Great start, Drakar.

If you would put your outline in the following format, that'd be great:



== Physical Appearance ==

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Height:
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Character's Full Name:
Physical Build:
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== Background History ==
(Give us some background history on your character: how he/she grew up, how life was, what his/her parents were like, etc.)


== Character's Personality ==
(Describe what your character's personality is like. Elaborate on his/her emotions and feelings in various situations, etc. Include your character's traits, skills, and flaws.)

Native Language: Basic
Hair Color: Brown
Eye Color: Blue
Skin Color: Tan
Height: 6'1
Weight: 207
Age: 21
Character's Full Name: Talak Drakar
Physical Build: Large muscular build with family tattoo covering his right shoulder and both parents initials tattooed on inside of bicep.
Homeworld: Corellia


== Background History ==
  Drakar grew up on Corellia as a child in one of the cities many mathmatical programs for engineering.  When he became a teenager he realized that he would not be able to make it as an engineer due to his not so great grades so he dropped out of his school.  His family never struggled financially because of the vast amounts of wealth his family name earned them. 

  After dropping out of school he started doing odd jobs around the family business in order to have a little of his own spending money. His mother was a banker and a self made woman who taught Drakar the importance of being able to get along with people in order to succeed.  His father was a machine of a soldier both mentally and physically which he also taught to Drakar so he could never have his will broken.  He watched his father go off to battle after battle and saw how much pride it brought upon his mother and he vowed to one day join to corp just like his father.

  He trained himself physically everyday in order to become a machine.  His father after returning from battle would tell Drakar of the glory of the battlefield.  He trained Drakar with many different types of rifles and swords so that he would be a master when it came to hand to hand combat.  Enrolled in the Corp 2 days before both his parents were murdered.

== Character's Personality ==
Drakar overall is a very easy going man who can get along with almost anyone.  He is a very hardworker and is also somewhat of a perfectionist. He was hit especially hard when he found out that both of his parents had been murdered 2 days after he left home.  One of his greatest weaknesses is his personal relationships he makes with his comrades.  He will do anything for the person standing next to him whether they will for him or not.  He believes in the betterment of the greater good.