible from the Transport, extremely breathtaking. Two TIE Fighters-Navy Pilots-flew close to them, and then left for their destination. Transports could be seen entering and exiting one location, a bunker-much like the Endor style Shield Bunker that Anden had studied. The structure was composed of turret emplacements on the surroundings, two sky briges that connected two of the largest buildings, and in the center was the actual base. The base stood at close to six stories, and from what Anden's helmet was reading, it had seventeen floors underground. Hundreds of life forms walked around in the base, while the landing pads on the outer part of the base were occupied by transports and fighters. Two AT-TEs walked out of the main entrance, and onto a landing pad. Suddenly, two LAATs modeled for AT-TE pickup swooped down and set their bodies on the AT-TEs. Anden watched as they picked the two Walkers up and lifted them off into the distance. The breathtaking view was now overtaken by the base. The LAAT Landed on one of the Landing Pads closer to the base, the one Stormtrooper with them got out first. His back tag read KAI-19101, and the rank was PFC, Private First Class KAI-19101. Corporal Finney took a long stride off of the transport, his pistol holstered. "Follow me please." Corporal Finney said, motioning his hands in a: Come here signal. Suddenly a speeder pulled up near the pad. Wildstorm and Anden got out of the LAAT, closely behind them a transport landed, and Drakar got out. Finney looked as Goshin got out of his speeder, hair swept back more than ever. "Good to see you, Private! Move along!" "Yes, following you." Goshin replied as they all entered the base, the LAAT Transport let a little hum, and left the Trainees with Corporal Finney, his protege, and a hum from the LAAT. Brushing past a large C-3 Droid, a Wookiee, and a variety of humans Anden started for a second. Blinking he realized this was Kaph Squadron, he watched as they walked out and into the LAAT Transport, it then lifted off. - OOC:
- Goshin, your moving to the base is not descriptive, I think we should have a vote on whos Going to the Base we should use... anyway.
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A datapad was a small, usually low cost, electronic device used for storing information.
[This message has been edited by Cursed (edited June 5, 2008 9:59:43 AM)] [This message has been edited by Cursed (edited June 5, 2008 3:47:26 PM)] | Wildstorm ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 4 Total Posts: 12 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 9:53:41 AM | | - Code: Select all
OOC: Goshin7 please do not reply to this untill I have had the chance to. I have to be to work just now but I would like to reply before you take us further. Thank you.
TRN/PVT Wilstorm/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadath/VEA/VE | Goshin7 ComNet Novice  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 31 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 10:02:17 AM | | - OOC:
- no problem.
cursed: why can't you just write off of mine? i wrote it as if the base was right by were we landed, just stick to that please, or else it is going to be confunsing and complicated.
Private Goshin
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 5, 2008 10:03:22 AM)] [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 5, 2008 10:09:03 AM)] [This message has been edited by Goshin7 (edited June 5, 2008 10:10:29 AM)] | Drakar ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 8 Total Posts: 43 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 3:29:13 PM | | - OOC:
- And what happened to there being four of us including myself. Not just three.
TRN/PVT Drakar/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadath/VEA/VE
If the rebels threaten us or put us down we'll burn their cities to the ground | Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6696 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 3:48:24 PM | | - OOC:
- Apparently everyone is confused, so once Wildstorm posts, I'm going to progress the story.
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE | Goshin7 ComNet Novice  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 37 Total Posts: 71 Joined: Jun 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 4:05:48 PM | | - OOC:
- cosmic, why don't you delete all of these ooc posts (including this one) and ill remove the ooc parts of my posts, so the story is less cluttered up.
Private Goshin
TRN/PVT Goshin7/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadeth/VEA/VE | Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6697 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 4:22:37 PM | | - OOC:
- I'll do that if this happens again. For the mean time, I'll leave the posts for now because if I delete the posts, the post-count for that particular individual will decrease, and I'm not sure if folks will be all that appreciate of that.
Once the story continues, however, we should have little problems.
Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE | Drakar ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 11 Total Posts: 43 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 8:25:19 PM | | - OOC:
- So who are waiting on to continue the story here?
Private Drakar
TRN/PVT Drakar/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadath/VEA/VE | Wildstorm ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 5 Total Posts: 12 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 8:44:25 PM | | === The Kask ===Wildstorm sat quietly and patiently next to Anden in one of the rooms of the Kask, thinking about the mission ahead. Yes, it would be a simmulated one but she knew all to well from her year of wandering that simulations could be almost as real as real life. She took a deep breath and looked over her weapons again. She was glad that at the last minute she had decided to turn around and grab the DC-15s blaster pistol that she had recently bought. You never know when you might need another firearm. She thought. === The Landing ===Feeling a shudder from the air craft they were on, Wildstorm instinctively shifted toward the exit. The pilot was right about the landing being a bit bumpy but otherwise it was rather uneventful. Wild knew that if this had been the real thing in the midst of blaster fire and who knows what else, it would have been a hell of a lot bumpier. She wondered Idley if Private Drakar's shuttle had been just as bumpy as their own had been. Shrugging she made a mental note to ask him about it later. "We have landed, this is Lieutenant Colonel Al-Cygba, thank you for flying." The jovial pilot commed to the three privates in the Kask's belly. "Don't have too much fun now." He laughed as the trio exited. Wild rolled her eyes as she put her helmet on her head and took a deep breath. Spotting Corporal Finney, Wildstorm raised a hand in greeting and smiled beneath her helmet. She would never admit it but she did feel better to see at least one more experienced person among them. Looking around she also noticed that Drakar's ship had landed next to the Kask a few yards away and that the other private was making his way toward the small group. She gave a nod in his direction and turned her attention back to what was going on around her. Before entering the first LAAT with the rest of her group and Corporal Finney, minus Goshin as he had brought an alternative piece of transportation, Wildstorm took one more look at her stock of weapons. Her E-11 blaster rifle hung from her right shoulder, her personal DH-17 Blaster Pistol was clipped to her left hip and her DC-15s blaster pistol was clipped to her right hip. Her vibroblade was, like Anden's, was attatched to her ankle. She felt good about what she had brought with her, and so she entered the LAAT behind Anden and sat comfortably. The ride to the facility was breathtaking and beautiful. She had never seen this side of the planet before but she was glad that she got the chance to before her first "Mission". Otherwise the ride for her was rather boring, adding to her nerves. Finally they had arrived. As she got out Drakar's LAAT arrived at the same time that Goshin did on his speeder. Moving as one, the four privates followed Corporal Finney to the entrance. "Well guys. Here we go." She said suddenly smiling. TRN/PVT Wilstorm/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadath/VEA/VE [This message has been edited by Wildstorm (edited June 5, 2008 8:48:24 PM)] | Drakar ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 12 Total Posts: 43 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 5, 2008 11:18:11 PM | | When the shuttle finally landed Drakar walked out only to see the other three privates a couple of yards away. This was somewhat of a relief as how he had been riding solo in the shuttle. He noticed wildstorm give him a quick nod so he returned it as he approached his fellow trainees.
As he approached he began to take in the unfamiliar territory for the first time in a long time. It was the first time he was able to take a deep breath in a long time. When the LAAT's arrived Goshin pulled up at the same time. Drakar could now put a face with a name. As they were following CPL Finney suddenly Wildstorm spoke up, "Here we go".
Drakar wondered what would come next along with his fellow trainees. As he casually walked behind CPL Finney he kept a hand on his Vibroblade that was fixed on the back of his armour. He was calm as usual, but anxious and excited at the same time because it was his first mission. The only thing he had to depend on was his armaments and his fellow privates. Finally Drakar spoke to CPL Finney asking, "Where are we headed?" Private Drakar
TRN/PVT Drakar/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadath/VEA/VE [This message has been edited by Drakar (edited June 5, 2008 11:21:24 PM)] | Cosmic ComNet Marshal  [VE-ARMY] General [VE-DJO] Krath Oracle [VE-VEEC] Chairman Post Number: 6698 Total Posts: 7074 Joined: Sep 2000 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 6, 2008 12:49:40 AM | | The simulation facility was one click out from where the trainees had landed, so some were thinking why they hadn't landed a bit closer to their destination. Corporal Finney lead the single-file line, dressed in his usual on-duty military attire with a small bag dangling from his grasp. Behind him was Wildstorm, Goshin, Cursed, Drakar, and Blaze. The recruits' eyes widened slightly as they came up to the large building - it was truly a magnificent sight. The building was domed-shaped, and seemed to have a diameter of at least half a mile. "Here we are," said Finney, making an about-face. "Alright, so you guys are going to complete the mission objectives General Cosmic presented to you in the barracks back on base. Here are your datapads," Finney reached into the bag he was holding and pulled out five datapads and began handing them out. The recruits quickly scrolled through the content before placing the datapads into one of their utility belt storage compartments. Finney motioned for them to follow him as he began making his way toward the entrance to the facility. Upon entering, the recruits were met with a very large strange empty room. The floors, walls, and domed ceiling were covered in a very strange paint and what seemed to be billions, perhaps even trillions, of tiny mirror-like reflectors. "Be sure your gear is ready. The simulation will begin in a few moments." Finney turned around and began making his way up a near-hidden stairwell that lead into an overhead control room. His voice came on speaker a moment later, "Trainees, the simulation will begin in two minutes. I suggest you take this time to check your equipment." The recruits quickly did so, and waited anxiously for the simulation to begin. They all looked at each other, perhaps somewhat hoping to feel some reassurance if they knew the other person was just as nervous as they were. "Alright people," began Finney's voice. "The simulation will begin in three... two... one..." The lights to the entire facility suddenly died, and they were left in pure darkness. A moment later, strange lights began flashing all around them, and a jungle scenery slowly flickered into view. It wasn't long before the recruits found themselves in the middle of a jungle so realistic that they could see the liquid buildup on their armor from the humidity. A few frogs began chirping, and some other unrecognizable sounds emerged from somewhere in the vicinity. "This is amazing," said Wildstorm, making a 360-view around her. Goshin nodded, "It's quite impressive." "How is this even possible..." whispered Drakar, slowly taking a few steps forward and touching a nearby leaf. "I can't even imagine how long it'd take to construct a facility such as this." Blaze looked up in awe at the canopy above - beams of sunlight broke through the canopy leaves with such aggressive precision. Cursed let out a small sigh of awe before finally reaching into his utility belt to grab his datapad. The others did the same once they had taken in the new reality they had been placed in. "Ok," Cursed began, "Let's figure out what we're going to do. According to the information General Cosmic provided us, there's three scouting patrols in the jungle about two clicks away from the actual New Republic military bunker. It doesn't say how many there are in each party, however." "That should be our first priority then," pitched in Goshin. Wildstorm nodded, "We should tread carefully through this jungle then. We'll want to spot them first, not the other way around. There's only five of us, and if it turns out that there's 8 or more in a scouting party, they'll be able to easily flank our position." "Perhaps we should split up then?" queried Blaze. "We will be able to locate the three scouting parties a lot faster that way, and we won't cause as much noise if we are in smaller groups." "Sounds good," said Drakar. "Ok, let's also get the other objectives down." He pulled out his datapad and began reading down the list. "Once we take care of the scouting party, we'll have to gain entrance into the military bunker." He looked up at the rest of his squad, "Military bunkers are usually locked down at all times for security reasons. We should all check the scouting patrols' bodies for security access cards to gain entry to the bunker." Everyone nodded in agreement. "The next thing to do," continued Drakar, "Is to get to Colonel Trunx and take him out." Blaze spoke up next, "He's probably going to be well-guarded, and somewhere in the center of the bunker. The bunker itself shouldn't be all that large - it's a military bunker after all." "Which means," started Goshin, "That there's probably going to be maybe twelve or more guards stationed inside. We'll need to use the corners of the corridors to our advantage, and take cover with them." Drakar nodded, "I think we're all set then. It's just a matter of choosing teams. Since there's five of us, I think it'd be best if we split into two groups so one of us doesn't have to go off alone. I say myself, Blaze, and Cursed can be Alpha squad. Goshin and Wildstorm can be Omega. Everyone good?" All nodded in unison. Wildstorm spoke next, "Once you've located a patrol team, be sure to relay your coordinates and their head-counts to everyone else. Also let us know when you take them out so we can keep a count on how many scouting parties remain. Once we're through with them, we'll meet up one hundred yards before the main bunker entrance to regroup. Agreed?" "Agreed." came the response from all trainees. "Great, so," Drakar looked down at his datapad. "Let Operation Immortalis begin." Cleric "Cosmic" Vor'soth ----------------------- Stormtrooper Corps Commander of Training, General CoT/GN Cosmic/HCA-3/Tadath/VEA/VE [OPE][OTH][OPA][EW1][CoR][CDS][IH][GS][BC][LM][SoS][CRoM][CoH][PoC][MSM][SCP][SoA][IOC] ----------------------- Dark Jedi Order Dark Lord of the Krath, Krath Oracle DLK-SL/KO Cosmic/Lion 1-1/Lopen/VEDJ/VE [VP][WoS2][KC1][SoY][EoP][OAK] ----------------------- Engineering Corps Chief Operating Officer, Chairman COO/CHM Cosmic/Lotaith/VET/VE | Wildstorm ComNet n00b  [VE-ARMY] Private Post Number: 8 Total Posts: 12 Joined: May 2008 Status: Offline | RE: Immortalis | June 6, 2008 3:09:21 AM | | === Inside the Simulation Facility- Before the start of the sim ===Whatever Wildstorm had been expecting in this facility, was not what she saw. It was a huge empty room. The floors, walls, and domed ceiling were covered in a very odd paint and what seemed to be millions upon millions of tiny mirrors. She had never seen anything like it in all her life. The sheer space the room possessed was staggering and she had to make a full circle turn to take it all in. Wild hadn't even noticed that Corporal Finney had exited the room till she heard his crisp voice over the speaker, "Trainees, the simulation will begin in two minutes. I suggest you take this time to check your equipment." Wildstorm did as she was told and waited anxiously for the simulation to begin. Wild looked at each of her companions hoping that she wouldn't screw this entire thing up for any of them. She looked first at Cursed feeling a kind of strength emmenate from him that she took comfort in. Looking to Drakar she saw him shift slightly from foot to foot as he checked his equipment. Blaze remained quiet and slightly off to the side looking strangely uncomfortable, Wild fervently hoped that would change. Finally she let her eyes settle on Goshin. For once since meeting the guy she was almost glad for his eagerness, it kept her in perspective. "Alright people," Wildstorm heard Finney start, "The simulation will begin in three... two... one..." === The Simulation ===As soon as the darkness fell around her Wild felt a cold shiver travel up her spine. She hated the dark, but she sat it out without complaint. As soon as the sim bagan Wild began to realize that her regular stormtrooper armor may not have been the best choice. However, her concerns were quickly lost to the back of her mind as the image fully materialized around her. "This is amazing," Wild said, making a 360-turn. And it truly was. She had never been a part of a simulation so realistic. It was apparent from the comments of the others that her opinion was clearly shared. The aw however, was shortlived as everyone got back to the business of completing the mission set before them. Withdrawing her datapad from her pack, Wild scrolled through the information while listening to the rest and adding in her own bits from time to time. "I think we're all set then. It's just a matter of choosing teams. Since there's five of us, I think it'd be best if we split into two groups so one of us doesn't have to go off alone. I say myself, Blaze, and Cursed can be Alpha squad." Drakar's words broke through Wild's thoughts and she wondered if she should have checked the sound enhancer in her left ear before coming. She shrugged and listened as he continued. "Goshin and Wildstorm can be Omega. Everyone good?" Wild nodded with the rest of the gang and stood next to Goshin. "Once you've located a patrol team, be sure to relay your coordinates and their head-counts to everyone else. Also let us know when you take them out so we can keep a count on how many scouting parties remain. Once we're through with them, we'll meet up one hundred yards before the main bunker entrance to regroup. Agreed?" Wild said, and as everyone agreed. "Great, so," Drakar looked down at his datapad. "Let Operation Immortalis begin." === Operation Immortalis ===Wild smiled and tapped Goshin on the shoulder signaling that he should follow her. "We're going to go east from here." She said setting off with her E-11 held in both hands. She had a great sense of direction and she moved as quietly but as quickly as she could through the jungle underbrush east then north. "Goshin, lets do a thorough search of the area, if we have to circle back to get them all then thats what we do, I don't want any of them at our backs." Wild said to Goshin. "Why don't you go about three yards that way," She said pointing further on ahead of her. "Always stay in sight of each other but keep your eyes on the look out. Patrols don't always travel all together. Some are actually smart enough to send a scout ahead." "I understand. If I spot anything viable I'll signal with two comm clicks to let you know." Goshin said moving ahead of Wild to settle beside a tree to be sure he could be seen. Wild gave a thumbs up and signaled that they should move on. Keeping one eye on Goshin and one eye on the terrain ahead of her, Wild put one foot in front of the other and kept her head in the game. TRN/PVT Wilstorm/Echelon/STC Academy/Tadath/VEA/VE | |